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[FeliciaBlake<3]

Would anyone care to tell me what the rare pet is? =)

The pet is a suprise... this thread is mainly for creative pepole to show what thier good at<3

[xxazul63xx]

When will this competition end?

[FeliciaBlake<3]

febuary 14th, ill choose the winner the day before and so the winner will be pm'd and the other two winners will too.

[Roonil Wazlib]

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[Orangelake]

I have been working on this one for a long while and i dont want any copying


Chapter 1




It was a early sunday morning, I Heard my alarm go off, but I dont go to school today. "probobly my mom again'
I murmered just loud enough for my dog Amos to here me. I rubbed my eyes as I jumped of my bed, the floor was cold.
I started talking to Amos " you know Amos, it would be good if this routine changed, so I wouldnt get up and do the
same things everyday". I stared at Amos, he was staring back at me as if he could really understand me. I finally
opened my door a little crack just to see the bathroom door wide open, and my Younger sister blow-drying her hair.
I have two sisters, ones older and ones younger than me. As i opened my door wide enough I saw the kitchen, with
fried pancakes on the stove that looked really burnt. You really want me to eat that mum? I murmered. Of course
she said, you older sister is learning how to cook! and she made this. Mum, you know she can't cook! Well give her a
chance! *sigh* nevermind I am not hungry. Well if you have nothing better to do with your time Michael I suppose you
best walk your dog, or else he will be lazy like everyone else around here. As i walked my dog down the street, i met up
with my Friend, mabye it was a squirrel i see everyday but so what! .

Chapter 2

As i walked into my room, my dog was whimpering, oh right, I forgot to feed you. I sat down on the floor and dug through the closet until i found the doggy food. I poured the doggy food in my hand and let him eat it out of my palm. I washed my hands off and went back to my room. I stared out the window and saw all the little girls and boys playing with bikes or hopscotch, they all looked like friends. Only if i had a friend, i do have a friend but when we moved i havent seen him. I've been in this school for a year now and no friends, but a lot of enemies. I Looked out the window one last time and saw a shadow behind a little boy. I thought it was nothing, so I just went back to my normal life.
I turned on some music and then opened my window, I waited for the mail man to pass by then i ran and opened the door so Amos could get it but this time instead of waiting for him i walked on to my room. Just minutes later i heard a voice "Michaelllll oh michaelllllll come to ussss" I opened my eyes to see my little sister screaming at me to clean her room "NO" I shouted and slammed the door, but i didnt feel like hearing my sister say "mom! brother slammed the door in my face and hit me cause I said hi!" so I just ran out of the house. When i was far away from the house I saw a man in a black cloak, he pointed toward the north side of the road where the kids were playing and dissapered.I looked strangely at my dog, who followed me here, he was wagging his tail as if he couldnt see them. I thought it was just my imagination, besides people cant just disapear! When I decided to walk home it was 10:00, if i hadnt told my mom i was giving my dog a bathroom break but he couldnt decide where to go then i would've been in major trouble, because i didn't set the table. I went in my room and opened my bookbag, I forgot to do my homework.

Chapter 3

I woke up with my alarm going off, it was 7:00 in the morning and time for school, I jumped up and got dressed. After I was done I went to the bathroom and brushed my teeth, I went back in my room and got my bookbag from my bed. When I went in the kitchen there was fried eggs, but I wasn't in the mood for eating so I started walking to the bus stop, after about 5 minutes later my younger sister caught up with me at the bus stop, then my older sister. My older sister goes to the same school as me, but my younger sister goes to elementry, I go to middle. When the elementry bus stopped my little sister hopped on, I saw my bus come next, when it got here, I saw the same man that I saw yesterday except today he was holding 2 fingers. As i got on the bus, I sat beside Morgan. She was doing her homework. She didnt talk to me the whole way, and when we got off she shoved me, it must of been her bad day, evertime she has a bad day she blames it on me. I went straight to my locker without saying a word to anyone, then I finally got to class, The teacher said there was a new girl named Haley, she walked in and sat right next to me, because that was the only empty seat. Soon the teacher told us to do assignment with the person beside of you, so we did, we both got 100%, while everyone else got 70% 60% and 50%. After that we became friends. After school I saw the man again, he grabbed my shoulder and was pushing me toward the back of the school then my friend shouted my name, the man dissapeared and she asked me why I was walking over there and I said " didnt you see him!? that man?" huh? she said as she tugged me toward the busses.

