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Re: I'm a Chicken Smoothie Pet, Hopeful and Proud

Postby L O K I » Sat Dec 24, 2011 8:39 am

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▬▬▬ Born to be king // ▬▬▬
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♛ ♛ ♛ ♛ in return
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After all this time, now you come to visit
me, brother? Why? To mock?

I need your help. And I wish I could trust you...
If you did, you'd be the fool I always took you for.


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Re: I'm a Chicken Smoothie Pet, Hopeful and Proud

Postby Qutting Cs. T.T » Sat Dec 24, 2011 9:53 am

The pound doors opened and millions of people rushed in. Short thing people, tall thick people, happy people, sad people, angry people. Some had long silky hair, others had short, curly, frizzy hair. They were all different, none looked the same. Of course they fought over pets, grabbing and running, screaming and shouting. A young lady walked up to my cage and took me, walking so no one noticed her. When she was caught with a 2012 rare pet, she dashed out the door as fast as possible. She had short, blonde hair pulled up into a messy bun. She had grey eyes that shone like silver bells on Christmas morning. She had thin rimed green glasses sliding on and off her nose.
She opened up the first cage she saw and tossed me in. It was "Pets without a group." I sighed.
"At least I'm in a home." I sighed, looking at the other animals here. fish with sparkly scales, guinea pigs with adorable ears, dragons with wings that stretched out into the air. I was a common, every day pet that could never grow up to be strong.
I crawled into a corner and sat down, I was nervous and lonely.
"Hey there!" I heard a familiar voice.
"Orange?!" I gasped, seeing one of Owl's old friends near by.
"Yes, it is I, Orange. Zip, how did you get here? What happened now? where's Red, Blue and Green? My favorite friends? Please, tell me you know!"
"Blue is in the pound..maybe in a new home. The others, well, I just don't know." I replied, shaking my head. "I'm glad where ever I go I have friends near by." I said, a large grin on my face. I laughed, but Orange just mumbled.
"You know, this is serious!" She yelped. "We need our family near us, not friends!"
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Re: I'm a Chicken Smoothie Pet, Hopeful and Proud

Postby Lemon Dilemma » Sun Dec 25, 2011 9:43 am

Keep going, yesterday was my birthday, and I got a modern type writer. Your doing great!
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Re: I'm a Chicken Smoothie Pet, Hopeful and Proud

Postby Orangelake » Sun Dec 25, 2011 10:51 am

more1 your doing really awesome and i love it!
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Re: I'm a Chicken Smoothie Pet, Hopeful and Proud

Postby Qutting Cs. T.T » Sun Dec 25, 2011 12:22 pm

I forgot that Orange was always a rude one, and she had to have everything go her way. She flapped her wings crying with sorrow, "This is terrible!"
I sat down and sighed.
"It's not the worst, you know. when I was adopted from the pound 3 years ago, back in January 2012, I was adopted by a busy girl. If none of her pets were OMG So Rare, she would get rid of them. She tossed me in the pound. I was adopted by a loving girl. She treated me like a princess, she loved me very much, until she was too old for me. Then I was given to creepy guy. Creepy guy left, and Blue and I were all alone. we got thrown into the pound. Now I'm here, with an owner that's too busy to notice me. You think your life's hard? I'm only three years old and I've been through plenty of homes and the pound twice! I can pretty much see my future! If you think you've been tossed around, then just live my life!" I howled.
Orange stared at me and started to cry. Her wings flapped and her beak trembled. The ocean of tears she saved out crashed up against her cheek. Every eye in my home landed on me. I heard some whispering, some pets saying I was rude and careless. I wasn't scared, or ashamed, no, I was tired. Tired of being thrown across Chicken Smoothie, never being able to find my home. Never living the best life there was.
Orange leaked out tears, screaming so loud our owner busted through the doors.
"Dumb owl..." She hushed Orange, then stared at me. An ugly smile crept across her face. "You'll make a great present for my little brother, Cauise." She laughed, grabbing a box and walking out.
I looked at Orange. "See what I mean?" I grumbled. I walked away from Orange and turned my back on her.
"No, I don't!" She yelled, brushing the dust off her feathers, turning her back on me. I heard some newborns giggle.
"What drama queens!" They laughed.
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Re: I'm a Chicken Smoothie Pet, Hopeful and Proud

Postby Qutting Cs. T.T » Sun Dec 25, 2011 12:36 pm

I blinked my eyes open. I scrambled up to my feet looking ahead.
What is that? I thought to myself, gently walking towards it. I ran into the cage wall, flying all the way back and landing on Orange.
"WATCH WHERE YOU'RE GOING!" Orange squawked, Flying up after being alarmed. To my surprise, no one else here had heard her or checked to see what was going on.
"Orange, what's that?" I said, pointing to a glow out in the purple sky.
"That's a sunrise. Haven't you ever seen one before? You're three years old, and you've been through a lot!" Owl whined, then went back to bed.
"But...it's....it's amazing..it has such a radiant glow, such a burning flame, such an amazing act across a beautiful sky..it's a magical thing. I need to see it up close." I gasped, looking at it, my eyes watering with tears of joy. It was glorious!
"Well, I would like to see it with front row seats, too. But we're stuck here!" She said, making sure no one woke up.
I couldn't help it. A nice, orange and red blaze flying across a dim purple sky, lighting it up, making it look on fire, it was the best thing in the world. It was perfect. It was...my life. Free, but trapped at the same time. Living the same exact life cycle.
"I'M SEEING IT!" I growled, headbutting the cage, chewing on the locks, scratching the bars.
All of a sudden every single pet woke up. Each one rubbed their tiny red eyes, dragging their weak soft bodies up to see what all the commotion was about.
"What are you doing?!" A cat yelped.
"Shhh!" Some butterfly wolves hushed her, making sure our owned didn't see what I was doing.
"I'm breaking out, what does it look like?" I growled, kicking the cage.
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Re: I'm a Chicken Smoothie Pet, Hopeful and Proud

Postby Orangelake » Sun Dec 25, 2011 1:23 pm

Loveee itt!
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Re: I'm a Chicken Smoothie Pet, Hopeful and Proud

Postby Mrs. House » Sun Dec 25, 2011 2:02 pm

More! So awesome!
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Re: I'm a Chicken Smoothie Pet, Hopeful and Proud

Postby Qutting Cs. T.T » Sun Dec 25, 2011 2:28 pm

Oh, and for those of you that didn't notice,

this is taking place is 2015.
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Re: I'm a Chicken Smoothie Pet, Hopeful and Proud

Postby OctoberNights » Sun Dec 25, 2011 2:39 pm

I love your story. More please ^~^
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I like things that are related to Homestuck, Pokemon, The Hobbit, Baking, and Science~

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