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the community story

Postby freakyFeline » Sat Jan 07, 2012 12:52 pm

I haven't seen this on CS yet, and I wanna try it :)

I'm gonna post an introduction to a story, and the next user will post what happens next

EX: Me: The kitten ran away
next user: He found some food
another user: He ate it and got sick.

Thats kinda how its gonna go, but I would like long sentances please. when this story ends, I will post another subject. sound fun?

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all of Tess's rules apply
dont make deaths or battles too bloody

You can add new characters, you can kill any character. Remember, just because you made the character doesnt mean it belongs to you! this is called the community story for a reason!

(( MODS: If I posted this in the wrong place, im sorry. I didnt know where to post it :oops: ))

PLEASE keep on the subject! If its about a puppy dog, then dont post about a magical elf eating cookies or something like that.

Have fun :)

first story intro: The small kit raced through the forest with the fox not far behind, she squealed for her mother but couldn't see her. She tried to run faster, but the fox was catching up fast. The kit felt as if her lungs would burst, she didn't think she could keep this up much longer. She let out a yowl of relief when she saw the patchy pelt of her older brother, Splash.

“Hold on Monarch” he yelled. “I'll get you, just run a bit farther.”
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Re: the community story

Postby freakyFeline » Sat Jan 07, 2012 1:03 pm

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Re: the community story

Postby Hi There Stalkers » Sat Jan 07, 2012 1:08 pm

The kit makes it to her brother,when the fox comes up to them,and tries to bite them,the fox was hungry,he didn't eat not a thing the last 2 nights."You will be my food!"the fox laughed,seeming a bit weird,and strange.The kit was frightened.
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Postby freakyFeline » Sat Jan 07, 2012 1:11 pm

The kit squealed frightfully and buried her face into her brother's fur. "Ha ha! The scrap will be my appetizer and the big one will be the main course!" The fox's gravelly voice rang out.
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Postby Hi There Stalkers » Sat Jan 07, 2012 1:13 pm

The fox laughed a crazy laugh,as he went back into the forest."Don't worry,I'll protect you" the kits brother said.
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Postby freakyFeline » Sat Jan 07, 2012 1:22 pm

(( C'mon guys, please post. I promise this has a better chance of turning out fun than boring ))

The brother kept the kit close too him as he listened for the fox to come back. "Dont worry" He murmered to the trembling kit "That dumb fox isn't gonna hurt you!"
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Postby Hi There Stalkers » Sat Jan 07, 2012 1:24 pm

"Yes he is!He is coming for me!I have a feeling he is!"the kit said,trembling.The fox went back to his den."I'll wait..."he whispered.
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Postby freakyFeline » Sat Jan 07, 2012 1:27 pm

"Lets get back to the den" The brother mewed, grabbing the kitten's scruff in his teeth. She swung from side to side as the brother ran back to the safety of the den, where the brother's littermate, his younger siblings, and his mother stayed. His black and white fur weaving through the green forest.
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Re: the community story

Postby freakyFeline » Sat Jan 07, 2012 1:28 pm

(( Bump ))
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Re: the community story

Postby freakyFeline » Sat Jan 07, 2012 1:29 pm

siamese bagels wrote:(( Bump ))
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