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Re: f l a n k::. | Highly-Detailed Dairy Series. [posting op

Postby Nuregami » Mon Jan 02, 2012 11:38 am

crhyoyo wrote:Ohhh, good short page!!!

Thanks.! ^^
I'm S U P E R excited to finish what happens after that short page...
although it might get in the way of Ben's 'journey' lol.
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Offically quitting CS. I'll miss the comminity but mostly the wonderful staff. This site has the B E S T staff ever, along with the best followers. I'm giving away all my pets.
Its an interesting competition that won't last long, so get your mitts on my pets soon.
I'll really miss CS. I'm just not into it like I used to be.

I'll come back, when you need me~
No need to stay around♥

-The ending song from Narnia.

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Postby Lions » Tue Jan 03, 2012 10:58 am

As long as its coming, I dont mind what its about C:
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Re: f l a n k::. | Highly-Detailed Dairy Series. [posting op

Postby Nuregami » Tue Jan 10, 2012 9:37 am

Havent had time to work on flank...
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I have a letter to write, then I'll do a few pages. ^^
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Offically quitting CS. I'll miss the comminity but mostly the wonderful staff. This site has the B E S T staff ever, along with the best followers. I'm giving away all my pets.
Its an interesting competition that won't last long, so get your mitts on my pets soon.
I'll really miss CS. I'm just not into it like I used to be.

I'll come back, when you need me~
No need to stay around♥

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Postby Lions » Tue Jan 10, 2012 9:48 am

Yay C:
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Re: f l a n k::. | Highly-Detailed Dairy Series. [posting op

Postby oakdenugg » Tue Jan 10, 2012 1:22 pm

Ahhh! Splendid! <333333

Very good descriptions about the characters, and very nice events that have a lot of suspense! I love it! You've added a new stalker to your list ma'am! c: And do you need any more characters...? ;) I may have some ideas!
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Re: f l a n k::. | Highly-Detailed Dairy Series. [posting op

Postby Nuregami » Tue Jan 10, 2012 1:53 pm

oakdenugg wrote:
Ahhh! Splendid! <333333

Very good descriptions about the characters, and very nice events that have a lot of suspense! I love it! You've added a new stalker to your list ma'am! c: And do you need any more characters...? ;) I may have some ideas!


I'd love ideas! I can't guantee they'll be used right away or any time soon but I'll use most if not all of them in some way. And thank you, its you stalkers that makes everything better<3 I'm really glad you like it!
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Its an interesting competition that won't last long, so get your mitts on my pets soon.
I'll really miss CS. I'm just not into it like I used to be.

I'll come back, when you need me~
No need to stay around♥

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Re: f l a n k::. | Highly-Detailed Dairy Series. [posting op

Postby oakdenugg » Tue Jan 10, 2012 2:35 pm

Name-
Tablu

Nickname-
Tabbie
Tab
Lulu

Gender-
Female

Age-
16

Looks-
Image

Personality-
Tablu is very aggresive, never backing down from a fight, and always causing trouble. She has a very colorful language, (lol) and is very sarcastic. She loves to try new things, and loves danger.

Hobbies-
Tablu loves to take pictures, and keeps a little digital camera always with her, in her backpack she takes everywhere. The backpack contains some clothes, an extra pair of shoes, her camera, three sketch pads, an entire case of pencils, and dog treats. She also loves to sketch.

Family-
She lived with her mom, then ran off with her pet (more info on that later. c:). Now she just lives alone, hunting, and stealing.

Pet-
She has a pet wolf, which looks like this. It's female, and her name is Kanai. Tablu has a mental connection with Kanai, Kanai being able to read Tablu's thoughts and talk to her wordlessly and vise versa. She protects Tablu, hunts with her, takes care of her, and is her whole family. One special thing about Kanai is that she can see demons and such, while Tablu cannot.
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Postby Nuregami » Tue Jan 10, 2012 3:15 pm

oakdenugg wrote:
Name-
Tablu

Nickname-
Tabbie
Tab
Lulu

Gender-
Female

Age-
16

Looks-
Image

Personality-
Tablu is very aggresive, never backing down from a fight, and always causing trouble. She has a very colorful language, (lol) and is very sarcastic. She loves to try new things, and loves danger.

Hobbies-
Tablu loves to take pictures, and keeps a little digital camera always with her, in her backpack she takes everywhere. The backpack contains some clothes, an extra pair of shoes, her camera, three sketch pads, an entire case of pencils, and dog treats. She also loves to sketch.

Family-
She lived with her mom, then ran off with her pet (more info on that later. c:). Now she just lives alone, hunting, and stealing.

Pet-
She has a pet wolf, which looks like this. It's female, and her name is Kanai. Tablu has a mental connection with Kanai, Kanai being able to read Tablu's thoughts and talk to her wordlessly and vise versa. She protects Tablu, hunts with her, takes care of her, and is her whole family. One special thing about Kanai is that she can see demons and such, while Tablu cannot.



Hmm, very uniformed roleplay character(:
I've an idea for her. Is she from europe?
I've an idea for europe.
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Its an interesting competition that won't last long, so get your mitts on my pets soon.
I'll really miss CS. I'm just not into it like I used to be.

I'll come back, when you need me~
No need to stay around♥

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Postby Nuregami » Tue Jan 10, 2012 3:17 pm

N O V . 24TH
4:45




"Can you go into that closet and hand me that folder please? Ignore the glitter, Its everywhere." Tommo asked me as he pointed to a white closet in the desolate orphanage he lived in with little beady, homeless eyes stared at me from their beds. I slowly urged over and turned the knob just to be surprised by a startling moan. 'UHH.' It sounded with the sound of plopping liquid. Turning the knob faster and slinging the door open revealed a brain-dead, colorful, boy holding a tube of glitter upside down that spilt onto the very floor. 'UHH...UH.' He moaned again.
"Clean your mouth up you glitter zombie.. Gosh you guys are every where." I said, grabbing his glitter and turning it right side up as he let out an angry moan before I grabbed the only folder lying on a stack of towels and slammed the door.

