Forever and Never... Please comment and critique!

[dapperblook]

Come on guys! Post away!

[dapperblook]

Only two more guys! Please postie!

[Asap1998]

I can't wait for you to write more!!!

[dapperblook]

I already have it written, but I still need one more post!

[dapperblook]

Come on guys. I only need one more post. I have had the next segment written for a while now.

[Rolly-chan]

Don't worry about the comments so much =) Maybe if you post the next segment, there will be more. And I will read your next segments in any case. Want to follow that story and see what you'll do with it ^^
On the story site that I'm on it is considered childish to demand for a certain amount of comments before continuing. I don't know how it's looked upon here, but if there are other people from sites like the one I'm on, maybe they don't want to comment simply because of this?

[dapperblook]

Thank you for the advice. I have posted the next segment now =)

[ya like jazz]

:3 This is a really nice story! I like it so far ^^ Love the description.
I dont think there are any critiques for me to say right now :3

[dapperblook]

Thank you =)

[Kensuru]

cant wait for more!