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Re: f l a n k::. | Highly-Detailed Dairy Series. [posting op

Postby Lions » Fri Dec 30, 2011 9:13 am

Loving it so much C: Cant wait to read more, and more, and more until it ends, which will be very sad<3
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Postby Nuregami » Fri Dec 30, 2011 10:34 am

N O V . 2 4TH
6:24 AM



A fire burned ramped in the back ground lighting up one side of the vast hallway; allowing a long and slender shadow on the other wall with long and a fancy long-tailed coat flowing behind it as they skipped quickly down the torch-lit hall way.
"What is this nonsense about a little girl?"
"N-nothing! Honestly! You see I've no CLUE where people come up with such rubbish, I-"
"Dante!" They roared.
"Fine, fine fine... I've assemb-"
"Shut Up fool. Your ninny counter-half of a brother had to tell me... Gabriel, what ever that rat's name was. You better be glad I don't take your powers away from keeping secrets you ungrateful-"
"Yes master."
"Be gone. This plan better work out, it's on your life."



Leaving the tribe was kind of difficult for me. For Tommo, he just wanted to get out of there fast as possible and Ze thought so to. I felt some... connection with the place. Call me crazy, because I think I am, but after knowing I did most good, I felt wonderful, like it had to be done again, but I had no clue what to do now. I think I have the slightest idea what I'm supposed to do. Dante wants me to send demons back to hell, but why would anybody in their right mind want to go? I wish I could do what I did for Tak... to everybody.

That's a great idea.
Walking down the dirt path back to the bus stop, alongside Tommo and Ze, scurrying up ahead still holding by bag, I had a epiphany. What it was, will always be blurry to me. What told me to do so could only be heaven sent.
I'll help better the world.
And that's what I did.

"Blasted... I can’t find the girl." Spoke Dante, fiddling with a few obscure devices showing places where Ben had been found before. "Ugh.. What am I going to- RAKE!"
Out of the shadows in a fiery room with flames ablaze around him; crawled out Rake, emaciated and terrifying as ever, covered in bruises and gashes; most of them still bleeding. He wore a two-sizes-to-tight collar tied to a heavy chain connected to the wall. His face would say terrified.
"You, you rat." He spoke softly hurling a screwdriver at him, sticking in his bony arm with a yelp.
"I've a mission for you. Find the girl and take her back to the room." He spoke with angst, walking over to Rake who cowered between mad flames. "I can't seem to find her," He whispered with a smile, driving the screwdriver further in his arm; making Rake scream in pain. "Go on." He yelled, ripping the thing from his arm.


The path back to the bus stop was long, longer than I remembered it to be. Me and Tommo kicked a pebble back and forth as we walked, the sun rising, and warming our pale skin. There was little life around, to our knowledge, besides a few birds of prey that circled in the sky. This was the boring part.
"Tommo," I said, breaking the boring silence. "Where do you come from?"
"That's none of your business." I remarked, keeping a solemn look on his face.
"Oh... where do you live?"
"That's not important." He snapped, quickening pace. "Hurry now, we need to move faster."

I nodded as I kept up to his pace.
It took us at least an hour and a half to get back to the bus stop; where reading the schedule, another bus would rive at the same time it did last night. Oh joy. We sat on an old wooden bench that rested under a tin over hand to keep off the sun, I sighed; stressed, and tried not to let my female emotions take the better of me.
We sat there. And sat some more. Few people passed while we sat, and a troop of ants built a hill.
About 12:00 a bus came by, and that's when I got excited, but I was to tired to show it. It bumbled down the road and roared as the driver slammed on the gas.
"You think it's gonna stop?" Tommo asked.
"Nah. It's going to fast."
But to our surprise, when it neared us the driver slammed on the breaks and the door slung open; with a familiar face behind the wheel: Rake.

"Rake!" I squealed as he leaped from the driver's seat and dashed on all fours out to greet me; wrapping his giant arms around me, hugging. "What happened to you?"
"I tell you on way back." He said smiling, and waving at Tommo and Ze, who could actually see him.
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Re: f l a n k::. | Highly-Detailed Dairy Series. [posting op

Postby Lions » Fri Dec 30, 2011 10:46 am

o.o will Rake betray Ben? Or will he help me. Omg so good<33333
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Re: f l a n k::. | Highly-Detailed Dairy Series. [posting op

Postby Nuregami » Sat Dec 31, 2011 5:02 am

crhyoyo wrote:o.o will Rake betray Ben? Or will he help me. Omg so good<33333

That's a good question... he'd probably get beat to death if he don't do what he's told, but Ben's his fwend.. D:>
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Postby Nuregami » Sun Jan 01, 2012 4:39 am

Happy new years everybody.!
I hope 2011 was a great year for everybody else (it was AHH.MAZ.ZING for me.!); Lets hope 2012 will be just as great if not better!

So lets sit back with our carbonated grape juice (No wine in sight!) and welcome in the new year.
Cheers!
And I'll be adding another page in a bit. ;)
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Postby olivionary » Sun Jan 01, 2012 4:41 am

XD I'll sit back with Coke and Sprite not grape juice.

