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Postby ColorsOfTheWind » Tue Nov 08, 2011 12:51 pm

Hello! I had a very bad day at school, so my poems are kinda depressing. I would like to share them with you. Please tell me if you like them!



Perfect

Everyone thinks black is an evil color
Cold as stone, never forgiving
Well, stone is gray, not black
To me, it is not cold.
It is warm as a summer sun
Touching every crack and filling it with warmth.
It looks like a spring breeze
Intermingling with the colors of the wind
Peaceful and causing no harm to anyone anywhere
It smells like fresh baked brownies on a cold winter day
The rich dark chocolate scent floating through the house
It sounds like my favorite song
The harmony is perfect
It tastes like rich hot chocolate
Warming every part in your body
Life is perfect
Everything is perfect
But it's not
Not when your life depends on four insane parents
Not when you hate everyone and everything
And especially not when black is your favorite color.


Black Rose


You may think I'm harmless
Just standing here, unable to leave my tortured life
Surrounded by my peers, I stand out

You may think I can't do any damage to anyone
Being as small as I am
You don't know how wrong you are

A rose may seem beautiful
But when you touch it
It's claw sharp thorns pierce your heart

You don't know me
You can't help me

I am the single Black Rose
Swimming in an ocean of red
Trying desperately to escape


Witch


You winder why I dint like people
Always thinking of themselves, not others
Singling out the freaks from the geeks
And always showing off their new stuff

I was classified
I'm not a freak
I'm not a geek
I'm a witch

Devil. Demon. Witch
That what I hear when I walk in the halls
I've been branded, stripped form my original life with friends
Everyone hates me

Do I let that stop me?
No.
Do I give them the satisfaction of knowing they beat me?
They wish

Yes I am branded
Yes I have a new reputation
Here's what I say to them
"You want a witch? Fine. Then a witch I'll be."

Silver Moon
I stand in the darkness of my life
My fears are more alive,
My dreams slipping away.

Above it all, the Silver Moon
Shines stunningly bright.
It breaks through the darkness when nothing else can.

Fears and dreams become equals
Together under the light
Of my Silver Moon

Love and hate
Become one and the same
Under my Silver Moon

I see your face
Smiling clearly under the light
Of my Silver Moon

For the first time,
I realize.....
You are my Silver Moon.

Starcrossed
Can't find sheet, will add later.
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Postby ColorsOfTheWind » Tue Nov 08, 2011 1:02 pm

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Postby mindless. » Tue Nov 08, 2011 1:20 pm

I love these poems!!!
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  • fav. animals;;
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  • fav. thing to draw;;
    big cats.
  • fandoms;;
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    subject to change.
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fun with my lifestyle at
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Postby ColorsOfTheWind » Tue Nov 08, 2011 1:21 pm

Thanks!
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Postby Keke14 » Tue Nov 08, 2011 1:23 pm

((I like the first one, the second one, and the third one! So true, thanks for sharing with us!!!))
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"Come on, ...................
I can't do this without you."

"Yᴇs ʏᴏᴜ ᴄᴀɴ."

"Yeah........................
...But I wouldn't want to."

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I'm Incomplete
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Postby Sila » Tue Nov 08, 2011 1:26 pm

I love Perfect and Witch!
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Postby Destiny » Tue Nov 08, 2011 1:36 pm

There alittle dark...I prefer to read more positive things.
But the writings decent.
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Postby Sila » Tue Nov 08, 2011 1:45 pm

Everyone is different, that's how she likes to express herself^^
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Postby ColorsOfTheWind » Wed Nov 09, 2011 1:57 pm

No, actually, the reason they are dark is because I was depressed all through Spanish class, when I wrote them. So...yea.
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Postby Sila » Wed Nov 09, 2011 1:58 pm

Oh ok
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