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Re: тнє тяανєℓ ∂ιαяιєѕ σƒ α ∂σg ηαмє∂ вℓιтzєη~11th CHAPTER U

Postby RαrєHuskíєs » Thu Dec 22, 2011 6:03 am

Hehe(: Sorry! I had to!
“𝙳𝚘𝚐𝚜 𝚍𝚒𝚎. 𝙱𝚞𝚝 𝚍𝚘𝚐𝚜 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎, 𝚝𝚘𝚘. 𝚁𝚒𝚐𝚑𝚝 𝚞𝚙 𝚞𝚗𝚝𝚒𝚕 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚍𝚒𝚎, 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎. 𝚃𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎 𝚋𝚛𝚊𝚟𝚎, 𝚋𝚎𝚊𝚞𝚝𝚒𝚏𝚞𝚕 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎𝚜. 𝚃𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚙𝚛𝚘𝚝𝚎𝚌𝚝 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚒𝚛 𝚏𝚊𝚖𝚒𝚕𝚒𝚎𝚜. 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚕𝚘𝚟𝚎 𝚞𝚜. 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚖𝚊𝚔𝚎 𝚘𝚞𝚛 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎𝚜 𝚊 𝚕𝚒𝚝𝚝𝚕𝚎 𝚋𝚛𝚒𝚐𝚑𝚝𝚎𝚛. 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚍𝚘𝚗'𝚝 𝚠𝚊𝚜𝚝𝚎 𝚝𝚒𝚖𝚎 𝚋𝚎𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚊𝚏𝚛𝚊𝚒𝚍 𝚘𝚏 𝚝𝚘𝚖𝚘𝚛𝚛𝚘𝚠.”
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Re: тнє тяανєℓ ∂ιαяιєѕ σƒ α ∂σg ηαмє∂ вℓιтzєη~11th CHAPTER U

Postby AninaAna » Thu Dec 22, 2011 6:09 am

Of course


its probably something i should put in my writing... A Few cliff hangers you know other than teaching im hoping to be an author when i am finally old enough to qualify......... You should publish this story i reckon
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Re: тнє тяανєℓ ∂ιαяιєѕ σƒ α ∂σg ηαмє∂ вℓιтzєη~11th CHAPTER U

Postby gizmo, » Thu Dec 22, 2011 6:11 am

I like the 11th chapter. It was good. I'm still mad about you killing off Tarn >:(
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Re: тнє тяανєℓ ∂ιαяιєѕ σƒ α ∂σg ηαмє∂ вℓιтzєη~11th CHAPTER U

Postby AninaAna » Thu Dec 22, 2011 6:18 am

Ahhh but you have to have a turn around like that in the story it makes it seem more............ Realistic in fact it actually reminds me of a book called waggit about a dog who was deserted by his owner and lived with a pack of dogs who were all stray a really good story made me very upset when dear ol' whatsisname died......... Tragic i cried for a minute or two after that it was so sad
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Re: тнє тяανєℓ ∂ιαяιєѕ σƒ α ∂σg ηαмє∂ вℓιтzєη~11th CHAPTER U

Postby . silent » Thu Dec 22, 2011 10:01 am

[Sigh.] I guess that was your idea. I loved Tarn. I have no idea why you wanted him to die like that. But truly, Rare, you are genious. You are great at writing stories, and I hope you get told this as much as I do. By my family and friends.
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Re: тнє тяανєℓ ∂ιαяιєѕ σƒ α ∂σg ηαмє∂ вℓιтzєη~11th CHAPTER U

Postby RαrєHuskíєs » Thu Dec 22, 2011 10:09 am

Indeed, doggo nailed my intentions well. And sorry Shawty and Distant! Better times will come. I also didn't want Tarn to go, but that's just how it ended up. You know, it's hard to plan a true story. Things happen and ideas burst!(: I am glad you guys like it, and thank you Distant(: That makes me smile!
“𝙳𝚘𝚐𝚜 𝚍𝚒𝚎. 𝙱𝚞𝚝 𝚍𝚘𝚐𝚜 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎, 𝚝𝚘𝚘. 𝚁𝚒𝚐𝚑𝚝 𝚞𝚙 𝚞𝚗𝚝𝚒𝚕 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚍𝚒𝚎, 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎. 𝚃𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎 𝚋𝚛𝚊𝚟𝚎, 𝚋𝚎𝚊𝚞𝚝𝚒𝚏𝚞𝚕 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎𝚜. 𝚃𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚙𝚛𝚘𝚝𝚎𝚌𝚝 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚒𝚛 𝚏𝚊𝚖𝚒𝚕𝚒𝚎𝚜. 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚕𝚘𝚟𝚎 𝚞𝚜. 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚖𝚊𝚔𝚎 𝚘𝚞𝚛 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎𝚜 𝚊 𝚕𝚒𝚝𝚝𝚕𝚎 𝚋𝚛𝚒𝚐𝚑𝚝𝚎𝚛. 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚍𝚘𝚗'𝚝 𝚠𝚊𝚜𝚝𝚎 𝚝𝚒𝚖𝚎 𝚋𝚎𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚊𝚏𝚛𝚊𝚒𝚍 𝚘𝚏 𝚝𝚘𝚖𝚘𝚛𝚛𝚘𝚠.”
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Re: тнє тяανєℓ ∂ιαяιєѕ σƒ α ∂σg ηαмє∂ вℓιтzєη~11th CHAPTER U

