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Re: f l a n k::. | Highly-Detailed Dairy Series. [posting op

Postby Nuregami » Fri Jan 20, 2012 6:37 pm

Betta132 wrote:YAWP!!! YOU MUST WRITE MORE!!!! :clap: :D :thumbup:

Well thank you.
I will write more every so often.
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Postby Foi » Fri Jan 20, 2012 8:54 pm

This Diary Series is absolutely s t u n n i n g .
I love how it's set out. <3
Also, it's so different from all the other diaries around CS. Different is good.
The title is very good too. c;

You definitely have a talent. o3o
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Re: f l a n k::. | Highly-Detailed Dairy Series. [posting op

Postby Nuregami » Sat Jan 21, 2012 7:29 am

f o x y wrote:This Diary Series is absolutely s t u n n i n g .
I love how it's set out. <3
Also, it's so different from all the other diaries around CS. Different is good.
The title is very good too. c;

You definitely have a talent. o3o


Why thank you, truely, it means S O much to me to see people say that; and I'm so glad you like it.
It's people like you and everybody else that reads it that make it worth while to write<3
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Its an interesting competition that won't last long, so get your mitts on my pets soon.
I'll really miss CS. I'm just not into it like I used to be.

I'll come back, when you need me~
No need to stay around♥

-The ending song from Narnia.

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Re: f l a n k::. | Highly-Detailed Dairy Series. [posting op

Postby Nuregami » Sat Jan 21, 2012 12:36 pm

Wellp... since nobody entered I guess ima just go ahead and type another page then.
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I'll really miss CS. I'm just not into it like I used to be.

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No need to stay around♥

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Re: f l a n k::. | Highly-Detailed Dairy Series. [posting op

Postby Foi » Wed Jan 25, 2012 11:56 am

Nuregami wrote:Wellp... since nobody entered I guess ima just go ahead and type another page then.

Please do.
Sorry I didn't enter, I couldn't figure it out. :c
May as well have a guess now, even though it doesn't count.

Tommo will start missing her? And then he'll take it out on Benny?
I don't know. xD
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Postby Nuregami » Wed Jan 25, 2012 12:34 pm

N O V . 2 5TH
3:33 AM




I found myself floating in a large white room with walls painted without a seam that seemed to stretch on forever, and ever with a calm feeling sweeping over my body, as I gently closed my eyes.
"It's okay, Ben. You certainly done the right think."
I heard, jerking my eyes wide open to see that same large white lion with the curly abundance of hair for it's mane standing in front of me.
"Wh-What?" I managed to sputter out.
"Ze. All she caused was pain; being the mass of negative energy and nightmares from Thomas' youth."
I gently touched my feet to the ground in awe, nodding at the white lion as I hit the floor. This was it up close; beauty in his entirety. He gave me a slight lion-smile, nodding his head back to me, with his endless shimmering mane bounced with luster. I stepped a few steps closer, knowing that by now I am becoming numb to fear, and staring him strait in his calming silver eyes.
"Who are you, how can you talk?"
"Don't you remember me, Ben?" He said in a sly giggle. "It's me, Gabriel. Don't you remember?"
I took a step closer, so very cautious, that I would wake up.
"Come closer."
He spoke as I loosen myself up and stepped closer, and closer, extending my hand to pet his white chest fur and feeling the softness of his pelt between my tiny fingers. My senses opened up and as I petted this lion, my mind flashing back to home, when right before I left, of the little white doggy that I had who was my best friend; Her white fur between my fingers when she was a puppy was ever so soft, just like this lion's.
"Remember; they can't hurt you... Now do me a favor?"
"Sure," I said removing my hand, and looking up yo his soft smile. "Anything."
"Do me a favor and wake up?"


Jerking awake from what seemed like a heavenly dream, I shot strait up on my pallet constructed of pillows and blankets on he disgusting floor in a cold sweat, trembling from excitement, and somewhat of fear. I huffed for breath as I looked over at Rake, who twitched rapidly like a running dog in it's sleep, and drooling like one to; and then to Tommo who laid in the bed I gave up for him all wrapped up in the white blanket and bed sheets.
Good. I didn't wake anybody.
Wiping my face, I shook my head and slowly pushed my short legs up and caught my breath, turning to stagger myself into the bathroom to investigate the mysterious voice.

Was that a dream? I hope with every ounce of my body and all of my worth that it wasn't. I mean... it felt so real, so life like, so realistic that it really should have been real life. I secretly yearned for that floating, weightless feeling right now, as I walked through the tiny filth infested motel I rented with whoever's money.

Reaching the bathroom, I switched on the light using my arm and looked around:
Nothing, but my reflection of the creamy pale skin I dawned and the messy bedhead tangled with my amulet.



"CREEEEEEEE"
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Its an interesting competition that won't last long, so get your mitts on my pets soon.
I'll really miss CS. I'm just not into it like I used to be.

I'll come back, when you need me~
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Re: f l a n k::. | Highly-Detailed Dairy Series. [posting op

Postby Nuregami » Wed Jan 25, 2012 12:37 pm

f o x y wrote:
Nuregami wrote:Wellp... since nobody entered I guess ima just go ahead and type another page then.

Please do.
Sorry I didn't enter, I couldn't figure it out. :c
May as well have a guess now, even though it doesn't count.

Tommo will start missing her? And then he'll take it out on Benny?
I don't know. xD


I'll have to think about that one, I'm stumped.... XDD
So I wrote you guises a shortie. 83 (<---Uber kitty facee!)
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I'll really miss CS. I'm just not into it like I used to be.

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Re: f l a n k::. | Highly-Detailed Dairy Series. [posting op

Postby Lions » Thu Jan 26, 2012 8:49 am

Amazing.new.entry!!!!!
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Re: f l a n k::. | Highly-Detailed Dairy Series. [posting op

Postby Nuregami » Fri Feb 03, 2012 12:27 pm

Why you no correct me on spelling and grammar? D:
I'll be going in and editing everything (spelling and grammarwize, and Ze's hood), before I go on withthe next page (I've been SOO busy!! >3<)

Anywho; I really need to get on with it, I have a special character I really want to use whom somebody special asked me to make♥

Anywho, sorryif anybody has lost intrest in it, I'm very busy lazy. .__.


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I'll really miss CS. I'm just not into it like I used to be.

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Re: f l a n k::. | Highly-Detailed Dairy Series. [posting op

Postby Lions » Fri Feb 03, 2012 12:58 pm

Why would anyone loose interest?! This is the best, most amazing diary ever. .0.
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