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First Poem (that I posted)

Postby .:.:whiteflamez:.:. » Wed Sep 21, 2011 9:30 am

Often, I find myself waiting.
For what, I don't know, or make an effort to.
Maybe for the waves to wash me to somewhere else,
For the wind to
Take me

Away from this place.
The clock keeps ticking,
and I feel my life slipping away,
But, will I let my hopelessness
break me?

Often, I feel compelled to lie to myself
and the mirror and my mother.
I tell them I'm fine, but do they believe me?
Should I just let the world
throw me

the issues it hides under beauty without complaint?
Or let others blame me for their mistakes, when I am
a stranger to them?
I wish I could find myself near, but I just always feel far
Away.


(I wrote this in science today, I was feeling all mad, and I wanted to write something about squishing someones head in a door, but I got distracted and wrote this. I don't know why it came out depressed, though, but...
Yep. xD
It has no title, but don't steal it, 'cause that took three minutes out of my day I could have been doing something productive xD)
My Life wrote:Relationship Status: moving at a glacial pace...
Mood: Annoyed&in pain
Activity: Laying in bed. In pain.
Looking forward to: Aloe
Dreading:Nonsoft clothes










You are in my dreams when I'm asleep,
You are on my mind when I'm awake,
You are the only one who cannot ever be replaced,
You can make me smile when I want to cry...
And I thank God every day for bringing you into my life.
You will always be the one mistake I made...That I will never regret. <3

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Re: First Poem (that I posted)

Postby .:.:whiteflamez:.:. » Wed Sep 21, 2011 9:48 am

Bump as if it's needed xD
My Life wrote:Relationship Status: moving at a glacial pace...
Mood: Annoyed&in pain
Activity: Laying in bed. In pain.
Looking forward to: Aloe
Dreading:Nonsoft clothes










You are in my dreams when I'm asleep,
You are on my mind when I'm awake,
You are the only one who cannot ever be replaced,
You can make me smile when I want to cry...
And I thank God every day for bringing you into my life.
You will always be the one mistake I made...That I will never regret. <3

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