Zombie {Comments Appreciated}

Are you a writer or a poet? Come and share your creations with us, or discuss writing techniques with others
Forum rules
Please only post your own original work, do not post poetry or stories which were written by someone else.

Zombie {Comments Appreciated}

Postby Donnie Darko » Sun Jan 01, 2012 6:38 pm

Zombie

Please don’t hate me for this.
It just doesn’t feel true…
Now your life can be perfect.
I can’t feel bad for you.
You always yell at me
For acting like a zombie,
But then you tell me to shut up.
I thought you’d show love.
You’re different than I thought.
Not as beautiful as I’d seen you then.
what you want me to be… I’m not.
It hurts me that you want me to pretend.
I told you, you push people away.
You judge every single mistake.
You might not believe me.
But that’s why I’m leaving.
Image
User avatar
Donnie Darko
 
Posts: 1302
Joined: Mon May 02, 2011 6:51 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Zombie {Comments Appreciated}

Postby SeissFleurr » Mon Jan 02, 2012 1:33 pm

It's pretty

Who is it about??


Last bumped by Donnie Darko on Mon Jan 02, 2012 1:33 pm.
Image



you're out of touch
i'm out of
time

But I'm out of my head
when you're
not around

____________________________

hi my name is moth and i use they/them pronouns
i havent actively used chicken smoothie in ten years
but i missed it, so you might see me around
adult - plural


____________________________

i do art sometimes
accepting trades (i've missed so much)
User avatar
SeissFleurr
 
Posts: 6306
Joined: Sun Mar 20, 2011 5:54 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 0 guests