Your Heart Beat Is My Life Line
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Your Heart Beat Is My Life Line
by Broken Inside » Sat Jan 07, 2012 5:29 am
I write all of these and they are all mine! Copyright!
You tell me I have no reason to cry. You tell me I have no reason to want to die. You tell me I can't say good bye. You tell me not to lie. But if I don't cry I will scream. If I don't die I will be in endless torture. If I don't say good bye I will have to say hello, over and over again. If I don't lie I will have to tell you the truth. You think you are the perfect parents for me. You think I have the perfect life. It's true, I have a lot of friends, I'm a cheerleader, and I'm class president. But none of it is perfect when you see the world through my eyes.I am afraid i will find something else I will have to silently endure, and I do. It hurts to see how much I have to fake to be happy. And only one thing hurts worse than that. You belive it even when I'm breaking.
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Re: Your Heart Beat Is My Life Line
by Broken Inside » Sat Jan 07, 2012 5:31 am
Art
You said I was a masterpeice
You said I was a million bucks
You said I was special
But now you cant get into my life
Now you cant see your daughter
Now you cant even remember my name!
You call me up
You say you love me
You want me back
I say no
You ask why
I say because
You start to get nasty
I start to laugh
You call me a work of art
You said I was a masterpeice
You said I was a million bucks
You said I was special
But now you cant get into my life
Now you cant see your daughter
Now you cant even remember my name!
You call me up
You say you love me
You want me back
I say no
You ask why
I say because
You start to get nasty
I start to laugh
You call me a work of art
You tell me I have no reason to cry. You tell me I have no reason to want to die. You tell me I can't say good bye. You tell me not to lie. But if I don't cry I will scream. If I don't die I will be in endless torture. If I don't say good bye I will have to say hello, over and over again. If I don't lie I will have to tell you the truth. You think you are the perfect parents for me. You think I have the perfect life. It's true, I have a lot of friends, I'm a cheerleader, and I'm class president. But none of it is perfect when you see the world through my eyes.I am afraid i will find something else I will have to silently endure, and I do. It hurts to see how much I have to fake to be happy. And only one thing hurts worse than that. You belive it even when I'm breaking.
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Re: Your Heart Beat Is My Life Line
by Broken Inside » Sat Jan 07, 2012 5:38 am
Secrets
I let out my secrets
Into your blank pages
I listen to those sweet lyrics
While I huddle in these cages
My heart goes pitter patter
I watch them hurt her
I get sadder and sadder
From the shadows comes a purr
So I await my turn
I let out my secrets
Into your blank pages
I listen to those sweet lyrics
While I huddle in these cages
My heart goes pitter patter
I watch them hurt her
I get sadder and sadder
From the shadows comes a purr
So I await my turn
You tell me I have no reason to cry. You tell me I have no reason to want to die. You tell me I can't say good bye. You tell me not to lie. But if I don't cry I will scream. If I don't die I will be in endless torture. If I don't say good bye I will have to say hello, over and over again. If I don't lie I will have to tell you the truth. You think you are the perfect parents for me. You think I have the perfect life. It's true, I have a lot of friends, I'm a cheerleader, and I'm class president. But none of it is perfect when you see the world through my eyes.I am afraid i will find something else I will have to silently endure, and I do. It hurts to see how much I have to fake to be happy. And only one thing hurts worse than that. You belive it even when I'm breaking.
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Re: Your Heart Beat Is My Life Line
by Whoviangirl » Sat Jan 07, 2012 9:27 am
Wow. You are great. Really great.
I love poetry myself and I take great joy out of reading it! You are very talented!
I love poetry myself and I take great joy out of reading it! You are very talented!
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Re: Your Heart Beat Is My Life Line
by Broken Inside » Sun Jan 08, 2012 12:15 am
Thanks! I really appreciate the critique!
You tell me I have no reason to cry. You tell me I have no reason to want to die. You tell me I can't say good bye. You tell me not to lie. But if I don't cry I will scream. If I don't die I will be in endless torture. If I don't say good bye I will have to say hello, over and over again. If I don't lie I will have to tell you the truth. You think you are the perfect parents for me. You think I have the perfect life. It's true, I have a lot of friends, I'm a cheerleader, and I'm class president. But none of it is perfect when you see the world through my eyes.I am afraid i will find something else I will have to silently endure, and I do. It hurts to see how much I have to fake to be happy. And only one thing hurts worse than that. You belive it even when I'm breaking.
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