I'm a Chicken Smoothie Pet, Hopeful and Proud

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Re: I'm a Chicken Smoothie Pet, Hopeful and Proud

Postby Orangelake » Sun Dec 25, 2011 4:01 pm

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Re: I'm a Chicken Smoothie Pet, Hopeful and Proud

Postby Qutting Cs. T.T » Mon Dec 26, 2011 9:56 pm

My feet finally knocked the cage over. It landed on the floor with a loud, "THUD" followed by an obviousness clanging sound. I chewed on the lock until the cage opened up. The door swung up to my nose, then to the floor.
Squeak. Squeak. I could see rust on the edge of the cage. Suddenly, the door fell on the floor with a bang that made every pet growl, even the spiders and fish.
"Would you keep it down!" Hushed an owl, who was trying to nap. It was surprising she didn't care pets were breaking out and leaving.
"Okay, fine!" Orange snapped. "We'll just push a cage down, bust down the door, and run out silently so you can sleep!"
I had never seen Orange so grumpy. I wondered if she really wanted to escape, or she was upset about having to come with me.
"Whatever." The owl moaned, flapping her wings and dropping a feather down onto my head.
I shook it off and ran outside, sliding through the mud. Orange ran after me. When she came to the mud she lifted her wings.
"I'll get my feathers dusty another time." She told the mud.
I rolled my eyes, a smile crawling across my face like a spider crawling on it's web after a refreshing morning rain. It felt really good to be free.
I jumped up and down, racing faster and faster until I got to the lake. The closest we could get to the sunrise, unless Orange would fly me.
"What? you can't swim?" She asked.
"Nope." I sighed, shaking my head with a sad look rolling into my eyes like black clouds.
"Oh. Well, we'll just sit here, okay?" She asked.
"Yeah." I replied, resting my head on a dusty old stone. It was covered with a soggy lily pad tat has washed up on shore.
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Re: I'm a Chicken Smoothie Pet, Hopeful and Proud

Postby Qutting Cs. T.T » Mon Dec 26, 2011 10:04 pm

Orange and I sat there, carefully looking up as the sun blazed across the pink sky. It was fighting to get up there, to do it's best. To be free. With the sky, with nature, as it's home.
"I've...been doing it wrong." I whined, looking at the water. The small waves slowly and swiftly crashed against my sore, muddy paws.
"What do you mean?" Owl asked, dipping the tip of her feathers into the lake.
"All this time..I've wanted a home. One with a loving, caring owner. With millions of other pets." I said, my body froze up and my eyes blank. "I wanted to be a city pet."
"We all do." Orange said.
"But not anymore. I know why I never got a home as a city pet. It was destiny! Destiny was telling me that I'm not suppose to be a city pet! That's why I got tossed around!" My eyes filled up with tears.
"So..you're suppose to live in nature, not in a house?" Orange asked. It was obvious she was confused and had no idea what I was talking about.
I sighed. She was kind of ruining the dramatic moment.
"I wanted to be a city pet. But destiny wouldn't let me. Because I didn't need a city life. I needed a country life!" I howled, staring at the sun. It had finally climbed over the rocky, cold mountains and into the sky, where it belongs. The sky turned from a pinkish orange into a beautiful blue.
"It's destiny." I repeated.
"Destiny."
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Re: I'm a Chicken Smoothie Pet, Hopeful and Proud

Postby Qutting Cs. T.T » Mon Dec 26, 2011 10:15 pm

I don't remember anything after that. I had raced off into the water chasing geese, smiling at the sun. Orange fell in love with nature, and we lived a happy life out in the forest. I would watch the sunrise and fall, smiling at it's every move.
Because while humans may use the sun to keep the warm, I used it as destiny's call.
The sun is what told me the answer to all my problems. The sun is what gave me all my power. The sun is what told me how to live my life.
When things were down, I was about to be given away again, I finally escaped all the tangles.
No, very rare pets don't dissapear because of "hoarders". They dissapear because at their age, they want to live on natures side.
As for Owl, or Red, Or Samantha, well, she lived a happy life with her new girl for many, many years. She ended up giving her account to her daughter, who loved the guts out of Samantha.
And my siblings? They're all together, cozy and warm, in a home far away. They are treated well and loved, cared for, and they can always smile and thank me for that.
While people think Chicken Smoothie is just a "game" or a "site", to the pets it's more. Much more. Even more to me. Because Chicken Smoothie is where I was born, and where I lived. It brought tears to my eyes, anger to my soul, and joy to my heart. Yes, I belong here. And thanks to the sun, or destiny, I will be able to live in peace. The best part is, I will always be a puppy.
I'm pretty sure no pet out there can replace me, Zip Lighting.

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Re: I'm a Chicken Smoothie Pet, Hopeful and Proud

Postby Qutting Cs. T.T » Mon Dec 26, 2011 10:15 pm

Sorry it ended guys, but I was really running out of ideas, and I was thinking of writing other stories.
I hope you guys liked this! :3
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Re: I'm a Chicken Smoothie Pet, Hopeful and Proud

Postby Monz » Mon Dec 26, 2011 10:45 pm

OMG that is the most sad but amazing story iv ever read! It should get a feature if there was one for poems, i love it sooo much!
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Re: I'm a Chicken Smoothie Pet, Hopeful and Proud

Postby Qutting Cs. T.T » Mon Dec 26, 2011 10:51 pm

WolfHowler wrote:OMG that is the most sad but amazing story iv ever read! It should get a feature if there was one for poems, i love it sooo much!
You should be an author, you really should!


thank you! this means a lot to me!
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Re: I'm a Chicken Smoothie Pet, Hopeful and Proud

Postby Monz » Tue Dec 27, 2011 1:30 am

Your most welcome <3
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Re: I'm a Chicken Smoothie Pet, Hopeful and Proud

Postby Orangelake » Tue Dec 27, 2011 9:05 am

I Love it! i agree with wolfhowler! you should become an author!
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Re: I'm a Chicken Smoothie Pet, Hopeful and Proud

Postby OctoberNights » Tue Dec 27, 2011 9:21 am

I really loved it ^~^
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