Forever and Never... Please comment and critique!

[dapperblook]

I forgot to bump last night, but the next part is up. Enjoy!

[Rolly-chan]

That's really sweet ^^ I loved Liam's distraction session there at the end xD
Keep on with this! =)

[dapperblook]

I completely missed last week, and I regret to announce that there will be no update this week. I have finals and no time to write. Sorry guys.

[dapperblook]

Update bump! Getting close to the end guys! I'm going to be busy these next couple of weeks, so I think the next part will be on the 11th of January and then the finale will be the week after that. Thanks for reading guys.

[dapperblook]

I'm so sorry guys but I had absolutely no time to write the next part. I will get it up ASAP though, no matter what day.

[dapperblook]

Well, it has been a long while, but I am finally close to being done with the next part. I shall update again when it is up. Sorry for the delay!

[Rolly-chan]

Cool =) I'll be waiting for it!

[dapperblook]

It's up! Well, it was up a couple of nights ago, but I forgot to bump. Enjoy!

[Rolly-chan]

I really love the conflicts in there - that Zeke is in love with Annabelle and tries everything to separate her and Liam and that Liam doesn't want to hurt her, but in order to accomplish that, has to hurt her one last time. And I really love that you described that Zeke does indeed love Annabelle too - that gives him more character and purpose =3
What I thought strange was that Annabelle passed out from a little kiss. You just don't get a breakdown like that from something as simple as a kiss unless you have some kind of disorder, no matter the history and excitement before that. (Sorry if that sounds a bit nitpicky ^^° I just don't really like exaggerations like that).
I also don't quite get that Liam just decides to disappear and then does? I mean, normally, students are pretty restricted in what they can do. Especially if they have parents or legal guardians (since he's 17, he can't be without some surveillance) and a school they're listed in.

Anyway - I'll be waiting for the next part ^^ (and I do hope Jack from the beginning appears again =3).