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Postby je ; t a i m e » Wed Sep 21, 2011 8:32 am

Alright, so this is my story for two characters I am going for at The Loved Adoption Center. If I win them, I will continue these stories. So, wish me luck! Here's a picture of Problem! And then here is Wynter. Here goes nothin'!

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Soft voices woke the small pup. He opened his big brown eyes wide, hauling himself groggily to his feet. His brothers and sisters remained soundly asleep. "He's quite a problem child, I must say. Very wild and hard to control. But he's strong and merciless when playing with the other pups, fighting for a bone or the like." He heard Nancy, the woman who owned he and his mother, speak. Her voice was small, but it hopped every few words with joy. He looked at his mother. She was staring up at Nancy and the man she spoke to. He was extremely tall, with ghostly-pale skin and muscular arms and legs. His most unsettling feature was a jagged scar, starting at his forehead and crawling down his head, past his eyes and onto his jaw. The puppy shuddered.
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