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Just some writing

Postby comcom123 » Thu Jan 05, 2012 3:07 am

I was digging in some old note books and found some stuff I wanted to share. Poems, short stories, all that stuff.
Ill start off with a poem:
Be there

No matter the pain
I will love you
I dont care,
what the world throws at me,
I love you cant you see?
My body craves your touch, yet so simple
My Mind craves your thought, still there
my lips crave your kiss, but will never recive,
but no matter my hurt
I will always beleive
that one day, my armor clad saviour,
will rescue me


Hope you guys like. It gets better I promise! This one wasent very good, but oh well. Ill post more soon.
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Re: Just some writing

Postby Dr. Mirtachu » Thu Jan 05, 2012 3:09 am

you can post it here if you want: viewtopic.php?f=39&t=877489&start=120
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Re: Just some writing

Postby comcom123 » Thu Jan 05, 2012 3:11 am

Thanks, but Ill post here. Thank you though. I just wanted a little fourm to get my writing online so it wouldent fill my room with loose paper. XD
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Re: Just some writing

Postby Dr. Mirtachu » Thu Jan 05, 2012 3:13 am

i know what you're saying xD
good poetry though!
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Re: Just some writing

Postby comcom123 » Thu Jan 05, 2012 3:18 am

Thanks. Ill be posting more later. Im going through the papers getting rid of the really bad ones.
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Re: Just some writing

Postby comcom123 » Thu Jan 05, 2012 4:03 am

A good freind

Would you be my freind?
I dont have many thats true,
by many i mean any
I Kind of have some
But they wouldent care If I left
I already have started,
slowly draining of life,
turning into a lifless droid.
The prosess is endless
and cant stop.
when Im gone,
will my "freinds" cry?
Will they mourn like they lost a sibling?
Will they attend the funeral?
Will I have lwft this world loved?
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Re: Just some writing

Postby comcom123 » Thu Jan 05, 2012 7:22 am

This was an answer to a quiz in readin class. My teacher is all about non conformity.
8. What matters most out of what we have learned, is to not let your soul slip into the normal lives like the ones in the asphodel fields and to color the flowers whatever dang color you want to, and to never stop what you are just because someone doesn’t like it. The most important thing learned is how to be a strong person in our voice no matter how meek and small we are. To love our bodies’ even if we are a little pudgy or pimply or short or tall. The most important thing we learned is to never give in when your heart is in what you do. The most important thing we have learned is to be ourselves no matter who that person is, and to never change that for any one. The most important thing we’ve learned is to “fit in with the misfits” because we are not alone at any time in our life, no matter how barren it may seem. The thing that matters most, is to color the flowers, not just smell them. To leave the anchovies on our pizza even if “Evelyn Everybody” doesn’t like them. To be in love with whomever your heart wants, even if it means some people might reject you. The most important thing we have learned is to have character through and through. No matter what.
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