||Poetry|| Please comment!

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Postby snowbutt. » Sat Nov 12, 2011 9:23 am

! hope u add poems soon :D! ~im stalking this post~
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It goes to show, I hope that you know that you are
What my dreams are made of
Can't fall asleep, can't fall asleep
I lay in my bed awake, in my bed awake at night
As I dream of you
I'll fall in love, you'll fall in love
It could mean everything, everything to me
I can't imagine being anywhere else

They say that love is forever
Your forever is all that I need
Please stay as long as you need
Can't promise that things won't be broken
But I swear that I will never leave
Please stay forever with me

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Postby ColorsOfTheWind » Sat Nov 12, 2011 9:26 am

*cricket cricket* STALCKER ALERT!!!! lol, jk. Ill try and find some more of mine.
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Postby ColorsOfTheWind » Tue Nov 29, 2011 1:13 pm

BUMPITY BUMP BUMP!
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Postby Another World » Mon Dec 05, 2011 3:14 am

:) They're good!


I'm back in London, I'm running down Columbia Road
They're selling sunflowers cheap
I'm reading novels, I'm dating, but just dating for sport
I'm getting coffees for free
I hang all my art and I dance with the coven
As the rain falls hard on the street and I
I'm doing better, I made it to September
I can finally breathe ~ There It Goes


Long live the walls we crashed through
All the kingdom lights shined just for me and you
I was screaming long live all the magic we made
And bring on all the pretenders
One day, we will be remembered ~ Long Live


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Postby ColorsOfTheWind » Mon Dec 05, 2011 3:15 am

Thanks! Sorry I haven't posted new ones yet, but I can't find any of my old ones!
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Postby ColorsOfTheWind » Tue Dec 20, 2011 8:50 am

Hey followers! If I have an left....ANYWAYS, I added a new poem, and soon to add another one. I'm sorry it took so long.
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Postby LauraK » Sat Dec 24, 2011 10:47 am

I will post one of mine in a min...
but do you ever worry that ppl will steal your poetry? I do...worry i mean...
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Postby ColorsOfTheWind » Sat Dec 24, 2011 10:51 am

Well, I kind of leave that to the mods, hoping they catch them. But I do grouse a bit, just incase. And I don't steal poetry, I wrote these at school, and no one can say otherwise! I got worked up, and thanks!
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Postby ☼ Ѳиcɛ Ʋρσи α Ƨʋи » Sat Dec 24, 2011 1:24 pm

I really enjoyed reading Silver Moon. There was a sort of flow to it. The others were nice as well. x]
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we join up with them and fall into
mutually satisfying weirdness—and call it love—true love.”

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Postby ColorsOfTheWind » Sat Jan 28, 2012 7:16 pm

Thanks!
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