Postby like a king. » Thu Dec 22, 2011 10:12 am

I think we all loved Tarn, and he will be remembered. I'm still crying though. But maybe, maybe Ginger has a resemblance to Tarn. I really hope so.
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Re: тнє тяανєℓ ∂ιαяιєѕ σƒ α ∂σg ηαмє∂ вℓιтzєη~11th CHAPTER U

Postby RαrєHuskíєs » Thu Dec 22, 2011 10:35 am

He certainly will be. And sorry your crying Wise, but I am happy to know I can hit heartstrings with my writing. And maybe, maybe she does(:
“𝙳𝚘𝚐𝚜 𝚍𝚒𝚎. 𝙱𝚞𝚝 𝚍𝚘𝚐𝚜 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎, 𝚝𝚘𝚘. 𝚁𝚒𝚐𝚑𝚝 𝚞𝚙 𝚞𝚗𝚝𝚒𝚕 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚍𝚒𝚎, 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎. 𝚃𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎 𝚋𝚛𝚊𝚟𝚎, 𝚋𝚎𝚊𝚞𝚝𝚒𝚏𝚞𝚕 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎𝚜. 𝚃𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚙𝚛𝚘𝚝𝚎𝚌𝚝 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚒𝚛 𝚏𝚊𝚖𝚒𝚕𝚒𝚎𝚜. 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚕𝚘𝚟𝚎 𝚞𝚜. 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚖𝚊𝚔𝚎 𝚘𝚞𝚛 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎𝚜 𝚊 𝚕𝚒𝚝𝚝𝚕𝚎 𝚋𝚛𝚒𝚐𝚑𝚝𝚎𝚛. 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚍𝚘𝚗'𝚝 𝚠𝚊𝚜𝚝𝚎 𝚝𝚒𝚖𝚎 𝚋𝚎𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚊𝚏𝚛𝚊𝚒𝚍 𝚘𝚏 𝚝𝚘𝚖𝚘𝚛𝚛𝚘𝚠.”
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Re: тнє тяανєℓ ∂ιαяιєѕ σƒ α ∂σg ηαмє∂ вℓιтzєη~11th CHAPTER U

Postby RαrєHuskíєs » Thu Dec 22, 2011 2:36 pm

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“𝙳𝚘𝚐𝚜 𝚍𝚒𝚎. 𝙱𝚞𝚝 𝚍𝚘𝚐𝚜 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎, 𝚝𝚘𝚘. 𝚁𝚒𝚐𝚑𝚝 𝚞𝚙 𝚞𝚗𝚝𝚒𝚕 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚍𝚒𝚎, 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎. 𝚃𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎 𝚋𝚛𝚊𝚟𝚎, 𝚋𝚎𝚊𝚞𝚝𝚒𝚏𝚞𝚕 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎𝚜. 𝚃𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚙𝚛𝚘𝚝𝚎𝚌𝚝 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚒𝚛 𝚏𝚊𝚖𝚒𝚕𝚒𝚎𝚜. 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚕𝚘𝚟𝚎 𝚞𝚜. 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚖𝚊𝚔𝚎 𝚘𝚞𝚛 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎𝚜 𝚊 𝚕𝚒𝚝𝚝𝚕𝚎 𝚋𝚛𝚒𝚐𝚑𝚝𝚎𝚛. 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚍𝚘𝚗'𝚝 𝚠𝚊𝚜𝚝𝚎 𝚝𝚒𝚖𝚎 𝚋𝚎𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚊𝚏𝚛𝚊𝚒𝚍 𝚘𝚏 𝚝𝚘𝚖𝚘𝚛𝚛𝚘𝚠.”
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Re: тнє тяανєℓ ∂ιαяιєѕ σƒ α ∂σg ηαмє∂ вℓιтzєη~11th CHAPTER U

Postby gizmo, » Thu Dec 22, 2011 3:22 pm

I am still upset over Tarn as well. But, I understand what you are saying Huskies. Better times will come. Plus, Ginger seems quite interesting xD. When will you put up another chapter? I am quite interested on what will happen at the pound xD
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