Party Crasher (a ghost story)

[Sen507]

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[Prinsarcessah1997]

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[Sen507]

Thanks, I have more but I want to look over it and edit a bit before posting but I'll probably get it up in the next few days also not many people have viewed or posted so I'm not sure how many people would care if I posted more or not XD.

[Noel]

...I really have to write out that crit for you.
...Stupid homework.

[Sen507]

Ok, LOL, I'm scared to read it when you do, there are lots of mistakes... But really who cares? I'm probably the only person who cares at all if there are mistakes or not so when you put it into perspective it doesn't really matter.

[Noel]

Mistakes like grammer and spelling hurt... but not much on a site like CS.
I'm more criting for plot, overuses, underuses, formatting, general awkwardness, phrases, and suggestions.
Beware~

[Sen507]

Oh awkwardness how it fills my writing XD, I know that's mainly the type of thing I was refering to by mistakes, spellcheck fixes most grammatical errors for me so I don't really care about that. I noticed I've begun to write more and more pathetic stories since I'm so bored I write even the pathetic ones since it's something to do other than homework, probably not a good idea though...

[Noel]

Ah well, I'll try to get the crit done by, say, this weekend? Cause I'm doing homework now.

[Sen507]

I only have history homework and that's just to start a long term project, in other words I have too much time on my hands which isn't necesarily a good thing (I will get bored and write pathetic stories and make pathetic posts here).

[Sen507]

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