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Re: Another World

Postby DreamCaster » Fri Dec 23, 2011 2:09 pm

Just as AJ was about to open his mouth.
"JESSICA!!!",voices screamed it was her fellow campers.
"you'd better go"said he fadding into the cloud.
"Wait! you you havent answered any of my questions"said she
"Okay i crash thats why it was such a smashing landing"he said sarcasticly,"I also come from a place called Sonnelia i will explane every thing tommorrow and you friends are calling you so good night"
"You'd better be here and try not to be seen"Jessica shouted as she began rush in the direction to camp.
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Re: Another World

Postby DreamCaster » Sat Dec 24, 2011 2:57 am

She returnd to camp.
"Where have you been?",Simon demanded as she aproached her tent.
Jessica didnt answere.
"We were worried ya know"
"Well im fine where are they?"
"Fine?"echoed he,"They went on a search party"
"Where did you go?"asked voices behind her it was Uuncle Harvy and the others.
"I heard you scream"said Coraline.
Jessica smiled at her"You shouldnt have worried i dropped some thing when i was getting the fire wood and i went back to get it"
So that was it they all went to sleep.

First thing in the morring Jessica got ready to see AJ.
She awoke to smell the fresh air,wind brushing at her hair and to hear and see animals.
She went at small pace towards where the cloud was last night.
"I hope im not crazzy" she wispherd to herself.
She reached it and saw there was a line with writing on it saying"Scientific reasearch do NOT enter",and on the other side were people dressed in white lab coats and black suites.
Just then a dude in back came up to her.
"Who are you and what are you doing here?",said he glaring a her.
"I was just about to ask the same question"she answered back.
Norrowing his eyes he fixed them on to hers
he looked like he was in his twenties
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"lets be nice and answere the questions i'll go first"said he,"MY name is Caleb Johnson i am a police officer here to warn and inform people like you,this site is of limits".
"My name is Jessica Vallen i have come here on a camping trip with some friends"
"Theres a storm comming tonight so i sujest you and your friends leave the forest untill it blows over"
"Why are the sciencetists here"
"That information i dont know but they think some thing was here",he said staring of ito space,"Now go tell them"
"Ok",said she walking back to where she came from.
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Re: Another World

Postby Pyper Hyper » Sat Dec 24, 2011 3:50 am

Great!
My name is Diddy, and I am 5.
Tonight I will see God so live.
I was hit by a van,
almost struck down by David's hand.
You protected me til then,
so til Rainbow Bridge's end, I'll wait for you my friend.
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Re: Another World

Postby DreamCaster » Sat Dec 24, 2011 7:50 am

Pyper Hyper wrote:Great!

YAY!
I finaly got my first comment :D
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Re: Another World

Postby DreamCaster » Tue Dec 27, 2011 1:28 am

Due to the bad weather which was soon to come Jessica and every one els had to book afew hotle rooms called Hopers inn
from a town near bye named Lady Marien population 2,000.This was a popular sight in the 19th century it alot of alian and extincted animals sighting hunters and other people used to come and try to find this but all that was left was the ground which looked like it was sweeptd into a crop ciercle.
Jessica lay awake that night thinking about AJ and where he was and what he said she sighed,she shared the room with Coraline,Niomi and Emma.
"What wrong?,"asked coraline,"you been acting strange all day".
"Nothing im just tired,"
"Maybe we can ask Uncle Harvy if we can go rock climming or some where tomorrow,"said Emma
"Or maybe yo can just shut up and go to sleep for the night",Niomi added sarcasticly whilist reading a magasine.
Quickly Coraline snatchged it of her then laughed"Sinice when did you become intrested into boys?,"showing it to Jessica.
"So what give it back,"she made an etempt to retrive it but coraline was faster and dodged her sending niomi falling on the floor.
"I HATE ALL OF YOUS!!!",She screamed then ran into the bathroom.
"Now look what you've done"said jessica getting up and started to beg Niomi to come out.
"Oh why,"sighed Emma then beggan to cry,"Why do i always have to mess things up?,".
coraline hugged her.
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Re: Another World