Chapter 4

I got on my bus and Haley got on her's, her notebook slipped out of her bookbag wich was open, I grabbed it and was going to give it to her but she already got on her bus. I tried to go on her bus and give it to her but a teacher caught me and told me to get on my bus. Once I got on the bus I sat down in the first seat. I had the notebook in my hand for about 5 minutes before I got tempted to open it, I tried to stop myself but my Curiousity was stronger than my mind. I opened it and it had a bunch of scribbles in it, I only made out 1 word on the page, its said "ME" but is was scribbled over many times as if she was trying to hide it. I flipped to the next page to find drawings on it, one was a dragon and the other was a black cloak, I Couldnt see who was wearing it but I made out long hair. Over curiousity I flipped to the next page, only to find it blank. Morgan came to me and started being nosy, "watcha doin?" she said with her nose stuck up, "nothing, just nothing" thats BORING she said while walking away. I put the notebook in my bookbag so I wouldnt loose it. When i got home I discovered cops around my neighborhood, someone has been murdered. Once I walked over there, there was a big police line around our house, my mum was screaming her head of while my two sisters were standing there. It turns out that someone got murdered in our yard, but no one knows who did it, it was a little boy. Then i looked closer, it was the boy that had the shadow behind him that other day. They said they found a knife stabbed in him. I just walked to my room, I was tired of police, I was tired of laws, I was tired of school, I was tired of my life.


Chapter 5

I woke up and found my little sis' jumping on my bed, I forgot its my birthday I said to myself.I walked in the kitchen only to find my mother making a cake, and my older sister was setting up the table, when they got finished and all the guests got here, my mum told me to blow out the candles, but I ran, I ran out the door, into the city and down the road, i dont know what i was running for but something told me i would be in big danger if i stayed there any longer. When I finally got to the beginning of the woods iIstopped, I was now 6 miles away from my home, I musta ran for about a hour. I waited about at least 7 hours, it was dark. Real dark, I heard scuffeling behind me, I turned to see nothing there, then I felt a tap on my shoulder, I jerked back and punched, only to remember I had a knife in that hand, I felt warm blood splashing on my face, and i heard shouting. The street lights came on,only then i saw who it was.
I ran to my house Hoping that no one caught me. I went to my room, and looked out the window. The street lights here were on too, I stared hard at the place where the little boy was at, I didnt see anything but I felt like something was there. I ran out of my house and went straight to the place. I didnt see anything but i sensed something near me, I ignored it, because I was afraid to kill another person. I bent down toward the ground, I was rubbing it when I heard someone "Michael? is that you?"

Chapter 6

Morgan, I, uhh, happy to see you!*sarcastic*Well good! she said, because i was wonderin what the heck are you doing out here! i just heard about a murder and if you dont go to your house you might be the next victim! Mabye it will be you i said, rubbing my head where she kept slapping me. stop joken around michael and get home! *walks away* I slowly walk home in releif that no one knew it was me that killed someone. Then Morgan turned back, " but i am kind suspicious about the kill, cause your prabobly the only one that knew him exept mabye your mom. Yeah, i said in a low voice, And walked home.
After i got home my mom was on to me, she asked me thousands of questions before she was sure it wasnt me. Then i saw why everyone was suspicious about me, i looked inthe news and there was people on there, that were suspected of the crime, and i was in the list. I went to my room once agains and thought about earlier today when i killed someone, well i shouldnt really so earlier because it was 10:00 at night. The next day i walked to school, I caught up with Haley and handed her the notebook. She glared at me for the longest time and finally said "didja look in it?" well mabye a little, but___"thats not news to me, i knew you would" But how did you know? " i dropped in on purpose, i WANTED you to look in it. And also, they took over the cops already so dont trust them. Wait who did? I answered very confused. "THE UNKNOWNS!" She shouted at me. Wait what?! I answered hoping she would give me a better answer. "didnt you look at the back!? the whole story about them!? It was right there Michael!" Sorry, i said kinda hoping she would stop screaming, i DIDNT look in the back. *DING DING DING* well theres the morning bell! gatta go, she walked away as i was trying to remember what class i go to. then i remembered It was music class, the class i hate the most. After music i didnt have any problem with the other classes, I walked home also. I started thinking about the "unkown" people for a long moment of time and came to this.

Chapter 7

[Bubblenut]

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[SecretsLive]

This is my story, the link is here.

[Ourpawprints]

heres a link to the story I'm working on http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=57&t=985829

[FeliciaBlake<3]

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[Beebs]

I'd like to enter. Here's my entry. :3 Just a short PMD tale. (If you don't know what that is, it's Pokemon Mystery Dungeon.) This involves my team, Shelby and Ayla.

