Don't read this- Its too secret!

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Don't read this- Its too secret!

Postby bellatrix743 » Tue Oct 04, 2011 6:30 pm

Dear diary... that sounds so dumb,
what I was going to say next will sound even worse,
so I won't say it.
Round two minutes later....
Ok, I'm a secret agent, there I said it. Or wrote it....
Oh, I'm correcting my self for a diary... no offence...
I just said no offence to a diary, I must be crazy...
Not like anyones going to read this
THATS IT! Starting from the start..... I'm a secret
agent... It all started from getting straight A's at
school, being good at any type of defence, the
Normal stuff, then they came for me... The


But the last few words were burnt off. Josh looked around the headquaters. It was all burnt. Ripped and burnt pages every where,and an unfamiler smell. The smell of- A new thought interrupted the old one, one even more frighting than the first. It had to be an inside job. There was no other way... Josh's thoughts were interrupted yet again by the door clanging. He spun round. A small form walked up to him.
"What.. Happened?"
It was Sarah, the youngest agent here... yet one of the best...
"No idea..." Josh replied... still mesmoried by the sight.
Sarah took a breath as if to say something, but she was cut short by...
"Boo" The voice was right in Sarah's ear, Josh screamed and ran across headquaters, only to slip and fall on to something soft, a moan eurpted from what-ever it was, Josh screamed and jumped up and ran back to Sarah, sliding on ash the whole way.
"Er... hello?" Came the voice behind Sarah.
"Watcha ya want?" Sarah asked, clearly not scared.
"To scare you... Anyway, what happened?" Kiara now emerged from behind Sarah.
"How should I know?" Sarah turned to Kiara. "Why is your jumper burnt?"
"Wha-" Kiara glanced down. "Oh err... right, it got burnt when I tried to bake you some cookies, which got burnt here."
Sarah smiled at Kiara, she couldent help liking her.
Another moan came from where Josh had landed. Sarah wondered over.
"Com'on, up." Sarah insturected, kicking whatever it was.
"Ow. right on the nose." It was Anne. No one liked her, she was mean to nearly everyone.
"Doesn't sound like it." Sarah smirked.
"Shut-up!" Anne yelled. Anne emerged from the ash, anyone could see through the ash she wasn't pretty.
"Can't make me." A deadly silence followed Sarahs words.
"I said SHUT-UP!"
"No"
Anne jumped up, angry and tried attacking Sarah, Sarah easily dis-armed her with a flick of her arm.
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Re: Don't read this- Its too secret!

Postby bellatrix743 » Wed Oct 05, 2011 10:46 pm

Please read this.
𝔖𝔒𝔩𝔩𝔦𝔫𝔀 𝔱𝔬𝔨𝔒𝔫𝔰 𝔣𝔬𝔯 3𝔠$ π”’π”žπ” π”₯!
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Re: Don't read this- Its too secret!

Postby Shadow of the Insane » Thu Oct 06, 2011 7:30 am

I like it, you need to keep going. Please.
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Re: Don't read this- Its too secret!

Postby Spyralin » Thu Oct 06, 2011 12:06 pm

Same here! :) It looks interesting :) and if you're stuck or something I could help. I love writing and other stuff like that :)
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Re: Don't read this- Its too secret!

Postby bellatrix743 » Thu Oct 06, 2011 5:52 pm

Wow! Thanks!
I'll write some more....
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Re: Don't read this- Its too secret!

Postby Spyralin » Fri Oct 07, 2011 8:14 am

HURRAY!! I'll be keeping an eye out for it :) and just let me know if you need some help. :)
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Re: Don't read this- Its too secret!

Postby bellatrix743 » Sat Feb 04, 2012 9:06 pm

Sorry it took so long, I've been busy or had writers block. But I'll be able to be on a bit more now :D


Anne continued to willingly attack Sarah, Sarah dis-arming her each time. Sarah's laughter filled the air, but Anne got madder and madder. The whole time Josh was quite, too quite.
"It just doesn't make sense." he mumbled.
"What doesn't?" Sarah asked, still half-laughing.
"What happened" Mumbled Josh "All this" Josh gestured around head-quarters.
Suddenly serious Sarah glanced around the HQ. "Well, it was obviously an inside job."
"I know that!" Josh sounded annoyed.
"Ummm... I've got to go... I-I think I- Ummm... Left my stove on... at home, yes thats right, at home" Anne looked shifty. "Ummm... See-ya" Anne ran out of the HQ.
"Well... that was intersting" Sarah said brightly.
"Yes, it was" confirmed Josh, rather grimly.
"Oh, I forgot how grim you are!" Sarah teased. "I wonder where Andrew is, he can always find something to laugh at!"
"Where is Kiara?" Josh changed the subject.
"Umm..." Sarah just realized she was missing.
"And whens everyone going to come back? What happened to them? WHERE ARE THEY?"
"Josh! I don't know where they are! I don't know any more than you!"
A dead silence followed this comment.
"It's getting late. We should go home. Maybe everyone will come back tomorrow." Sarah said, as she started to skip to the door.
"Maybe" Josh checked the HQ a few times before he left. "maybe.
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Re: Don't read this- Its too secret!

Postby bellatrix743 » Sun Feb 05, 2012 5:26 pm

Sarah walked into the HQ clutching a Slurpee the next morning. Andrew was already in there, sweeping. Anne was standing next to him, demanding what he saw. The second Sarah walked up to them, she began to walk away.
"You know I don't trust you" Sarah yelled just as Anne reached the door. Anne stopped for a second, but then ran out of the room.
"Sarah... It's ok." Andrews soft voice filled the room.
"Andrew, what hap-" Sarah asked after a long silence.
'I-I Don- I don't know." Andrew face fell. "If- If I was any good I should, but the smoke- There was so much smoke-" Andrews face crumpled.
Sarah slurped at her Slurpee. "Where was every-one else at the time? Do you know?"
"they-"
The door clanged open, and Kiara walked in, clutching a box of cookies.
"Hi, Kiara!" called Sarah. Running over to the door.
"Hello Sarah, I made some more cookies!" Kiara smiled and handed the box to Sarah. Slowly, more and more people walked into the HQ, each getting a huge welcoming, and a cookie, which every-one ate happily.
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Re: Don't read this- Its too secret!

Postby waitingonhope » Sun Feb 05, 2012 8:31 pm

O M G!!


THis is amazing! Maybe you could make it a little more interesting but otherwise it is AMAZING! (DID i SAY THAT ALREADY?)

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Re: Don't read this- Its too secret!

Postby bellatrix743 » Mon Feb 06, 2012 5:21 pm

Thank-you so much!


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