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Diary of A Foal. Read and Post!!

Postby [Braveheart] » Mon Jan 02, 2012 7:31 am

this is me

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This is Ellen
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This is Maria
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This is Snow rush
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and this is Frosty
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And this is King Onyx
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Dear Thing.

Well, for some reason my mother went out and did it. She bought me a diary. I am not a fan of sharing me secrets, but if you want to catch up on all the lastest gossip, go to the butterfly wolves. People think just becasue I am only 2 months old that I cannot catch up on gossip! Let me tell ya right hre right now that butterfly wolves that watch and train us kids have nothing better to do so you can catch in on the dirt of this town. What I am thinking is that those gossipers need to be more quiet about it. Well, anyway. Today I was romping with my sibling, Maria when we ran into the king. I was like "Hi, sir" and he raised an eyebrow and asked me what I was doing here. When I told him I was looking for my siblings, Frosty and Snowrush and he laughed and told me to check in the bushes next to the founatains. It beats me how he knew that we even existed and let alone where they were and who they are! But when I asked my personal favorite butterfly wolf, Ellen about that he said that King cares about every single newborne baby. Then she tucked me in and I should be sleeping now. Good night, sleep tight. But one more thing. How did she expect me to stop laughing and sleep when she sang "When I Was a young warthog"?

Bye for now!!
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Hello! I am a
lady
who
wants to be
called
Ellie,
please? I am
a Leo and a Gryffindor.
I love all
horses, and
animals
(except for hippos)
but my
heart belongs
to my cats and horse Cheyenne.
She\Her or they\them.
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Re: Diary of A Foal. Read and Post!!

Postby AquaFrosting334 » Mon Jan 02, 2012 8:04 am

I think this is a cool story! I'm not a big fan of horses in the first place but when you write about them it's kinda cool actually. That's talent.

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Re: Diary of A Foal. Read and Post!!

Postby [Braveheart] » Tue Jan 03, 2012 6:45 am

really, thanks! That means so much to me! :D


Here's more:

Fawn
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Blizzard Blaze
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Today was a more relaxing day. I was kinda cold becasue of the sudden snowfall, so I got a blankie and lay around watching movies like lady and the tramp and 9 and even the lion king . But after alll those movies my mother, Fawn, called me a movie-addict and nudged me outside. The snow was fun to play in. Me and Snowrush (at least, I think it was snowrush. It coulda been her twin) had a snowball fight and one of my snowballs hit another horse, Blizzard Blaze, in the rear and he chased us all around town! But when we arrived to the beach I hid under some stairs and tricked him. Then I threw another snowball and he freaked out and found us. I shoved Snowrush in front of me and made a run for it, but Snowrush pulled me down the tail and soared right over me! Right now I am tucked in bed while my mother is singing "Bella Note" from Lady and the tramp and I don't think shew knows I'm writing in you! Well we are just about done so I've gotta go to bed. I'll right more later when I'm tucked in!


Bye!
Last edited by [Braveheart] on Tuesday, August 18th, 4008, edited 8000 times in total.
Reason: Nobody wants to hear that much about horses.

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Hello! I am a
lady
who
wants to be
called
Ellie,
please? I am
a Leo and a Gryffindor.
I love all
horses, and
animals
(except for hippos)
but my
heart belongs
to my cats and horse Cheyenne.
She\Her or they\them.
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Re: Diary of A Foal. Read and Post!!

Postby [Braveheart] » Tue Jan 03, 2012 7:08 am

dear diary
this Is Lupe (wolf)


today was SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO weird!!!


I woke up with a funny feeling in my belly. Then it hit me. I was sick! Just when I ask for a bucket for puking, Frosy and Snowrush get in a arguement. They are like this"YOU watch her" and then the other one said "YOU clean her barf' and stuff like "ME? NO! I've gotta play in the snow! and then like "Can't you play LATER? She needs you here!" and THEN someone said "Me? needs ME? she needs YOU!" and finally, trying not to barf, I yelled "Please, just GET me a bucket!" and then Lupe came running around the corner and gave me a bucket while FRosty waited inside my bush room to clean my barf. The funny thing was, after my brother, Ranie fed me some corn I felt better.
Then I got up and told Frosty it was okay for her to leave and she was a little doubtful but eventually wandered off. I was walking around town when I caught up on two butterfly wolves gossiping with each other. They were like:
So, I heard that there was a new dog in the town.” Said the one with the really short hair
Oh, yes. I heard that he was really shy” Miss Long Hair said.
Oh, darling. If you only knew. He doesn’t know that he should not be in other towns
You mean? He actually entered another town? Short hair gasped
Not just any town
What town?
Lion town!
Are you kidding? How did you hear that? Short hair wondered aloud
My dad is a news-reporter
Speaking of dad’s…

Then I stopped listening. That was all I needed to know. Just then, a horse galloped by, and thrust a newspaper at the Hairs. It landed in Long Hair’s face and she shrieked “You jerk! You will regret that, mister!” and I grabbed it off her face and raced down Horse town as fast as my wobbly legs would go. I heard her dissing me. I dived under my Red-Rock Bridge and turned to the headlines.
Spider digs super long tunnel…
Rat unclogs water pipe…..
Dog enters lion-town….
Super-man to the rescue…
I stopped. “Whoa. Dog enters Lion-town” I said to myself. I opened to the article. It said
Yesterday a lion is basking in the sun when a dog steps out through the tunnel. She gets to her paws and calls her mate out, King, the king of Lions. He gathers up his men and soon they have the lion cornered and are asking him hostile questions. The dog looks frightened and answers with “What? Are we not allowed to mess with the lions?” and has all the Lion-town members laughing in his face. Heaven knows how he passed through Horsetown unseen
“Ooh. I’m sure that went well’ she said to herself. “It was horrible” a voice said. I spun around and looked in the face of a lion. He was just a baby! “I’m Simba.” He said, sticking out his paw. I looked at it like it was infected and just grew wings. “What?” he asked. “We don’t handshake” I shook my head, frozen in shock. “You don’t?” he asked. “Okay. Then what DO you do?” he added, after a pause. “This” I went back on my hindlegs and gently brought my right hoof and set it on his head. However, he flinched and shrugged it off. I sat down again. “You should be getting back home” I said. “lions and horses don’t meet” and he cried “But I don’t know your name” and I said to him “My name is Shauna” and he told me it was a noble name. I laughed with him and said “so, I take it that you were there when the dog entered town” Simba licked himself. “Babe, I was SO there. I saw all and everything. I, of course, did not laugh at him. But King almost never stopped. Then I gasped. “You are King’s son! Your royalty, dude. When your father dies, you will be king of all the rats and spiders yourself!” I marveled. Nodding his head, he said “Yeahhhhhhh” and I rolled over laughing. “I gotta go” Simba licked my pelt. “I loved meeting you. Too bad I won’t see you ever again! Who said lions and horses don’t mix?” I added crossly. “Bye!” He raced away, tail waving a final goodbye. I looked sadly after him. “Nice to see you now, friend” Oh, I have to stop writing now because I am getting a serious idea!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BYE!



I would write more but someone is calling me, even though I am supposed to be asleep
Last edited by [Braveheart] on Tuesday, August 18th, 4008, edited 8000 times in total.
Reason: Nobody wants to hear that much about horses.

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Hello! I am a
lady
who
wants to be
called
Ellie,
please? I am
a Leo and a Gryffindor.
I love all
horses, and
animals
(except for hippos)
but my
heart belongs
to my cats and horse Cheyenne.
She\Her or they\them.
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