If I could be who I used to be.....Horror Type Story~

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If I could be who I used to be.....Horror Type Story~

Postby alone-in-pompeii » Wed Dec 07, 2011 8:27 am

When I was little I remember how I drew stick men in shocking pink under a bright blue sky with a block coloured yellow sun, this is how some people look at the world, most people , but not me. So I`ll start from the beggining.
It was a normalish Monday night , I was chatting to my BFF on the phone instead of homework(typical me) when I heard a scream coming from the other end of the receiver, it was Abby without a doubt, I screamed "Abby talk to me! Whats happening?" But no answer came, Just a piercing BEEEEEEP. She was gone. But how did I know that? I was unfortunately right. And little did I know, the same would happen to me.

Thanks for reading, FIRST STORY EVER!
It is quite amateur, please comment, praise and criticise welcome.
I will write more if anyone likes it.
Also, just a warning, there is NOT a happy ending, at all.
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Postby alone-in-pompeii » Wed Dec 07, 2011 8:30 am

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Postby alone-in-pompeii » Thu Dec 08, 2011 5:24 am

Bump bump bumpety bump.
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Postby Peaches. » Fri Dec 09, 2011 1:15 pm

woah! write more quick!
As soon as i saw "Horror Type story" I knew i would love it~~
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Postby alone-in-pompeii » Sat Dec 10, 2011 6:26 am

I PROMISE I will write more but I wish there were I few more comments.
Part 2 will be tommorow
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Postby alone-in-pompeii » Sat Dec 10, 2011 6:50 am

So there I am little old me , screaming my head off when there comes a KNOCK at the door.
Abby? That was my first thought, but that was shattered when a male voice says something, it`s muffled but I can still make it out,
"GET OUT, NOW!" Muffled the guy. "PLEASE, OR THEY WILL GET YOU!" When you have a brother like mine you are not going to take this seriously, so being me, I open the door........ But never saw who was there.

NEXT PART COMING SOON!
I said tmoz for this but I decided to do it now.
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Postby alone-in-pompeii » Sat Dec 10, 2011 6:51 am

And it is short I know, but I needed to use the bathroom.
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Postby alone-in-pompeii » Sat Dec 10, 2011 7:22 am

Anyone?
Is anyone gonna comment?
Please! :(
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Postby alone-in-pompeii » Mon Jan 02, 2012 9:16 am

I will not write more if there is no comments.
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