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Postby Electric~Lime~Zebra » Tue Jan 03, 2012 4:20 pm

I knew it was coming. I shook my head as I ran faster. I broke the sacred law and I knew it. They were coming for me. I couldn't scream as I felt their presence getting closer. IMy legs ached as I threw the last bit if my energy into the effort if freedom. Ferns and branches swatted my face. I threw my hands up, an instinct. I knew I was too weak to run in my other form. I looked back and saw its haunting face. The smile upon his lips were cruel enough to send shivers down my back. I should of turned forward, I should never looked back. My feet slipped on the loose pebbles. I couldn't stop myself, heart beating hard in my chest as I fell toward my death.

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Re: :: The End ::

Postby HotDang » Tue Jan 03, 2012 5:14 pm

More you should write more
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