Dear Stupid Journal Three: The Beginning of the End

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Re: Dear Stupid Journal Three: The Beginning of the End

Postby Hikari- » Fri Jan 13, 2012 10:28 am

DNB0928 wrote:Or..... Yinny comes to rescue her and smacks all the guards in the face with his mighty paw!

yeah that's just what i was thinking lol
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal Three: The Beginning of the End

Postby sparkle.+bballmta » Fri Jan 13, 2012 2:40 pm

lilacblack wrote:
DNB0928 wrote:Or..... Yinny comes to rescue her and smacks all the guards in the face with his mighty paw!

yeah that's just what i was thinking lol

Can you please please please please please please please please please bring yinny back? Or you could make a poll to see how many people want him back? ;) :P
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal Three: The Beginning of the End

Postby proud.little.wolf » Sat Jan 14, 2012 12:59 am

sparklecaldwell wrote:
lilacblack wrote:
DNB0928 wrote:Or..... Yinny comes to rescue her and smacks all the guards in the face with his mighty paw!

yeah that's just what i was thinking lol

Can you please please please please please please please please please bring yinny back? Or you could make a poll to see how many people want him back? ;) :P


Poll is up. :)
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal Three: The Beginning of the End

Postby .:Ash~cloud:. » Sat Jan 14, 2012 4:26 am

Xela XIII wrote:]
lilacblack wrote:
DNB0928 wrote:Or..... Yinny comes to rescue her and smacks all the guards in the face with his mighty paw!

Can you please please please please please please please please please bring yinny back? Or you could make a poll to see how many people want him back? ;) :P


Poll is up. :)


to be honest we need to consider 2 things:
1. ITS UP TO XELA, SHE IS WRITING THE STORY,NOT US :D
2. also he obviuasly left us for a reason, anyway This story is about lux, maybne there might be a future story on yinny (maybe could i do one? or i help you with one after this book xela? you see i am very keen on writing myself!?) up to you thogh xela xD

SO PLEASE JUST REMEMBER (this is my opinion, so yeah)
Im in a field because things did not go my way
poem by me!
Why did I get involved? does he still love me? I hope so…
I lay down in the daisies, trying to think of something to do,
gifts wrapped

I see a lady walk past with her dog “ these daisies look nice” she bent down beside me and wiped my tears “cheer up” she whisperd “things will work out” she left clasping some daisies, her dog at her side. I rolled on my belly looking at the daisies, being blown gently into my face, surrounding me like a blanket by the wind I plucked one out from the ground, about to strip it of its identity, without these its just bare
I was just about to when a voice said inside my head : “why ruin a perfect, beautiful flower when I know he loves me not?” I tossed it and watched it fly away
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal Three: The Beginning of the End

Postby G๏l๔єภєאє » Sat Jan 14, 2012 7:06 am

.:Ash~cloud:. wrote:
Xela XIII wrote:
lilacblack wrote:Can you please please please please please please please please please bring yinny back? Or you could make a poll to see how many people want him back? ;) :P


Poll is up. :)


to be honest we need to consider 2 things:
1. ITS UP TO XELA, SHE IS WRITING THE STORY,NOT US :D
2. also he obviuasly left us for a reason, anyway This story is about lux, maybne there might be a future story on yinny (maybe could i do one? or i help you with one after this book xela? you see i am very keen on writing myself!?) up to you thogh xela xD

SO PLEASE JUST REMEMBER (this is my opinion, so yeah)


yes, it is up to Xela, but sometimes (not to be rude or anything here Xela. Just one writer to another) we have to take into account what the audience wants. maybe (this is just an IDEA, nothing that has to take place) Yin could be a strange character, only showing up when Lux most needs it, but mostly staying out of her life.

(please don't take any offence if you find that my tone and choice of words offence. i'm not trying to butt in and control the story. this is ENTIRELY up to you, Xela)
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal Three: The Beginning of the End

Postby -Compass- » Sat Jan 14, 2012 7:23 am

I agree with Calyso and am ssitting here crossing my fingers tht Yinny will come back even though Its Up To Xela.
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal Three: The Beginning of the End

Postby proud.little.wolf » Sat Jan 14, 2012 9:21 am

@Calypso:

I totally agree with the strange character thing, and I might just do that. You've got credit for that idea. :)


Dear SJ,

I can't begin to tell you how much I hate this cell.
It's dark, cold, and I don't even have enough room to stretch my wings.
I hate it here.
I tried sending mental messages to BN one day when I got really desperate.
BN, answer me! I need your help! I thought intensely, hoping he could hear me somehow.
What do you want? his thoughts cut through my head.
He heard me!
I need to get out of here! I said. Please help.
No. I've helped you in that jail once, and I won't help you again. But maybe someone else will...
I wondered who it could be.
He must have heard me pondering that, because he answered,
You'll find out soon enough.
For the rest of the day I sat on the cold concrete floor, thinking long and hard about how I'd escape.
I'd already failed the first time.
How did I know that I wasn't going to fail this time?
There probably wouldn't be a "this time."
I was trapped here with no way out.
And with it being so dark, I could barely tell if it was night or day.
Suddenly the tiny sliding window opened, and the guards slipped a tray of food in.
I staggered over to it, using what light I could from the opening.
If this were the first time I'd seen the food here, I'd hurl.
But I've been in this cell for quite a while now, and I've grown used to it.
Besides, it's all I've got.
I slowly begin to eat the mush.
Whatever it is.
It kinda reminds me of oatmeal.
Stale, rotten oatmeal.
I take a bite, nearly gagging.
Today it tastes worse than usual.
But I force myself to swallow and take another bite.
Repeat process.
This is nasty, I thought.
No comments from BN this time though.
As I ate my grotesque meal, I wondered who'd be the one to save me.
Or did I have to save myself?
I wasn't sure anymore.
All these stupid cryptic messages and omens were making me angry.
Why can't my life just be simple?
To be a normal dog with a normal life.
That's all I want right now.
But I know I'll never get it.

~Lux

Sneak of the next entry!
I wake up in the middle of the night to bright white lights illuminating my cell.
"What the?" I muttered, sitting up.
The markings resembled a yinyang, and with a jolt I realized who it was.
"Yin!"
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal Three: The Beginning of the End

Postby G๏l๔єภєאє » Sat Jan 14, 2012 9:32 am

i feel honoured to have helped/inspired the story!! thanks so much Xela!!!! *bounces around* i actually can't contain my excitement!!!
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal Three: The Beginning of the End

Postby labradude » Sat Jan 14, 2012 9:43 am

Yay Yinny-Winny is back! Awwh I love him so much! <3
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal Three: The Beginning of the End

Postby Hikari- » Sat Jan 14, 2012 9:55 am

yay you bring yinni winny back ^^
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