Personal Poetry

[Snowdrop777]

I've written a few poems that I'd like to share, enjoy! ^-^


Title: Like A Dying Rose

Anguished dying love unpleading
Should have seen it I suppose
Laughing whilst my heart is bleeding
Spoiling like a dying rose

Why are there stars in your eyes,
As I lay sobbing, crying?
Why does your heart try to disguise,
All you have been hiding, lying?

There's someone else here, hiding,
Yet more forbidden lies.
Out of the shadows comes striding
The enemy not unwise...

Love watches with bitter eyes
She can not bare this pain
Gritted teeth as She cries
And darkness consumes Her domain

Red rose's shrivel, blacken,
Drooping with tiresome coarse
Their bouncing aura does slacken
With a gust of screaming remorse

As thus is the ending
Of a sorrowsome tale
Still there is time lending
To remove the dark veil

Still time tries
Still He works into the night
To reverse these lies
And unwrong what was right

Anguished dying love unpleading
Should have seen it I suppose
Laughing whilst my heart is bleeding
Spoiling like a dying rose





Title: Signs Of Severed Love

Signs of severed love impending
Throughout day or night
Still the warning signs are sending

Though the pain is never-ending
We strive to make things right
Signs of severed love impending

The rules of time are cruely bending
Threatening to warm the fight
Still the warning signs are sending

Now the steel angers boiling
The darkness consumes the light
Signs of severed love are foiling

The liquid anger shaping, toiling
The vines strangling deathly tight
Still the warning signs are broiling

The currents of rage are roiling
And now theres loss of sight

Signs of severed love impending
Still the warning signs are sending.

Throughout day or night
We strive to make things right
Threatening to warm the fight
The darkness consumes the light
The vines strangling deathly tight
And now theres a loss of sight.

Signs of severed love are foiling
And now the warning signs are broiling.





Title: You Are Gone

You are gone
And I am yet to realise
You are gone
And I'm hit with surprise

You are not here
Your back is turned
You are not here
Nothing have you learned

You have changed
I start to care
You have changed
I wish you were there

You have turned
A cry I utter
You have turned
A mere word I mutter
You have turned
And tears I cry
You have turned
And I know I must bid goodbye

You have changed
I must turn my back
You have changed
I must not crack

You are not here
Now I am gone
You are not here
Now I am a swan


You are no longer gone
But now you find I'm free
You are no longer gone
But the one who is gone is me.

[*Candy~Cane*]

I made one in My Signature!! L K

[Serenity.]

OMG thees are SOO awesome your a very good artist how did you come up with thees? Your very talented you chould do this and you could be a poetrist!!!!!!!!

[Snowdrop777]

I made one in My Signature!! L K

That's brilliant =) Very truthful =D

OMG thees are SOO awesome your a very good artist how did you come up with thees? Your very talented you chould do this and you could be a poetrist!!!!!!!!

The three so far are based on a guy I used to like, he knew I had feelings for him and basically walked all over me. Like a Dying Rose is about the conflict I felt when I stopped liking him, Signs of Severed Love is basically based on the realisation of a break down in a relationship and You Are Gone (A personal favourite at the moment =D) is about how he basically started to ignore me and when I realised I decided it was time to turn my back on him, so when he suddenly wanted to be mates again he found that I'd stopped caring about him, it's also about freeing yourself from a bad friendship or relationship =) When writing poetry all you need is a story or theme and heart to write from =) I'm glad you like them, and I'll be sure to write some more soon =)

[WolfGirl236]

I LOVE POETRY!!!!!!! PEOPLE PLEASE SEND ME SOME IT'S MY FAVORITE THING IN THE WORLD!!! MY ALL TIME FAVORITE IS LOVE POETRY!!!