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Re: Piercing Screams

Postby Noodles-for-two » Thu Dec 22, 2011 5:48 am

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Re: Piercing Screams

Postby aqua2462 » Thu Dec 22, 2011 6:42 am

He pulled me into a abandon hotel and said, 'This is a group of survivors. The men are trying to wipe out Austins population because this is where it started.' I chocked back a sob. Had my parents done this? They had been spending an awful lot of time in their laboratory. I looked at the survivors. They all had terrible cuts and they were covered in ash. 'H-H-H- Hello' I said 'My name is Charlotte. Um this is very unfortunate. And If there is anything I can do to help I would be-' I burst into tears. People comforted me and I still sobbed. My whole life was ruined! I held Cookie close to my chest. She was the only one I had left. I woke up in a bed. The boy who saved my life was in the bed next to me. He was awake and staring at me. I felt me face turn bright red. 'Oh sorry' He muttered. 'What is your name?' I asked him. 'Davis.' Davis. I liked that name.
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Re: Piercing Screams

Postby aqua2462 » Sat Dec 24, 2011 3:10 pm

Suddenly I was walking with my mother and father. I didn't even remember waking up from the horrible dream. And that's when the strange things began to happen. Cookie ran to me then in one second grew to a huge monster. I let out a scream and ran towards my parents. But just as I touched them, they vanished. Blood curdling screams rang out and I slammed my hands over my ears. Faces of all my loved one flashed around me but the were distorted and looked like goblins. I began to run. From what? I don't really know. But I ran. And the next thing I knew I was In the hotel and Davis was shaking me awake.
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Re: Piercing Screams

Postby Thief of Pies » Sat Dec 24, 2011 6:37 pm

I love it! :D
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Re: Piercing Screams

Postby aqua2462 » Sun Dec 25, 2011 1:47 am

Ok If you think it might be confusing now, it will all be clear later.
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Re: Piercing Screams

Postby aqua2462 » Mon Dec 26, 2011 12:55 am

'Are you Ok?' He asked me. 'You were thrashing around and screaming at the top of your lungs!' I gasped. 'Oh! I was having a terrible dream... Sorry!' He took me down stairs where a group of people had come back from the store. Since all the stores were shut down, people took food and items and didn't pay for it. There were fruits and doughnuts and milk. And I was STARVING. I scarfed down the breakfast and went back up to my bed. Cookie was curled up in a little ball and I realized she must be super hungry. So I ran down stairs grabbed some ham and brought it up to her. She ate so fast I was surprised she had actually eaten it.
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Re: Piercing Screams

Postby aqua2462 » Tue Dec 27, 2011 12:31 pm

The next few years were a blur. Saving wounded people. Driving back SNF. And the next thing I knew, BAM! I was 14. Cookie had gotten quite a bit bigger. Or fatter I mean. It was the night before my birthday. I was snuggled up with Cookie and tears rolled down my face as two small voices in my head said. 'Happy Birthday sweetie! Your 14!' 'Thanks Mom! Thanks Dad!' I whispered.
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Re: Piercing Screams

Postby Thief of Pies » Wed Dec 28, 2011 4:20 pm

More! More!
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Re: Piercing Screams

Postby Betta132 » Wed Dec 28, 2011 4:45 pm

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Re: Piercing Screams

Postby aqua2462 » Fri Dec 30, 2011 10:41 am

I woke up that morning with a sigh. No Mother and Father. No friends. No family. I was sad. 4 birthdays spent without anyone I loved. I forced myself out of bed and as soon as my feet touched the cold concreet floor, I dove back into the bed. Wow this was going to be hard! When I finally did get out of bed I thought I heard voices from the lobby. But it was probably my imagination. My imagination had been playing terrible tricks on me lately. I would see my parents then they would say bad things about me and walk away. I realized from my watch it was 10: 17. Well so much for following orders. As soon as you got out of bed you were supposed to have gotten up, gotten dressed, eat, then go to fight outside. But I didn't feel like doing anything today. So I thew on a tshirt and started down stairs. I was just walking normaly when I tripped on a wrinkle in the rug and landed flat on my face. I stood up and brushed my shirt off. I could tell this was going to be a bad day. On my way down the stairs, my foot slipped and I tumbled down the last 8 steps. I wanted to scream. ON MY BIRTHDAY TOO! I closed my eyes and smiled. Well I was still going to enjoy the day with my mother and father. Suddenly my eyes shot open. No I wouldn't. They were dead. I had nothing to look forward to. I opened the doors to the lobby and was greeted by a 'SURPRISE!!!!!!!!!!!' I screamed. I mean who does this sort of thing? Screaming surprise? That is just not cool! Wait how did they know about my birthday? Stalkers! 'Happy Birthday!' A voice cried. Hey I know that voice! I thought. And thats when my best friend I had known from pre- k stepped up. And I knew I had something to look forward to.
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