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Postby melogo10 » Thu Dec 01, 2011 8:12 am

I thought it might be a little but i LOVE it
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Postby Nuregami » Sun Dec 04, 2011 5:02 am

crhyoyo wrote:Sorry for the late post, I though I hit send but my computer must have screwed up C: I loved the new entry and don't think you went overboard at all! Nomnom new pets C:


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Knowing the young denographic of CS, I didn't want to add to much. ^^




melogo10 wrote:I thought it might be a little but i LOVE it


Thanks. ^^ What did you think was to much? May I ask so I can do better next time... xD
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Postby olivionary » Sun Dec 04, 2011 5:24 am

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Postby Nuregami » Sun Dec 04, 2011 4:38 pm

N O V . 23RD
9:44 PM



"What is it?" I asked.

Carrying my light weight suitcase, I walked beside Rake with careful footing on the dirt path towards the glowing dot; which as we neared it it shown a few tents. In the corner of my eye I looked over to rake who slowed down and looked towards the ground. He sighed and stopped walked.

"What's wrong?" I asked again, turning towards him.

"Master..." Rake rasped. "What Dante told you was a lie..."
"What does that mean?" I questioned.

I was told very many things by Dante, and also many of those things have me in the situation I am in today. And to just hear that anything that he has told me is a lie made me hot with anger; even without knowing what he had lied about. I blamed him for my situation. I blamed him for where I am. I blame him for how I am today. It was his fault what happened, happened. And it is his fault for his own future fate.

"What did he lie about?" I demand after Rake didn't answer me, looking him in his deep-set eyes.
"He told you he want demons to go back to hell, right?"
"Correct; but what does that have to do with anything?" I answered, impatiently.
"He just wants them to take over earth."



After Rake said that, there was a good three minute pause, with no sound what so ever in the African nothing until a gentle breeze blew past us, shifted my fallen-down hair. I sighed and shook my head, angry, yet confused all at the same time.
"Seriously?"
"Yes master; I swear on my slave-hood to you."
"Stop!" I yelled. "I am not your master, and you are not my slave! Tell me, is this true!" I was a demanding little bugger.
"Yes... Ben." Rake said, lost for words for something besides 'Master'. "I swear on our... friendship."

Hearing Rake say 'On our friendship' made me smile a tad, as now I truely did have one friend on the face of this planet; but it couldn't mask the fact on how angry I was about this.
He used me! He used me; plain and simple, with nothing more about it. The fact that I could be so gullible to trust that man burned my cold body with anger as the gentle breeze blew my hair. The fact that I threw my entire life away burned as well, as if it was coal thrown into the furnace of my soul. I could never get anything I had back, I could never go home to visit mom, I will never graduate high school, I will never see my friends go up to be Mommy's and daddy's, I'll be alone. Or will I?

Before I go further into the story; lets remember what Dante first told me:

"Your mission is to resolve anything demons have in your world so they can come home."
"Do everything you can so they can come home."


Exact words, he spoke as he sun me around like a little ballerina. He never said what the demons would do once they were back home; and I guess that's why. Honestly, I beg that Rake was telling the truth, but then again I beg that he was lying. I feared that Dante would take Rake away from me, and vice versa. I was scared he would kill me, or vice versa, again. I strongly feared that man, that man that I had seen only once or twice, that man the evoked so much fear in my soul.

"I lie to you not."
Rake spoke, sliding his bony arms around me and squeezing me against his boney chest. I could feel the sincerely, and he was not lieing.

"What... am I gonna do...?"
I spoke, burning my face into Rake's pasty shoulder, before the gentle breeze that flowed past turned into a gust, whipping my bun the rest of the way out, and then into a storm blowing dust and taking Rake off his feet.

It was darker than night.
Nothing. No light what so ever. Darker than the African night that we stood in; with no glowing dot.

Only the sound of heels against concrete, walking fast towards out direction; making me quiver in pure fear. Rake held me tightly as I shook, and to this day I swore I heard my father whisper at that moment: "It will be alright, Benny."



"You F O O L!"


Which one did he speak to?
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Postby Lions » Sun Dec 04, 2011 4:42 pm

More oh please I beg for more<3 The best entry so far c:
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Postby Nuregami » Sun Dec 04, 2011 4:46 pm

crhyoyo wrote:More oh please I beg for more<3 The best entry so far c:


Oh you. x3

I'm going to do a 'mini' page right now; but it's not going to have to much in it like the rest. <3
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Postby Lions » Sun Dec 04, 2011 4:50 pm

Anything to feed your little stalker c:
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Postby Nuregami » Sun Dec 04, 2011 5:02 pm

N O V . 23RD
9:50 PM



I felt myself yanked from Rake's arms and thrown onto the floor, the cold concrete floor.
"You IGNORATE fool!"

I heard Dante's voice, a whip, and a whimper from Rake.
"I told you. I told you to keep your ugly mouth shut and I K N E W not to trust a pathetic excuse for a demon like you! You ugly mutt-"
Dante went on, yelling at Rake and kicking him.

This was something I feared.

Laying on the concrete floor, I nearly felt helpless. I couldn't help Rake, I couldn't over-power Dante. I was hopeless. I laid there in pity and tears every time I heard Dante curse at Rake, and punch him.
I could do one thing, which was pretty pointless, but it was something. Not planning ahead, it could of gotten myself beaten, but hey; it was something.

I sat my tiny body up, and frantically looked around the darkened room; with nothing to cross my eyes. I leaned forward and yelled with every inch of me:
"STOP!" In tears. "Please stop it wasn't his fault!"

The beating stopped, and the only thing I heard was Rake's whimpers.

"You think it's not his fault?" Dante spoke. "You think it's not!?" He yelled, with very much anger, coming towards me with the sound of heavy heels on the concrete. I braced myself and cringed awaiting to be struck.
"Dear god save me!" I screamed, high-pitched, crying with what was left of me.

"No, no NO!"


Numbness.
Numb... but... different.
I felt... light on my feet, light on my whole body exactly. I felt as if I floated among the stars, floating among the purple clouds of my dreams with the golden twinkling stars around, welcoming me into their realm.
But alas, my eyes remained shut.

"Open your eyes, young one."
A heavenly voice rang.

This time; I'm sure I'm dead.
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Postby Lions » Sun Dec 04, 2011 5:36 pm

OoO moar<333333
I vwonder when the new demons will arrive, and what happened to rake! ;(
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Re: f l a n k::. | Highly-Detailed Dairy Series. [posting op

Postby Nuregami » Sun Dec 04, 2011 5:45 pm

crhyoyo wrote:OoO moar<333333
I vwonder when the new demons will arrive, and what happened to rake! ;(


Well, i was going to start adding new demons right they got to africa, but I forgot and went a new route. -.-'
And poor, poor Rake.

I'm really glad you like it, it means alot that not only me likes my writing. xD
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