my latest story (it doesnt have a name yet)

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my latest story (it doesnt have a name yet)

Postby Bilbo Baggins. » Fri Jan 06, 2012 11:46 am

Hi! I have always been a writer of both poetry and stories. However, my life has gotten a lot more busy these past few years, so I have not written a story in quite some time.... and thats why this one is not all that great. Some credit (a lot) should go to runyafirecracker7 for inspiring me to start writing again. Thank you, Runya! :D This is a work in progress, and I am just posting bits of the story as I write it but hopefully I will be able to keep it interesting and I hope it will eventually come to a conclusion. Please feel free to ask questions about the story, make suggestions, comment, and all that stuff! Okay, I apologize if I am boring you. Ahem-

The wind whipped my hair back and forth across my face. I stared out at the churning waters of the lake, lost in the beauty of the landscape. Cold spray stung my eyes, but I kept them open, not wanting to miss a thing. Then, all of a sudden, I perceived the sound of something whistling through the air behind me. I turned around just in time to see...
A wad of bunched up paper hitting me in the nose. It fell to the floor and rolled underneath my chair. Rubbing the tip of my nose, I craned my neck, looking for my assailant. Two seats behind me sat my best friend, Christie, giving me her fabled look of exasperation.
"You're doing it again!!" she hissed. "Pay attention!"
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Postby Bilbo Baggins. » Fri Jan 06, 2012 1:28 pm

I was a constant daydreamer. It was a wonder I managed to keep straight A's! As I attempted to turn my attention to my science teacher, Ms. Shroyer, my mind continued to wander. I felt like I was flying, looking down over incredible scenery of pine forests and snowy mountain peaks...
"No!" I told myself sharply. "You have to pay attention!" I tuned in to Ms. Shroyer's long lecture on atoms, molecules, and different types of atomic bonds. How could Christie possibly expect me to pay attention to that?!
My gaze shifted to the window, and I stared out at the wonderful view of Lake Michigan. My school is located on the easternmost side of Chicago, perfect for watching the waves. And then I heard it; a harsh, cold voice inside my head.
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Postby Bilbo Baggins. » Fri Jan 06, 2012 1:59 pm

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Postby Bilbo Baggins. » Fri Jan 06, 2012 2:32 pm

umm... anyone? comments, crit, anything?
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Postby Bilbo Baggins. » Fri Jan 06, 2012 2:49 pm

*sigh* no one ever comments on my stuff... :(
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Postby Bilbo Baggins. » Fri Jan 06, 2012 3:24 pm

shroyer thats the name of my old art teacher.
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Postby Bilbo Baggins. » Fri Jan 06, 2012 4:22 pm

oh well that wasnt intentional... ok im going to bed now ill post more tomorrow.
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Postby Alatar Maia » Sat Jan 07, 2012 3:13 am

That story sounds cool so far!!
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