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Postby Nuregami » Fri Feb 03, 2012 3:02 pm

N O V . 25TH
3:37 AM




I nearly jumped out of my skin, startled, by a loud screech that come from behind me; probably outside. With my eyes wide and mouth gasping, I peered out the window where I would have guessed to be met with the darkness of the night; but to my surprise on odd, and very ugly, creature met my eyes. It stared at me crouched down and peering with it's bulbous eyes and saliva dripping mouth, with patchy fur that was covered with dirt and grime of the years.

"Oh god..." I gasped, backing up and holding myself up by the counter that stood below the mirror as it scratched gently on the window to come in. What in the world could this thing be? I never heard of anything that looked like it, and I'm pretty sure if it wasn't a severely mutated Hyena it was some sort of demon. Demon...

"H-Hello there...." I managed to sputter out. "Your quite a..cute creature." I chuckled out in fear. The large animal flicked it's ears and actually appeared to smile, with it's rotting gums moving back to form a giant smile.
"Can I help you little one? Ugh," I sighed. "You scared me." I came closer to the window and tapped it gently, tap, tap, as it kept it's smile and licked the window.
"Awuh... Your not so scary after all. I'll come out and pet you..." I said, smiling back to its ugly-cute face as I motioned for it to wait.


Tip-toeing past Rake in his usual restless-sleep and Tommo wrapped up burrito style in his blankets, I ever so slightly unlocked the door, holding the knob tightly, unlatching the second lock, and oh-so slowly turning the knob to open the door to the dark African morning.
"Here doggy, doggy...." I called, assuming it was canine, as I padded step by step around the motel as I spotted it come around the corner of the complex cautiously. It walked at a angle with it's head higher than it's rump, with stunning green and gold eyes that seemed to glow in the darkness, and chill me with goosebumps.
"Here doggy." I said gleefully, walking towards it with an outstretched palm for it to smell,
And that's where things so black.


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I woke up, dizzy, with my head and legs throbbing, back aching in our dark motel on Tommo's bed with him sitting beside me; scared from his wits as I could see from his sweat and wide eyes. I tried to shake off my light-headedness as the room spinning and lights flashed, and as I came more and more to awareness, the most god-awful sound came from the bathroom, similar to the screech that I heard earlier.
"Tommo..." I rasped. "Whats going on?"
Tommo scurried down and clung onto me, burying his face into my chest and trembling in fear.
"Whats going on?"
"I-I don't know...." He said, looking up to me with worried eyes as I could make out that the door was being slammed, with various screams and screeches within those slams. I help my head and slowly lifted Tommo from me and slung my legs out of the bed, which stung and had a hard time standing up.

"Rake?"
I asked, coming around the corner to see him holding the door shut, pushing it, and trying his best to keep something in there with all the strength of his thinner-than-the-average-model frame.
"Its okay. We have rats-" Rake muttered out between pushing himself more at the door.
"What is that..." I questioned, curious to find out what was going on. Nobody has answered any of my questions!
"Here." Rake rasped, as he gently cracked the door, as I peered into the filthy bathroom in it's wreckage to reveal the same creature whom I met at the window; leaping at us from a running start with it's rotting teeth exposed and patchy fur on end, bulging eyes even more bulbous than ever as it knocked Rake on his bony rump, hitting his head, and releasing it's self as Tommo screamed and hid under the bed blankets for his life.

"What the-" I screamed, shocked, as I watched the beast scurry over to Tommo and dig for him in the sheets, before Rake flung himself on it and wrestled it; the creature squirming around like a hog, and squealing like one to, as Rake caught it in his arms, squeezing the ever-living life of it.

"FINE! FINE! I GIVE IN!"
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Re: f l a n k::. | Highly-Detailed Dairy Series. [posting op

Postby Lions » Fri Feb 03, 2012 3:29 pm

00.00 Oh my gosh, best page ever!!!!!!!! Amazing!!
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Postby Nuregami » Sat Feb 04, 2012 1:56 pm

You.
Crhyoyo.
I've no clue if what you tell is is real; but honestly it don't matter: I love your dedication♥
Your certianly one of the things I remember when I write.
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I'll really miss CS. I'm just not into it like I used to be.

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Postby Foi » Sat Feb 04, 2012 4:39 pm

Oh wow. Awesome new chapter. <33
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Postby Lions » Sun Feb 05, 2012 10:08 am

Wow, you don't know how much that means to me. But honestly I love being able to get involved.<3 I love seeing what your amazing imagination can do with what little I give you. Deek sounded exactly as I planned her too. Simply amazing. And this, is the best diary I have ever read. It beats a few books I have read as well.(: Does stalker fan get a seek peak?:0 Just kidding(: I can't wait until you mind comes out with more, and I'll be here all the way.(; And last but not least, every.single.word I speak is true. Cross my heart hope to die stuck a needle in my eye.•.=
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Postby Nuregami » Sun Feb 05, 2012 11:59 am