Burning. Burning. That's all the little vixen felt. The fire that swirled from her opponent's muzzle twisted and turned around Shelby's body, dancing in the wind. SHe could hear Ayla, her voice growing fainter. The burning felt...good. And Shelby knew why. But she had to pretend. Pretend that it hurt. Pretend she had given in. SHelby forced herself to slump, to keep the flames at bay, not to absorb them. A Houndoom, dark grey pelt with skeletal bones lining down his back, growled with pleasure, pointed tail whipping with pleasure at his rival's defeat. He lifted his muzzle heavenward and howled. Howled to the dark sky that shrouded his pack. Smaller, shrill voices joined his, making an ear-splitting sound that made Shelby's ears ring. The flames were slowly disappearing, but Shelby made sure to absorb some. Flash Fire sure could come in handy, especially when your rival didn't know about it. The Vulpix, with six tails lowered and head hanging limply to the side, kept one eye barely open to watch their progress. Somewhere behind her, she could hear Ayla screeching for her, the little fox-like Pokemon thrashing about to escape her enemies' grasps. Ayla was growing fainter; she was being dragged away.
"Without this mutt in the way," The Houndoom sneered. "We can continue with our plan." She watched the Houndoom until he was out of sight, only to be replaced by two Houndour who picked up Shelby in their rough grips. The Vulpix forced herself to stay limp, instead of snapping back. She watched out of the corner of her eye, as they grew closer, as the Houndoom slowly stalked up to Ayla, staring down at the Eevee. Ayla's normally sleek, light brown fur was now singed and blackened with soot, but her face revealed something Shelby thought she would never see. Anger. Rage. Fury. Her friend was actually ready to kill. "You'll never get away with this!" Ayla growled, coughing slightly. She didn't let so much as a whimper out when the Houndoom slapped her, leaving scratch marks acrossed her cheek. "You're different than the little, timid Eevee I met back in Gemstone Village." The Houndoom said softly, a grim smile on his face. "You've grown stronger. Normally, Shelby would have to be by your side just to keep you courageous, yet here she is. Dead." He spat the last word in her face, making her shake with anger.
"I can handle you without Shelby." She snarled softly. "Just because she's dead doesn't mean she's gone forever." The Houndoom laughed at her comment. "Ah, but here is where you're wrong my little fox!" He said, prowling around her slowly. "You say that, but how can you be so sure? DO you see her spirit wandering around you? No! Here she is, limp in my lackies' jaws, and yet you believe she's still here? Hah!" The Houndoom was about to say something else when Carly growled, "Shelby may have been the source of my bravery, but that doesn't mean I lost it just because she's..." Carly stopped, choked up a little, but the defiant glow in her eyes wanted Shelby to yowl out in pleasure. Her friend had actually learned that you can be brave without someone or something.
The Houndoom's smile faded into a frown, his mouth twitching into the beginnings of a growl. "If you're so sure," He began slowly. "Then why don't you fight?" Carly's devilish grin made Shelby almost tense up, if it wasn't for her plan. Already, the start of a vicious Flamethrower was billowing inside her mouth. "To avenge Shelby? I'd gladly kill you." Carly stood up, shaking slightly, but still standing. The Houndoom didn't give her anytime to prepare her first move; the dog lunged at her, barreling into her andusing and Iron Tail. Ayla retaliated with a Crunch, and Shelby heard bone crack as the Houndoom's shoulder blade was split. He howled with pain, and bit down on Ayla's neck, gently, just to watch her die slowly. Ayla was slowly growing weaker. SHe was already feeble enough, especially because of their ambush before. It was now or never. With her six tails glowing, she smacked one Houndoom in the face, making him drop her back legs with a sharp yelp.. Shelby twisted her head around to scorch her other captor. This Houndour had Flash Fire as well, as she watched the fire become abosorb into it, but the Houndour dropped her in shock. Shelby darted to the Houndoom, and with a roar, somersaulted in the air to smack the skeletal dog's head with Iron Tail. The Houndoom let go of Ayla quickly, wheeling around to face Shelby. Ayla's eyes twinkled dully as she saw Shelby, standing tall with an ugly snarl on her muzzle. "How...How did my Fire Blast not kill you?!" The Houndoom roared, his eyes wide with shock. Shelby grinned at him before saying. "You forget that one of the fire dogs. And with every Fire attack, you hurl at me, just like you do,"-She blew out a snake of fire, swirling it up one of her legs and absorbing it-"I take it all in." The Houndoom's expression went form shock to anger. The two stood tall for a minute, the Houndoom over Ayla, Shelby growling loudly, preparing to attack. The two suddenly sprang at each other, ready to tear one another apart.

Just a quick little story I put together...okay maybe not little. xD Vulpix, Eevee, Houndoom, and Houndour. If you don't know what those are, I suggest looking up picture of each. 83 I kind of left it like that as a cliff-hanger.