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Re: Dear RJ (Rocky's Journal)

Postby leaving soon » Mon Feb 13, 2012 5:41 am

poor you step step sis...
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Re: Dear RJ (Rocky's Journal)

Postby G๏l๔єภєאє » Wed Feb 15, 2012 4:00 am

sorry for the long wait. my shoulder is better now seeing as I havn't done any demanding excercise in a while. here's a new 'action-packed' entry from Rocky for Valentines!!
Happy Valentines everybody!!!!


Dear RJ

This new dog stared at me like I was an alien, or an undead. Which - in her view - I was.
"But...you were...dead..." she whispered.
"Yes. We've established that." I said, forging on ahead. "The question is, who are you? And what are we going here?"
The girl simply smiled.
"...As Caspian said. You're needed elsewhere." she said mysteriously.
I sighed, and Sirius growled behind me.
"That isn't answering my question. Who. Are. You?" I said clearly.
"My name's Lexi." she said.
"No. What's your actual name." I said impatiently. I was getting tired of all this mystery. I just wanted to find my sister and bring her home. The girl sensed my impatience and grinned.
"Fine then. My name's Kay." she turned to Sirius. "You know. You're girlfriend is smart, not trusting anybody. But how, if she doesn't trust me, how did she come by to trust you?"
Her words were carefully structured, not giving anything away, but placing seeds of doubt in the necessary places. I also turned to face Sirius.
"Sirius? What does she mean?" I asked him. He shifted his weight, uncomfortable. I sensed the air move behind me. Caspian had come back to watch the show. Kay was watching intently, smiling slightly. Even Hazel was watching, holding Peppi in her hands, stroking her head. I saw Peppi's tail flick, meaning she was alive. In normal circumstances, I would have been pleased, but I was to busy to feel anything other than doubt and curiosity.
"Nothing. She's lying. She's the captor, I'm a prisoner. Like you." he went to kiss my cheek, but I pulled away.
"Are you sure about that Sirius?" Kay asked, raising an eyebrow. She leant against the doorframe, looking at Sirius wearing an unreadable expression.
I looked back between them both, no idea what was happening.

I was so confused. Now I wish I'd never decided to go after Summer. It was a stupid idea. She always comes back. But everything that happened is my fault. I just wish I could turn back the clock to that moment and change everything. But I know I can't.

It's all my fault.
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Re: Dear RJ (Rocky's Journal)

Postby G๏l๔єภєאє » Wed Feb 15, 2012 5:54 am

bump.

anybody out there who likes it??? :)
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Re: Dear RJ (Rocky's Journal)

Postby Desayah » Wed Feb 15, 2012 9:05 am

awwwwwwwwwwwwhhhhhhhhhhhhhh so INTERESTING!!!!!!!!!
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Re: Dear RJ (Rocky's Journal)

Postby leaving soon » Mon Feb 20, 2012 8:33 am

awesome i hope you right moar plz plz plz plz plz
OOORRRRRRRR ILLLLL DDDDDDDIIIIIIEEEEEE
Oh Chicken Bananas, I CANT FORCE YOU!!!!! A good writer like you!!!
Oh Chicken Bananas what am i saying.....!!!!!!!!!!
i need my Chicken Banana 2 help me wait!!!!
Chicken Bananas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love Chicken Bananas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Chicken bananas Katniss write moare now or ill be a Chicken Banana !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ill die if you dont write moare nowwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: Dear RJ (Rocky's Journal)

Postby stilinski » Mon Feb 20, 2012 11:38 am

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Re: Dear RJ (Rocky's Journal)

Postby leaving soon » Sun Feb 26, 2012 4:30 am

moare. now

right now. :D
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Re: Dear RJ (Rocky's Journal)

Postby Nonexsitent » Sun Feb 26, 2012 4:53 am

You haven't wrote in ages, I want more :( write mooooorrrrrreeeee, or pm me for ideas if you got writers block :D
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Re: Dear RJ (Rocky's Journal)

Postby G๏l๔єภєאє » Sun Feb 26, 2012 5:17 am

okay. I think I've left it long enough!! here's another entry!!


Dear RJ

It's been a long while since I've looked back on that day, locked up in a shed surrounded by confusion. Kay had structured her words so carefully that it was like she'd read it from a script - placing doubt and confusion without giving anything away. I blame myself. If I hadn't gone after Summer, maybe it might not have happened.

I looked back again between Kay and Sirius. Rapt attention was on the faces of everyone as we listened to Kay, not wanting to listen but listening anyway.
"Come on Sirius. If you don't tell her, I will." Kay said.
"You wouldn't dare." Sirius growled. He moved around me, walking threateningly towards Kay. Her face showed no expression as he approached.
"Oh Sirius." she said calmly, laughter running through her voice. "How you've changed."
Sirius stopped dead. His voice dropped and his tone had a pleading note in it.
"Kay. Don't. I'm begging you." he said. I was shocked. Nothing like this had ever happened to me - and I'd never thought that Sirius could sound like that.
What's going on? What's happening?" I asked, thinking my voice would sound strong and demanding. Instead it came out high and scared, sounding childish and as if I was about to burst into tears.
"Nothing, Rockster. Kay's just kidding around." Sirius said. I knew he was trying to win my trust by using my old nickname. Instead, I pulled away.
"Don't 'Rockster' me! Tell me what's going on!" I said, my voice loud and angry.
Sirius sighed, and looked down at his feet.
"You know about the necklaces at school? Well, they mean a lot more than that. In the school, it just marks who you're friends with - what side your on. Out in the real world, it signifies gang members. These gangs are dangerous, violent. They can and are capable of killing a lot of people." Sirius glanced up into my eyes. I was surprised to see anger, fear and hate in them. I took a deep breath before continuing. "There's another one. Skull. It's the worst and deadliest of them all. They're trained assassins. My family has been part of them for generations. They forced me into joining, and there's no going back - unless you're on a suicide mission. I was sent here to watch you - you're family. They're not as they seem, Rocky. The Skull need to stop them, fast." My eyes grew wide. Sirius pulled something out from underneath a blanket. It was black, and was an odd L-shape with small pieces sticking out near the joining. The longest part glistened with all the oil and fat rubbed into it. It was an ancient weapon, a weapon I thought had been destroyed in and after The Wars because of it's effectiveness to kill. He pointed the gun at me, whispering the words so quietly that I had to strain my ears to catch them. "They need to stop them - they need to stop you. And they chose me to do it. I'm sorry Rocky - I never wanted to do this."
I closed my eyes, and waited for the pain and darkness. The shot rang out, loud and clear. It echoed down the lake, bouncing off the water for miles. My eyes flew open. Sirius was still holding the gun, but it wasn't smoking...and he wasn't the only one holding a gun either. Caspian stood in the open doorway, lowering a smoking gun till the barrel faced the ground. I screamed and ran to Sirius, who collapsed into my arms. Laying him gently on the ground, I eased the gun from his tight fist.
"I...I..." Sirius gasped. I put a paw on his chest, avoiding the blood flowing from just below his heart.
"Sssh." I said. "It's okay."
"No. It's...not. his words were faint but were insisting. "I'm sorry, Rocky. I'm sorry."
I stayed silent, tears running down my cheek as I watched his eyes slide close for the last time.
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Re: Dear RJ (Rocky's Journal)

Postby Nonexsitent » Sun Feb 26, 2012 5:25 am

ha take that Sirius You utter jerk go Caspian, how dare Sirius try and kill Rocky, now they just need to kill Caspian IF her tries to kill Rocky
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