I'm staying up til midnight hopfully.

Wants moar to eat, i mean read...
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Re: f l a n k::. | Highly-Detailed Dairy Series. [posting op

Postby Lions » Sun Jan 01, 2012 4:42 am

Yes, mine was very good, and im glad yours was as well<3
Yes carbonated grape juice, cheers!
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Postby Nuregami » Sun Jan 01, 2012 3:22 pm

N O V . 2 4TH
12:15 PM




"Rake, where did you get this bus from?" I asked, after we had boarded the empty old greyhound bus and sat in the first two seats. Tommo and Ze clung close together; Ze making disgusted faces at Rake and whispering hushed words with Tommo.
"A friend," He said, slamming the door and taking back off down the bumpy road.
"Is-Is this your demon you were talking about?" Tommo asked.
"Master- Uh, I meant friend Ben was taking about me!"
"Yes Rake," I calmed. "Yes I was talking about you; and yes. His name is Rake, wait; you can see him?"

Tommo look a long gander at Rake, examining, rubbing his chin as he did. He stared at him; he stared at him as if it was a long-lost relative he had not seen in awhile.
"Yeah, I can see him."
"Are you dead?" I asked, in a too serious manner for the question.
"Huh? Wha- No, I'm not dead."
"Well..." I pondered.
I don't really know about nothing. But I did know that I was the only human 'gifted', as Dante would say, enough to see demons with out any trouble. I also knew ghost could see demons. Now I know Tommo could see demons to; please don't tell me he's a ghost to... why is it always that I can't make human friends?

"Well what?" Tommo asked, as the bus hit a large pothole and bounced us around.
"I know that demons and ghost can see other demons and ghost; and I know I'm the only human that can see demons..."
"Well you must not. I can see Ze and Shake perfectly fine."
"Rake." Rake chimed in, correcting Tommo,
"That to; but... wait; see that?" I pointed outside, to some kind a mutated werewolf with large ears that ran along with the bus.
"Do you see that?!"
"See what?"

Okay now I'm confused.

"Wait; can you tell me why Ze follows you around?"
Tommo sighed and looked at Ze with sorrow, which looked back with a uninterested face.
"Well... you see..." He signed looking head out the window.

I feel the need to express what went through Tommo's mind.
His mind tossed back in thoughts of if he trusted me enough or didn't trust me at all. I sat across from him on that bumpy, bumbling bus with a warm aurora and a happy face; even though my current expression wasn't happy. You see; Tommo has very, very bad trust issues. Those trust issues make it hard for him to do nearly anything, main less tell me something he's always wanted to keep to himself.

"Oh god..."The sighed. "Okay. When I was little... I had a family once, like you did before, uh, umm.. yeah." He shied, as I nodded. "Well, my mother was very weak and had a hard time caring for me, and my dad-" Tommo squeaked as his voice cracked. "My dad wasn't a nice man."
Tommo raised up the sleeves on his t-shirt that rested on his elbow to reveal scars: Cigarette burns, lacerations, stabs, scratches; they hurt me just looking at them.

"Oh Tommo..."
"Y-yeah." He spoke eyes swelling of tears. "My mom called authorities and had me taken to an orphanage, which was already full so they shipped me here from New Zealand, and so my father couldn't find me..." Spoke Tommo, wiping away tears as Ze gave a disgusted face and looked out the window. "Ze's just all my bottled up anger and fright; and the anger from my dad..."

I understood him completely now, or, at least I thought.
He was just young, hurt, homeless. Did he ever know what love was? Probably not. I could hardly feel sorry for him; its not good to feel sorry for anyone. But I understood. Now that my journey had begun, I knew what it felt like to be alone. But Tommo; I hardly did know what it was like to be him. He sat there on the bus across from me with tears flowing in his eyes like swimming pools of sorrow, with the occasional spill over running down his light-colored cheek.

"Tommo..." I spoke, confused on what to say. I lifted my tiny rump from my seat and leaned over the isle to hug him.
And at that moment, I knew we were inseperateable.




Dang this bus ride was long.
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Postby Nuregami » Mon Jan 02, 2012 7:39 am

N O V . 24TH
3:36 PM



Rake drove the bus, not very good that is, around large curves with people standing out selling fruit; trough a small village-type living space full of people living out their third world lives, up a hill, down a hill, and across half of Africa it seemed like. He drove us to a town with many different people, white and black. He drove us up to a large house with a gigantic chain-link fence around.

"Ben; this is where your friend live?"
I looked over to Tommo, who was sitting beside me now, with a sorrowful expression on his face and eyes still red from the tears that filled his eyes. He looked at me and gave my a regretful nod and picked himself up and glanced over to Ze who was sleeping, curled up, twitching and snoring.
"Ze. Come on." He said slapping her arm and waking a angry look on her face.

He walked over to the door and nodded to Rake before looking back at me.
"Hey, thanks." Tommo spoke with the first smile I saw from him.

"Wait- wait, Rake wait right here I'll be back in a minute."
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Postby Lions » Mon Jan 02, 2012 9:49 am

Ohhh, good short page!!!
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