Postby list the unknown » Tue Dec 27, 2011 8:20 am

wow. i like this story. It realy catches your attention. I'm waiting for more!
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Re: Another World

Postby DreamCaster » Fri Dec 30, 2011 2:47 am

Sorry i havent writing in a while thank you 4 the comments new record 2 yay :D

CHAPTER 5
REAPPEAR DISAPPEAR
Then next day was a mixture of warm,hot,winding,sunny and shadey the kind of day every one would usually get up and enjoy themselves however Niomi wasnt feeling well.
Emma and the rest of them were bored so Uncle Harvy planned to take them out for ice-cream.
"Jessica common lets GO!,"Coraline shouted exitedly.
"No i think i'll stay and look after Niomi,"
"Suite your self then,"She said changing emotions.
They left leaving the room...."A Mess!,"cried jessica starting to pick things up.
"Jessica,"said Niomi her voice sounded which saw,"I need to talk to you"
"Wait a minuit"she shouted cleaning the last patch of the room then walking in and took a seat next to Niomi on the bed"Whats up?,"
"Listen about last night,"she bagan.
"No no no",Jessica inturupted and went on,"Do no let coraline get to you look i know she teases and every thing but.....,".(ect)
"Jess jess?,"rolling her eyes she shouted,"JESSICA!".
Jessica jumpted,"You were saying,"she relised she'd been blathering on and on and on about coraline and what not.
"Thank you"Niomi said out of breath"Its no about coraline its you,".
"Me,"she echoed.
"I i was reading that magasine because...,"
"Becaues,"still repeating.
"Because i think i love i mean like SIMON!,"she shouted out lound as if she commited a crime.
"And this has got to do with me why?"
"HE LIKES YOU,"she said like she was talking to an insane person.
"Okay im just ganna back away slo.."she broke off realising what she wanted,"Course you can have him".
"He's like you since 3rd grade and you don't notice why?,"
"Well i want to save my life for later,"
"Um..why?,"
"I want to do some thing good with my life"
"Like what?,"Niomi kept asking questions curiously like a child.
"I dont know maybe stop a war invent a time machine disscover another life form(ALIENS!) stuff like that ya know,"she smiled,
"i'll get you some medicine for your throat you stay here,"
Sudenly there was a crash in the kitchen.
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Re: Another World

Postby DreamCaster » Wed Jan 04, 2012 6:48 am

still continueing reappear disappear
sorry i havent writen any thing i a while been busy yes i know i have spelling mistakes i will corect them later heres another part enjoy
HAPPY NEW YEAR 2012

Jessica went in the kitchen to investigate.
"Hello is any one here?!,"she shouted out loud thinking it was a robber she picked up a pan near bye and walk past the store room where her shadow layed.
When sudenly glowing bright eyes shone in the darkness,"Boo!".
Jessica jumpt on the the top of a cupord like a cat and landed without hardly making a sound.
AJ appeared,"Ha i scared you,"he said laughing like he just invernted a joke.
"You could of noted me you were here"she muttered angryly trying to get down from where she was.
"Havent you wondered how you got up there?,"
"Yes i jumpt"
"Its afew metereds high it would take some time and practice to make a jump like that"
"I never thought of things like that any way why do you ask?".
He took her hand and showed a small spark in the middle of her palm.
"Magic"he hissed amongest the silence of she,"You are special Jessica you have powers unknown to you even in usage"
"wow"she whispered in amazment.
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Re: Another World

Postby Pyper Hyper » Sat Jan 14, 2012 2:03 pm

It keeps you going: I CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My name is Diddy, and I am 5.
Tonight I will see God so live.
I was hit by a van,
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You protected me til then,
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Re: Another World

Postby DreamCaster » Mon Jan 23, 2012 7:22 am

I am so so so SORRY i havent been writing im soon ganna start another story i wrote the whole inter story down but MY TEACHER she took it and keeps forgeting to give it back i'll write more tomorrow thank you for the encouragement Pyper Hyper
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