Ƙιттʏ'ƨ Ƥσɛмƨ || Ɔяιтιզʋɛƨ, Ɔσммɛитƨ, αи∂ Ƨʋɢɢɛƨтισиƨ αccɛρт

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Postby Kitty12156 » Tue Jan 03, 2012 1:54 pm

Hello everyone :3
I happened to be reading a friends story and thought about sharing some of my work so I decided to post some Poems I wrote. I appreciate Comments, Suggestions, and Critques! Please enjoy!



Each post will have 5 poems on it so as soon as I fill up one, the next post witll be added too! I will be adding more Poems as I go on, so please come back and read whatever is new! Thanks ~ Kitty
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Ƨʋиƨɛт

As the Golden Beauty sets,
She rests her tired head on a cloud.
We think about all our regrets,
The fair maiden is covered with her shroud,
Only being able to see two silhouettes.

The moon peeks over the maiden,
Sending her away to sleep,
Away in valley, so she is hidden.
As the sky turns darker, the sky seems to weep.
Crying over a love that is forbidden.

Pitter-Patter the tears fall on the sun,
All through the night. The beauty rises,
Looking out over her loved one,
As he goes to sleep, the day ahead full of suprises.




Ħɛαятвяɛακ

You left me for her,
The waitress you meet.
Even though you promised,
Promised never to leave, but yet
It happened didn't it?
Now I'm depressed
All because of you
I barley get dressed
Or out of bed
I miss school,
Sitting and doing nothing at home
Just because you thought she was cool.
Now I say fare well
I am losing my life to a common illness,
Heartbreak



Δиɢɛя ʌƨ. Ħαρριиɛƨƨ

Anger, it is a disease
That rots from the inside out.
It makes us sick,
Mean and Ugly.

Happiness, it is a rainbow,
The sun and all happy things.
We turn pretty and nice.

When the disease fights
With all the happy things,
Who will win?

It is a fight till the death,
Using their greatest strengths.
Happiness pulls through 'till the end
It slays anger, taking the trophy and
Making you smie but,
That's not the end of Anger...


Ƨιƨтɛяƨ
The sun sits, resting on a cloud,
Looking down below,
Big and Proud.

Below, stands a sister, big and tall
She dances, her hair ruffled
By someone small.

The other, ran around her sister,
Whispering secrets to her
In an unknown language.

As the day goes by, the two sisters
Continue on what they do, but as the sun sets,
The sisters sleep.

The tree, standing still, tired from her dancing
And her sister, the wind, dying down.



Ɖσи'т ˩σσκ βαcκ
Don't look back now, don't look back.
We're on our way, off the beaten track.
If you do, then you'll fall back.

Don't look back now, don't look back.
For if you do, you'll be lost in the pitch black.
And there will be no other choice but to go back.

Don't look back now, don't look back.
Just find a seat and lean back
Think about what happened, think back...
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Postby Birds » Sun Jan 08, 2012 6:05 am

Wow. These are all really good. My favorite is Heartbreak. Great job. Keep it up! :3

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Birds wrote:Wow. These are all really good. My favorite is Heartbreak. Great job. Keep it up! :3

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