*** FREE RARE For Your Writing Skills:)

[SmileForMe]

ENDED 02/07/2012 WINNERS WERE ...

1st place: dutchgirl8 ::D
2nd place: xxazul63xx ::)
3rd place:-Invisible-::p

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1st place = One 2011 rare
2nd place = One 2009 pet
3rd place = Three 2010 pet

SmileForMe says: "Okay, post your story, and it can be a chapter or a short story, or a breif section of your original writtig (the part that captures the reader's attention)...


FeliciaBlake<3 And I, Host this thread so, no, we will not partisipate, but I'll let her take it away so you know how to play... "




FeliciaBlake<3 says: "Hello, I am a paaionate writter myself, but the insparation come so fast that I overlook obvios misspellings and grammer... Which can confuse the reader... So make sure your spelling is ledgable. If you have questions please leave them below your story in star form... like this ---> *My question is...?* So that way pepole wont confuse your question as apart of the story"

HERE IS AN EXAMPLE----> (READING IT IS NOT A REQUIREMENT)

“Anastasia!” Ellie screamed, frantically swaying from place to place. The entire left side of the mansion flooded with flames. The smoke was heavy and thick. Each breath Ellie took, felt like swallowing a lit cigarette. She covered her mouth with her dainty hands as her brownish-red-velvet hair matted in her soot covered, face. As the town’s men carried out limp bodies over their shoulders, the singed ceiling panels collapsed in shattered pieces. Ellie grasped what she had thought to be one of the town’s men. “Have you seen my sister?” Coughed Ellie, weak and weary. She looked up but seen nothing. Nothing but black smoke, in a red tinted room. Orange color flickered in and out of site. When she had managed to open her eyes, even partially, the smoke the heat wave from the flames smacked them shut.

Ellie stumbled on to the person, who’s face she had not seen. She felt the person turn to her direction, but no longer had the strength to look up. “Anastasia, my sister!” She coughed, nearly falling over. The arms of the stranger wrapped around her, cradling her like an infant.“That's her name, Anna, er, I mean, Anastasia, have you seen her?” She cried, nearly to the point of fetal position. More coughing bursted form her throat. The stranger put some kind of blanket around her. They had said words but she didn't hear them. But she knew what they were going to say. And she wasn't leaving with out her little sister. “I'm’ not going anywhere, shes my baby sister!” She said as the shadow pulled her into a corner. Ellie kicked and screamed with the last bit of clean air in her lungs. And her arms flailed until they lay limp. Tired, and on the brink of giving up She fell to the floor.......

And remember...
ENDS FEBRUARY 14TH

Kay, wrap it up for me, SmileForMe!

SmileForMe says: Okay, thanks FeliciaBlake<3, so basicly you post a Wattpad link or the actual story, and if you want you could message me or FeliciaBlake<3 your questinos, but dont post on here unlesss it's a story, if u want others 2 see ur Q, put it in *'s like this.... *My question is...?*

Oh, and the rewards are a suprize!

(btw mods, me and FeliciaBlake share a computer, i practically live at her house and dont have my own computer! lol.)

1st place = One 2011 rare
2nd place = One 2009 pet
3rd place = Three 2010 pet

[FeliciaBlake<3]

Clicke here to see my full chapter ---> http://www.wattpad.com/3125230-a-vampire%27s-knight-work-in-progress-1-last-day-of

[FeliciaBlake<3]

Tip: You could also use wattpad.com to post ur story, that way no one can copy&paste ur work. (But you'd have to post the link to ur work)

[SmileForMe]

:)

[Ourpawprints]

I've been working on this. Not finished yet though http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=57&t=985829

[FeliciaBlake<3]

@ourpawprints Please copy and paste the actual wrting to the thread, thank you:)

[Bubblenut]

This is mine :

NO COPYING:


Raven peeked out from her den, the sun was shining. She looked to her right, she saw Appollo dropping some type of animal meat into the prey pile. She looked to her left, usually her low deputy, Shadow, was there.
“Shadow how about you take our new apprentice Paws out to blood mountains, train him for hunting rabbits!” Raven said, flicking her tail towards the apprentice den. “Yes of course Raven, Do you want me to assign someone to help while I’m gone?” replied Shadow. “No I’ll be fine.” She replied, padding back to her den.
Shadow padded to the apprentice’s den, then peeked in. “Raven paired us up for your first training session.” He called out to Paws, as he turned and left the den.
“Really?!” Paws replied with and excited expression on his face. “Yup we’re going to Blood Mountain, where you’ll hunt rabbits.” Shadow said leading the way to the Mountain.
They passed through the forest and padded up on to the low part of the mountain.




