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[Fantastica]

This is my song, it's called Cards.

V1
I didn't see it in your eyes
When I looked at you
But I should have known
By your simple little lies

I should have seen it coming then
When I looked at you
Why didn't I hear your
Revealing cries

Please don't
Judge me for leaving
When you knew it was coming
Can't see why you're still greiving

Over me
When I was just another toy
You were only being a boy
Played me like a doll
Then left me here alone

CH
Am I just your new pack of cards?
Your childish games
and broken hearts
Should have known you'd play me from the start
Your childish games
Are ripping me apart

Don't see why you still want my heart
When you have it now
And you left it out
Should have known you'd play me from the start
Your hurtful games
Are tearing me apart,
Tearing me apart

V2
I lived through all your cruel lies
And I trusted you
You hid behind me
And masked your lying eyes

I told myself it would be alright
Because I trusted you
Why did I let you
Hold me so tight

Please don't
Think less of me for crying
When you brought these tears
And my heart is dying

Over you
Because I'm just another toy
You were only being a boy
Played me like a doll
And left me here alone

CH
Am I just your new pack of cards?
Your childish games
and broken hearts
Should have known you'd play me from the start
Your childish games
Are ripping me apart

Don't see why you still want my heart
When you have it now
And you left it out
Should have known you'd play me from the start
Your hurtful games
Are tearing me apart,
Tearing me apart

B
So don't you
Judge me for leaving
My heart's still grieving
Don't tell me off for crying
Because inside I'm dying
I can't go a day
Without seeing your face
So don't judge me for going
When you played me like a doll
When you left me here alone

CH
(Softer)
Am I just your new pack of cards?
Your childish games
and broken hearts
Should have known you'd play me from the start
Your childish games
Are ripping me apart

Don't know why I still hold you in my heart
When you ripped it out
And you were proud
I should have known you'd leave me from the start
My empty tears
Are breaking my heart
And tearing it apart
...
Tearing
Me
Apart

[aiu]

Wow... just wow... that is one of the best songs I've ever heard or read... I'm scared to post my song now, but oh, well. I came here for help and criticism for writing songs, so please do help! This is my song. Please don't laugh...

'Silence"

The world is silent,
All words are gone,
Can you hear my screaming,
Among the lost,
The silence has torn into my soul,
And left me here bleeding in chains.

Chorus:
Trapped behind these bars,
You stare at me,
Do you even think,
To speak to me,
You’ve forgotten me,
That not okay with me.

The world is silent,
I’m all alone,
My voice is gone,
The world has stopped,
My heart has shattered on the floor,
I have become and empty shell.

Chorus x2

You’ve forgotten me,
That’s not okay with me.

[Day Of Silence]

Heres one of my many songs that I believe to suck.

It's called Fantasy.

Oh that place so out of this world
dancing around in make belief
a fairy tale, fantasy, some crazy world
taking it all in till I burst up big

I'm lost in this world
this crazy, crazy world
lost in this make belief
fairy tales and fantasies

I'm lost in this world
this crazy, crazy, crazy, crazy, crazy world!

Oh that place so out of this world
dancing around in make belief
a fairy tale, fantasy, some crazy world
taking it all in till I burst up big

I'm lost (i'm lost) in this crazy world
L-l-lost (i'm lost) lost (i'm lost)
I'm lost in this crazy world!

Woah oh oh
na na na na
woah oh oh
oh oh
yah (yah)

Oh that place so out of this world
dancing around in make belief
a fairy tale, fantasy, some crazy world
taking it all in till I burst up big

I'm lost in this world
this crazy, crazy world
lost in this make belief
fairy tales and fantasies

I'm lost in this world
this crazy, crazy world
lost in this make belief
fairy tales and fantasies

A woah oh oh oh
a woah oh oh oh oooohhhhh

[Kodabomb]

My sister, her friend, my friend and I made this up in the car on the way to the movies! It's tune is very similar to the Chicken Dance, and between each line you go brick brick brick brick. In the car, 2 of us said the verses, and 2 of us said brick brick brick brick!

Nick the Brick.

There was a brick
His name was Nick
He did a trick
Which made him sick.

He laid an egg
And ate a peg
He broke his leg
So he did beg.

One happy day
He went to play
And walked all the way
To eat some hay!

[Aireiya]

I wrote a few songs about a year ago..
Let's see..

My Mistake (this is the first song I remember writing)
This time, I'm not going by the rules
This time, I'm going my own way out
You try to make me see reason
But sorry, you're just too late.

I've made up my mind: I'll be gone by today
Nothing else you say can ever make me stay
Oh no, not anymore
Coz I've been there before

I'm leaving you behind
Not even gonna try
To forget all the things
That you promised to be

Coz I've found someone new
He's way better than you
At least he's not fake
You're my mistake


Which was followed by:

Valentine's Day Dedication (This one had no title, dunno why. XD I wrote this for a special someone, but I got rejected - not really, more like, let down - but this was my first full length song so I decided to keep it. ^.^)
I've been broken, I've been hurt
I've stumbled way too many times before
Can't control myself, can't escape
I just fall in love, to fall to pieces again..

Maybe it's different this time
Maybe I'll just speak my mind
Instead of finding my heart bleeding again..
Or maybe it's just a joke
Maybe I'm never supposed to
Fall in love.. With you..

You don't see me the way I see you
I'm just a friend to you, that much it true.
But what I'm feeling inside is something more that that:
I just think I've got a crush on you..

I remember all the times
When you'd play a song and I'd just sing along
You would smile, and I'd just jump inside
But then my hopes would fall when you left..

Maybe it's different this time
Maybe I'll just speak my mind
Instead of finding my heart bleeding again..
Or maybe it's just a joke
Maybe I'm never supposed to
Fall in love..

You don't see me the way I see you
I'm just a girl to you, that much it true.
But what I'm feeling inside is something more that that:
I just think I've got a crush on you..

I've been broken, I've been hurt
I've stumbled way too many times before
Can't control myself, can't explain
Why I fall in love, just to fall to pieces again..

You don't see me the way I see you
I'm just a sis to you, that much it true.
But what I'm feeling inside is something more that that:
I just think I've got a crush on you..
On you..
Yeah I think I've got a crush.. on you..

My most recent one is this:
I wrote it while listening to 'Somewhere I Belong' by Linkin Park. <3

Whirlwind of Lies
I watch you walk away
A fake smile on my face
I see her holding you
And there's nothing I can do

You played me like a toy
Seemed like you were pretending
That I was nothing
Coz she's all that's on your mind
And I..

I just wanna let this pain go away
Rise to greet a brand new day
With a true smile on my face
But I can't do that
Coz I'm just too caught up
In a whirlwind of lies..

I knew it was dangerous
Well, I guess I was a fool
For trying so hard to get close
Only to get my heart ripped out and torn

Just let me be
Let me live
It'll hurt me
But it's not like you care
Coz I..

I just wanna let this pain go away
Rise to greet a brand new day
With a true smile on my face
But I can't do that
Coz I'm just too caught up
In a whirlwind of lies..

A whirlwind of lies..



I'm planning on writing new ones soon.