by Rolly-chan » Mon Apr 23, 2012 7:08 am
Thanks for bumping! Now I've read the first story as well =)
I love stories about the seven sins - there's so much you can do with them! And what you've thought up sounds interesting ^^ Though that scene kinda seems to go nowhere. But maybe it's because it's not finished? It sounds like you stopped in the middle. But other than that I like Rie's voice and her not noticing how she is under the influence of the disease herself ^^
(btw - I love that picture in your signature, it's so cute! Where's it from, if you don't mind me asking?)