N O V . 25TH
4:06 AM



"Let me G O! You rancid beast..."
The squirming and thrashing creature, to my surprised, stopped it's madness and spoke in a rather feminine voice for such a hideous being. Rake's eyes widened as he looked at me sharply for what to do, either to put it down or hold onto it tight; and I nodded yes for it's release.
THUD!
It fell onto the brown carpet, landing on it's rump.
"You-" Cursed the animal as she shook her patchy pelt out, releasing a scent of rot. "How could you just throw me round like that?"
"How could you attack Ben!?" Rake spoke up, waving his stick-for-arms up nearly hitting the light fixture.
"Well..." It said huffing and standing up, waltzing around us in a trot. "She came into my territory."
"What happened?" I questioned, looking back and forth between Rake and the beast, my eyes following it as it moved.
"You didn't need to attack, Ben could died." Rake rasped, yanking it up by it's neck tuff. "What are you?"

"LET. ME . GO." It screeched, biting at Rakes wrist as he moved them up to prevent being bit; before he let go of his grip and sent it plopping onto the ground as it did before, with a thud and it falling onto it's rump.
"For your information:" It barked in a lady-like tone. "I am a beautiful young woman. Don't you see my curls?"
"I smell fish," I spoke up, giggling as she looked back sharply towards me and gave me the most god awful look.
"And I smell- well... as I as saying." She caught herself, before cursing. A lady keeps her temper. "Deek; my name is. Charmed, as I am sure."
"I don't see a lady," Questioned Rake. "I see a ugly dog."
"How D A R E you!" Screeched Deek, with a growl in between words, as she lunged forward and slung herself onto Rake, who stood here as if nothing happened and wrestled with her.
"No, no ma'am- calm please-" He rasped as she slurred and cursed at him, Rake obviously not knowing how to deal with such a situation.
So much for a lady keeping her temper.

While watching them go back and forth with insults and pleas to calm down, I sighed and plopped myself onto the bed, looking back, and noticing Tommo still under the bed sheets curled up in the fetal position cringing to himself for dear life.
This is what surprised me.
I gently leaned back and turned over the sheets to reveal Tommo, just laying there; face more pale than the off-white sheets, and stained from tears?
"Whats wrong?" I questioned, honestly confused to the situation as Deek and Rake went on in the background.
"T-That..." He gasped, pointing towards Deek and Rake.
"Honey; its just some kind of Animal. Rake has it handled."
"N-no..." Tommo stuttered. "There's no animal there... or Rake."
I cocked my head, turning around expecting to find something completely different; but to only see Rake and Deek still carrying on, Deek now in a headlock.
"Yes, it to sweetheart."
"No its not!" He yelled, getting frustrated. "Its just two... dark... shadow-y things... just moving."
Turning around to get one more look, with nothing as different as the last time, I gave Tommo a confused look as his wide emerald eyes sparkled with tears of fear. As I was about to reassure him nothing was wrong; a wave of understanding came over me: Ze's gone.

Ze was the only reason he had anything to do with demons or anything of that nature; and that brings me to another thing, Deek wasn't an animal.
"Oh Thomas..." I gasped, bending down to wrap my arms around him, comforting him.
To me; I only saw my goofy and somewhat frightening best friend trying to calm and restrain a annoying and primadonna she-dog or whatever Deek is. To Tommo, what he probably saw was something completely different, and unexplainable and that is what terrified him.

It's the unknown which terrifies, and haunts most people. For Tommo; yes Ze's overbearing and insane personality was freaky.,but now, with no need to see anything of the 'supernatural' nature brings a whole new world of terror. For me; its my future. The unexplainable, which can be tangible or not, creates fear in both you and me, without any doubt. The thing that moves in the night, sliding its self across your window and stirring up fear inside you (which is more than likely Rake), the possibilities of a mad-man who walks your very street nearing your house could do, AIDS; things we can't explain.

"Ben... I think I'm scared..." Tommo squeaked, burring himself under the covers once again.
And that is where I've had enough of this.
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Offically quitting CS. I'll miss the comminity but mostly the wonderful staff. This site has the B E S T staff ever, along with the best followers. I'm giving away all my pets.
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I'll really miss CS. I'm just not into it like I used to be.

I'll come back, when you need me~
No need to stay around♥

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Postby Lions » Mon Feb 06, 2012 6:52 am

Hehe, "Dont you see my curls?" ;P I like the twist on Deek. C:
Only someone as talented as you could do that with so little.<3
Poor Thomas.<3 I guess I would be freaked out my shadowy things moving around on the carpet too. 00.00
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Postby Nuregami » Fri Feb 17, 2012 10:42 am

Wellp. Flank is almost dead... so I'll need to type up a few more pages tonight..Dx
Ive been sooo so busy, with the boyfriend, school, and friends.
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Postby olivionary » Fri Feb 17, 2012 10:48 am

I still here :D

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Postby Foi » Fri Feb 17, 2012 2:52 pm

b u m p ? :c
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