Another World

[DreamCaster]

Continuing...
"Jessica!,"shouted Niomi,"I think im ganna be sick!"
"No no no!,"jessica screamed,"Not on the bed i have to sleep on that!".
"Maybe i should go?,"Aj asked as the white cloud from before appeared next to him.
"NO!...i mean i'll just get the bucket".
Jessica grabed the bucket and went to Niomi.
"Who are you talking to?,"she mangaed to cough up before vomiting in the bucket.
"NO ONE!,"she screached.
Niomi got up ran past Aj into the bathroom.
"NIOMI!,"Jessica yelled out and went into the kichen however Aj wasn't there.
"GREAT now we can talk,"he said coming out of her shadow.
"How did you do that?",she asked clueless.
"It's easy you just close your eyes and and stop breathing for a minit think of being in the
dark you try it,"he said picking up a scarf of a hook and tied it around her eyes,"Just think of a time when you were in the dark,"
She remembered a time her dad was at work and her mom was on the laptop.
she begged for a story but she was too busy and left her alone in the darkness.
Jessica opened her eyes it was like a 2 second bridge on the right side was light on the left was dark she quickly jumpt into the light before it slipped away.

[CookieRaider]

i dont really like it. i feel like jessica knows everything and isnt scared

[list the unknown]

keep writing.

[DreamCaster]

Continuing...
"JESSICA WAKE UP! JESSICA WAKE UP!!!,"a voice kept screaming but it sounded fuzzy and flubery.
She opened her eyes for real this time to see simon and Emma she was holding the scarf in her hand which Aj put on her eyes.
"Is niomi ok?,"she asked.
"She had to go to a hostpital in an anbulance,"he replied as Corraline came in.
"What? why? when? how?,"she said confuessed with her mind filled with questions,"She was here a minit ago"
"No she wasnt,"Corraline butted in,"she went to the hostpital like an hour ago"
"You were on the floor and she was in bed shes too weak to get up,"simon sighed."Poor girl so much for camping,".
"Doc said she has some kind of flue we dont know if shes alright"corraline said her eyes to the ground.
"You should go and check,"said Jessica staring at Simon and Corraline.
"Bu-,"they baggan.
"Emma can stay with me",she turn face her.
"Ok just be careful,"Simon said closing the door behind them.

[Betta132]

I like this a LOT!! One thing: it needs punctuation. It's kind of hard to read as is.

[DreamCaster]

I like this a LOT!! One thing: it needs punctuation. It's kind of hard to read as is.

THANK YOU!
and sorry i'll try and fix my punctuation to help make it smooth to read

[DreamCaster]

Sorry i haven't writen any thing in a while i don't think meny people likes this any way.
continuing...
It is now 5:00pm the others were still not back from the hospital and Emma has fallen asleep
Jessica was sitting on a chair in the kichen, she was still confuesed about what happend with A.j.
"Jessica,"said a voice lower than a whisper.
"A.j is that you?,"she replied.
There was a sudden slight knock from behind the store room door ,Jessica openned it and found
A.j he looked like he'd been beaten up.
"What happend?,"her knees stiffend in shock.
"You almost k-killed me,"
"How? how did i do it?"she asked feeling guilty,"Can i do some thing to help?"
"Give me your hand and repeat after me,"
"What if i hurt you agen? or maybe this time even KILL you?,"
"I trust you all you need to do is have trust in me"he smiled.
Jessica took his hand.
"Darkness weak darkness slow dieing by the dagger of might sheald my demon from thy light
give strength and grant us health treat equally from the angel of right from thy light of the night ,"she
repeated him there was the flash of light.
Agen Jessica saw the bridge but more clearer than before she turn to the right, it was day and there was a beautiful garden full
of flowers and a light figure however it was to bright to make out, then she turned to the left,it was night in a forest she could bearly see any thing also there was a another figure but i was of darkness WAIT it was A.j.
Both places began to fade she didn't want to chose a side her heart spoke to she stayed in the middle of the bridge.
In the last few second of being there a cirle was formed around her and suddenly wind flew up bursting with colours and all diffrent sents you could almost taste them then every thing turn into a blur and she saw A.j standing over her stong and healthy looking.
"Thank you,"she whispered in her ear whilist pulling her up of the ground.

[list the unknown]

MORE!

[Nonexsitent]

I like it continue please

[DreamCaster]

Thanks for the comment (Our Bleeding Shadow).
ps:i coppied the nick name A.j from Our Bleeding Shadow s journal name.
Continuing...
A.j and Jessica had been sitting down for a moment waiting untill the other made a word.
Then finaly ,"I need your help,"A.j said fixing is eyes on hers.
"With what?,"
"When i crashed i lost some thing,a VERY valuble object,"
"If you're thinking of going back to where you crashed think agen scie-,"She broke off.
"scientist and men in black cloths who would do BAD things to me if they
found out where i came from and what i am,"he finished off for her.
"Oh boy,"she sighed knowing this would get her into ALOT of trouble,"What do we need?".
"I've check the structure of the sight theres fences of wire so we'll need wire cutters and a few small mirrors to reflect the lazers ".
"LAZERS,"she echoed.
"Or we could leave it and let some one take over the world,"he said sarcasticly,"That would be a bad score for all of humanity".
"Fine,"she grunted getting up and put her shoes on and walked out the door,"Lets go".
He followed her and they headed off to town.