"Come on, we need to talk to the lady now."



9:15 PM



Rake sat in his bus seat in front of the orphanage, with a steady stream of saliva streaming from his mouth has he stretched his bony body out and slept; dreaming of what only Rakes could dream about we he was rudely waken up by the sound of the orphanage large metal doors slamming shut and locking tightly. Jumping awake and to his surprise, he watched me and Tommo walk quickly towards the bus carrying a suitcase each; with Ze following us along carrying one as well.

"Welcome back, you forgot some?" Rake welcomed, and questioned to Tommo.
"Drive Rake." I Said, boarding the old metal bus. "He's coming with us."
"but master; Dante wouldn't like us taking him along; plus, he hold us back."
"Rake, hush, drive us to a Motel or something so we can stay the night."

Rake regretfully huffed as he stuck the keys in the ignition and turned the bus on, rumbling and mumbling, and went back towards the road in search of shelter for tonight.

Yes, I hope you get what I was saying; I adopted Tommo.
Turns out Tommo's real name was Thomas, and yes, yes, quit questioning me. I know i'm nearly his age but only disguised by a spell, and I know I can hardly take care of myself main less somebody else. I also know I'm far to young for children, especially a child my age. But you see, that's the advantage of being who I am; And I couldn't just leave him to fight for himself alone. I hardly understood the pain he must have felt, being alone in the world and what-not, but that's one thing I did know somewhat about. I knew the pain of being along. I know how it feels to not have a home nor anybody to be excited to see at the end of the day; just not as harsh as Thomas did.
Turns out Tommo's real name was Thomas Kiely, and truly did come from New Zealand. Thomas had accepted to use Benny's last name, Bregea, but only as his middle. Thomas B. Kiely.


About three, four miles into a small, developed town Tommo led us all into a tiny African-run motel; the kind I always saw back home.
Home. How I wish I could be home walking under the yellow glow of the streetlights with the patchy star-lit North Carolina above my head and dreams in my heart.... Home.
I used the card Dante gave us and got one room to share; I'd give Tommo and Ze the bed. Me and Rake could take the floor.


"Ben... I need to have a word." Rake came up to me, asking, as we unpacked our bags and Rake had finished parking the bus. "Now?"
"Yes, be right back; lock the door Ze." I called as me and rake left the motel and be turned to put his bony, pasty hand on my shoulder and bent down to give me a sorrowful look.
"I hate to do this... but-" He was cut off by the swirling of the blue street lights and stars above that gave my head an awful ache until we spun into the darkness.
The darkness.

"Ahh, I can see your back, child."
I heard Dante's voice ring from behind as I jumped, startled, and found him right behind me.
"Oh child... I can't seem to find you anymore. And I truthfully hope nothing to 'spoil' our plans is happening." He slurred, obvious that he had been drinking, and suspicious of something. But I'm not sure of what.
"No! Me either, that's not right; and I have no clue what's going on, can you fix it?"
"Hmm," He pondered with a giggly hum. "Take this." Said Dante, throwing a felt necklace with a tiny skull carved into ivory with Ruby red gems for eyes that I caught it without ease. "When you need me, or I need you *Hic* we can find each other."
I nodded, gazing into the rubies of the amulet a certain warm, comforting feeling came over my body; something warm and cozy as if it was Christmas at my mums again: Heart-warming scent of ginger and cinnamon cooking with cookies in the oven, rustling sounds of the tearing of paper, the smell of vanilla and coffee... Its all to far away now. The warm, happy feeling was sucked clear out of my body when Dante yelled: "GO ON, YE NINNYS. Be gone..." He yelled as he took a seat and Rake whisked up away to our African wonderland.


"Where were you both, you've been gone for twenty minutes!"
"Oh just some... unfinished business." I shied, grasping my amulet.
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Re: f l a n k::. | Highly-Detailed Dairy Series. [posting op

Postby oakdenugg » Tue Jan 10, 2012 3:42 pm

Nuregami wrote:
oakdenugg wrote:
Name-
Tablu

Nickname-
Tabbie
Tab
Lulu

Gender-
Female

Age-
16

Looks-
Image

Personality-
Tablu is very aggresive, never backing down from a fight, and always causing trouble. She has a very colorful language, (lol) and is very sarcastic. She loves to try new things, and loves danger.

Hobbies-
Tablu loves to take pictures, and keeps a little digital camera always with her, in her backpack she takes everywhere. The backpack contains some clothes, an extra pair of shoes, her camera, three sketch pads, an entire case of pencils, and dog treats. She also loves to sketch.

Family-
She lived with her mom, then ran off with her pet (more info on that later. c:). Now she just lives alone, hunting, and stealing.

Pet-
She has a pet wolf, which looks like this. It's female, and her name is Kanai. Tablu has a mental connection with Kanai, Kanai being able to read Tablu's thoughts and talk to her

wordlessly and vise versa. She protects Tablu, hunts with her, takes care of her, and is her whole family. One special thing about Kanai is that she can see demons and such,while Tablu cannot.

Hmm, very uniformed roleplay character(:
I've an idea for her. Is she from europe?
I've an idea for europe.

Well, the more uninformed, the more you can fill in yourself!

And weirdly enough, I was thinking she looked European too! So, yes! <3

Can't wait till she comes in! <33333
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