||Poetry|| Please comment!

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Postby ColorsOfTheWind » Wed Nov 09, 2011 2:01 pm

YERP! Lolz. I write more up-beat stuff too. Just can't find them.
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Postby hotnoodle101 » Thu Nov 10, 2011 1:50 pm

Are you a Witch? XP
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Postby ColorsOfTheWind » Thu Nov 10, 2011 1:52 pm

YOU CAN'T PROVE ANYTHING!
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Postby hotnoodle101 » Thu Nov 10, 2011 1:56 pm

XD Just asking because I'm one myself.
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Postby ColorsOfTheWind » Thu Nov 10, 2011 2:05 pm

OHMIGOSH! We can have a witch party! WOOHOO!

I learned a spell! Look.

Cruor pectoris mei, tutela tua est.
Vita vital meae, corripiens tuam, corripiens meam.
Corpus corporis mei, medulla mensque,
Anima animae, animam nostram conecte.
Cruor pectoris mei, luna mea, aestus menus.
Cruor pectoris mei. Fatum meum, mea salus.


It means...

Blood of my heart, protection is thine.
Life of my life, taking yours, taking mine.
Body of my body, marrow and mind,
Soul of my soul, to our spirit bind.
Blood of my heart, my tides, my moon.
Blood of my heart. My salvation. My doom.
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Postby hotnoodle101 » Thu Nov 10, 2011 2:48 pm

Wow. Crazy Latin skills. Never could learn it myself. XDDD
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Postby ColorsOfTheWind » Fri Nov 11, 2011 9:29 am

lol.
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Postby Lovely Dreamer » Fri Nov 11, 2011 3:16 pm

beautiful poetry, I think you have real talent! Btw, thanks for reading my story... >u<
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Postby snowbutt. » Fri Nov 11, 2011 3:58 pm

wow... theese poems are like ezactly like me... :( im always being called a witch, rumurs spreading round, i have made up poems and storries.. im just afraid people will laugh, yeah i may be emo, and have no friends. but i still have feeling

WHEN I WALK IN THIS IS WHAT I SEE THE WHOLE CROWD STOPS AND THEY STARRIN AT ME. I GOT PASSION IN MY PANTS AND IM NOT AFRAID TO SHOW IT IM SEXY AND I KNOW IT :D :P
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It goes to show, I hope that you know that you are
What my dreams are made of
Can't fall asleep, can't fall asleep
I lay in my bed awake, in my bed awake at night
As I dream of you
I'll fall in love, you'll fall in love
It could mean everything, everything to me
I can't imagine being anywhere else

They say that love is forever
Your forever is all that I need
Please stay as long as you need
Can't promise that things won't be broken
But I swear that I will never leave
Please stay forever with me

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Postby ColorsOfTheWind » Sat Nov 12, 2011 9:21 am

lol! I know! That how i feel when I walk around school. And Thanks Lovely Dreamer!
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