“Now listen it’s very dangerous out here. There are bears, poisonous snakes and possibly other Clans Lurking around.” Shadow said in a whispering voice. “Ok I’ll be careful.” Paws replied as he padded towards the top of the mountain.
Shadow kept a close eye on Paws, this was his chance to prove he was a good deputy. He looked down to concentrate on jumping across the open part of the mountain, but when he looked up…. “Paws?!?!” he yelped as he looked for Paws.

[xxazul63xx]

I'm just going to write a short story


A teenage girl raced through the dark forest, branches scratching at her face like hands trying to grab her. It was dark, a night of no moon, not the time to be running through the forbidden forest. But she had no choice, it was this, or the death of her baby sister in her arms. She could hear the shouts of the royal guards behind her, the pounding of their horses hooves. The blood-curling screech of a startled crow rang out, sending a jolt of alarm through the young teen. The howling wind blew back the hood on her black cloak, she grabbed it and pulled it back on. She heard a arrow whistle past her ear, then another, tearing through the cloak. A gnarled root caught her foot and she tumbled forward, a jolt of pain went up her leg. Panic set in as she held the baby close, dragging herself to a large bush with many leaves. She sat back on a tree trunk and held the baby close, struggling to slow her breathing. The frustrated voices of the guards could be heard as they searched, crashing through the undergrowth. She let out a sigh of relief as the sounds became distant, and she knew that she was safe, for now. She took the time to observe her sister's face, for it might be the last time she sees it. Her sister had a cute round face with a small nose and dark hair and eyes. Her ears, well her ears were one of the things that made her different, they were wolf ears. A chocolate brown like her
hair, with some gray baby fuzz around the rims. The girl flattened them with her hand and pulled the blanket over them. The bottom of the blanket unraveled, exposing a fluffy brown wolf tail. The girl wrapped the cottony cloth around the tail as tightly as her frozen fingers could manage. The cold made her skin tingle, she tucked the baby girl into her cloak, holding her close. The distant sounds of the guards grew louder, and the girl stood up shakily and began running again. Dead leaves flew up behind her as she ran as fast as her numb legs would take her. Shouts could be heard as they spotted her, the thundering horse hooves got louder, she knew that she couldn't out run them for long. The girl had to find a place to hide, and fast. A yellow light peeked through the branches, without hesitation, the girl ran to it. Branches slapped her face as she sped past the trees, the wind howled in her ears. It was a cottage, a small one, with a sunken porch and tilted roof, giving it a lop-sided appearance. The teenager darted up the rotting stairs and lay her sister on the porch. She tucked her hair behind her ear and took one last look at her baby sister. She pressed her lips on the baby's forehead, gently, not wanting to wake her. Then the teen stood and knocked her fist on the door, she darted down the stairs and quickly hid in some bushes. The door opened and a warm yellow light poured onto the grass, a women stood there looking around. The teenager could here a small gasp, as the woman spotted the baby, she picked her up and cradled her as she disappeared in the cottage again. The teen let out a sigh of relief and ran into the forest again, she needed to lead the guards away. The pounding of the horses hooves were close behind her and she knew they were following her. Thorns tore at her cloak, holding her back. A rush of panic went through her as she fought to free her cloak from the thorn bush's grasp. The teen could see the royal guards, and the could see her. She had just broke free when an arrow went into her stomach, she fell to the ground with a strangled cry. Blood splattered onto the frosty ground, she lay on her side, struggling to breath. But it was to late, she was a goner. She stopped struggling and let her life slip away,
but she smiled, her sister was safe, she had done her deed.

[O.G.]

Would anyone care to tell me what the rare pet is? =)

[Xelinator]

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