Piercing Screams

My gallery · by **aqua2462** » Wed Dec 21, 2011 6:04 am

My name is Charlotte. I lived in what used to be Austin, Texas. At the time I was only ten. I had blue eyes and long blond hair. My mother and father were a different story. They had Jet black hair and green eyes. I loved my family. But the men who ruined my life took that all away. It all started four years ago. I was knitting a little blanket for my kitten, Cookie. She was the most beautiful kitten you had ever seen. Silky gray fur and piercing blue eyes. I had just finished with the blanket when Mother suddenly stood up, and grabbed my arm. Then I heard it. The screaming. Mother ran into the kitchen and alerted Father. He jumped up and ran to get me. Scooping me up, I dropped the blanket. I began to sob and point at Cookie. He ran back and I grabbed her. Mother led us to the back yard and I saw what our street had become. Fire everywhere, men in black ran around shooting, and people flooded the streets.

My gallery · by **aqua2462** » Wed Dec 21, 2011 7:20 am

I began to hyperventilate , because at the time this was very frightening. Mother ran into the shed and pulled a lever. The ground, about 3 feet away from us, opened. I saw stairs leading into darkness. We raced down the stairs and Mother pulled another lever to close the door. She then burst into tears. Seeing that she had done it, I assumed it was alright for me to cry too. So I sobbed. Father grabbed us both and held us tight whispering 'It will be okay. It will be okay.' Finally we stopped crying because it is tiring to sit there and cry, so we had fallen asleep.

My gallery · by **aqua2462** » Wed Dec 21, 2011 1:39 pm

BUMP ME GONNA WRITE MORE. even if none cares

My gallery · by **Orangelake** » Wed Dec 21, 2011 2:10 pm

I love it! you should write more! MORE!

My gallery · by **Rylie101** » Wed Dec 21, 2011 2:13 pm

Same! Its great!

My gallery · by **aqua2462** » Wed Dec 21, 2011 3:09 pm

Ok here is more.
I awoke to the sound of my mother and father's voices. It happened too fast for me to really remember, but what I think happened was, My Father didn't follow the orders of the men who invaded our small musty bunker. I was huddled in a corner with Cookie and they didn't see me. They got agitated with him and eventually shot him. My Mother became mad and they had to shoot her too. This is what I remember. One of the men was checking to see if anyone was here. He was scanning the room and saw me. I held my finger up to my lips and he nodded. He would not tell anyone I was here. He then left. After he was gone I shot out of the bunker and into the streets. I was frightened and confused and hungry. Suddenly a boy slammed into me. 'Oh my gosh! Oh man I am super sorry! That was totally my fault!' The boy cried. He helped me up and pointed to a band of men coming towards us. Grabbing my arm he led me into the shadows.

My gallery · by **Orangelake** » Wed Dec 21, 2011 5:26 pm

i love it! more!

My gallery · by **BMO** » Wed Dec 21, 2011 5:31 pm

Nice so far!

My gallery · by **aqua2462** » Thu Dec 22, 2011 4:30 am

Ok I am on break right now but when I get back to school I might not be able to write so much. But here is more.
He led me down a dark ally and I said, 'What is going on?' He turned to me and said, 'Those men are the SNF. There recently was a sighting of strange creatures. Then there were more, and more and so these men started to investigate. These two scientists' were accused of creating the thing that arose these creatures.' I bit my lip. My parents had been scientists. 'But what does SNF stand for?' 'Super Natural Fighters. Like ghosts and stuff.' I nodded. 'Come on' He said.

My gallery · by **Orangelake** » Thu Dec 22, 2011 5:41 am

its good

i love it!