Another World

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okay i made a story b4 called fiction story this is a bit different and more positive
so enjoy
THE BLURB
Jessica Vallen is a normal 13y old girl untill a camping trip reunites her with her long lost forgoten Demon alot more happends
but you'll have to keep reading to find out what this is more than BIG its a.....Another World.

CHARICTORS
Jessica:

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Justin:

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Joshuwa:

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Coraline:

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Uncle Harvy:

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Emma:

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Simon:

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Niomi:

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Sorry it took so long to intorduce the charactors

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CHAPTER 1
GOING CAMPING
"Wait for me!,"shouted Jessica packing a few extra things from the kitchen.
Jessica is a tall slender girl with red long curly hair and skin white as snow she is also 13 ys of age.
it was the 1st day of the summer holidays Jessica had planned to camp with some friends and family.
"Come on Jess,"said Justin rather anoyed Justin is Jessica's older brother.
"just one minuet,"said she struggleing to shove a telescope in her suvivel bag.
quickley they dash out of the house and jumped in their uncle Harvy's mini van.

"Took you long enough,"said Simon as they entered the van.
"Why did you missed me?,"Jessica teased then sat down next to Coraline.
Coraline is jessica's best friend and their friendship will never die!.
Simon's face went red it was true he always did have a thing for Jessica however everyone knew but her.
"I can't wait untill we get to angel falls,"said Emma trying to change the subject.
"why whats so special about it any way?,"said Niomi bluntly.
"Well we can do really fun activities you'll like it eg. starting a fire and...,"Emma broke off.
"The only things i like to do is climb the mountains which mom said we're probobly not doing any way i dont care,"said Niomi
some how blaming Emma for what she likes and doesnt like.
"We can do that there,"said simon.
"So basickly you do care,"added Joshuwa trying to make a scene.
"Shut it all of you,"justin yelled.
"Don't you say shup up to me,"Niomi said angrily.
They all ended up fighting.

SCREACH!!!!
Uncle Harvy slammed the breaks then turn his face to them.
"Why did you do that for",said Niomi gasping for air.
"I could turn this car around right now if i wanted to i brought you all here to have fun NOT to fight each other
if any one any one of yous has a problem with some one els in this car speak now!!!!"he shouted
That was the end of it not a word was spoken untill they reached their destination.

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is there any questions ideas or comments i could i to this story?
ps:its my almost first

[DreamCaster]

Too soon to ask question i knew it moving on.
CHAPTER 2
THE MEDEO SHOWER
"Finaly!"said coraline who had spoted Angel Falls.
Angel fall was a HUGE forest filled with nature and life in the background were two mountians and a water fall
inbetween them at the bottem was a lake which all animals drank from.
Jessica and the others gasped in awe from the sight of this.
"Achoo!"Emma sneezed like a pixie.
"Bless you", they all jinx.
Every one helped set up camp and built a fire.
It soon grew dark and they were running out of fire wood Jessica felt that some one had to do some thing so she got up from the wooden bentch she was sitting on and went without questions.

She came back to find every one had fallen asleep she though this was a good time to take out her telescope and gaze at the stars
just as she was "what are you doing?"said a voice beind her Jessica jumpt it was Joshuwa."Funny last time i chect you werent a vampire".
"okay im just ganna go now"
"Go where?"
"to do my buisyness i ate hot dogz and they do not agree with me"said he pointing to some bushes.
"Too much information"with that he left.
She returned to her gazing and noticed that there was a medeo shower in progress
but there was one medeo in particular that stood out from the rest
Jessica took her eye of the telescope and saw......
IT WAS HEADING STRAIGHT FOR CAMP!!!

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CHAPTER 3
A Visitore To Earth
BUMP!!!
The medeo had bounced of a nearby tree and landed some where noth.
That can NOT be a medeo it would have distroyed the whole forest ,Jessica thought to herself.
Although she was scared she folowed the so-called-medeo it was very easy for it had left a trail of glowing green goo.
When she reached the end of the trial she found HUGE rock with a crack right down the middle.
"How in the hello did you get here",she wispherd to herself.
Suddenly she heard the sound of running foot steps behind her she turn but all that was there was some rattleing bushes moving because of the wind.
Jessica felt a sudden urge to get away so she began running back to camp.

Please comment.

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BANG!
Jessica had bumpt into some thing.
Whilist in fear of what it could be she rammembered she had a torch in her back pocket she reached her hand and....
"Got ya"she said then swiched it on.
It was some thing warm soft and see through suddenly it turnd around and looked right a her.
It was a.............
"ALIAN!"cried Jessica
Suddenly realising it was scary she screamed.
"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!".
in some strange way so did it.
Not knowing what she was donig she ran towards the cracked rock.

Still no commens.sigh

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""Calm down",Jessica said to herself,"ITS ONLY AN ALIAN WHO WANTS TO SUCK MY BRIANS OUT".
Then turned to the cracked rock and touched it without warning it turn into a white cloud.(akward)
I thought alians fly in sausers she asumed to herself .
"They do", said a voice inside her mind.
"Wha...how did you just do that?",she spoke dammandlingly in her mind.
"I know your thoughts as you known mine".
"No i dont know your mind in fact i dont even know you"
"As your demon i would never lie to you "
"What is a demon?"
"i'll explane later i come from a different world you wouldnt understand straight away"
"What where are you any way?"
"Turn around"said the voice
A dark figer emurged from the shadows.
"Hello i've been waiting to meet you".

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CHAPTER 4
A NEW DICOVERY
The shadow phantom steaped into the light of Jessica's torch.
It was a...
"BOY"said Jessica in confusion.
He looked about her age brown hair golden eyes.

human form

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"Jessica could you aleast try to remember my name?"he asked in a tone as if he knew her like the back of his hand.
Some thing was definately familiar but what?
"Is it AJ?"said she not knowing why she chose it.
He let out a smile at her,"Thats my nick name but i can feel its hard for you to remember "said he then turned to the white cloud.
"My names Alix Jaden Homer and i am your demon"
"Yes you told me already and my name is Jessica Vallen but i see you know how so?"