The Risen

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The Big Dare Scare

Jessi Borwick, Sam Adams, Oliver Wing, James Dean, and Kirsten Davis all go to Crimson Junior High for Criminals. They have all committed different crimes. Jessi has stolen cars from rich people, stripped them of their parts, sold them online, with no motor, and then sold the parts. Sam and James have murdered ten people together, including; U.S. President Wilshire, two Supreme Court judges, Pope Isaac, Britain’s King Saba, Queen Halo, and Princess Angel, Carry and Ryan Adams, and Jimmy Dean. Kirsten has blown important buildings and structures up including; The American Statue of Liberty, Taj Mahal, and the Great Wall of China. Oliver has been caught drunk-driving over forty-nine times in his dad’s car, which is an Orca SC7. They are all in the seventh grade, share classes, and a friendship. They all have a big science test with Mrs. Walter, an evil vampire-like teacher, today, so they decided to skip Science class. Kirsten, Sam, and James sit next to each other in homeroom. While talking about candy, lunch, and their holiday break that they are starting tomorrow; they decide to make a dare that no one will ever forget. Oliver was going to have to go into Mr. Benson’s, a young, mysterious teacher, old room. It would be a challenge to get him to go in. He wasn’t a hardened criminal like the rest of them. They were all hoping Jessi would be on their side of the dare. James texted Jessi, asking about the dare they were going to commit. She said that she would go with them and lock Oliver in the room.
“Alright,” Kirsten said. “So, we are going to go onto the C-floor. We get all the way down to C-4, and then dare Oliver to go in. One of us will have to go in too,” She sighed. Kirsten stared at Sam for a moment. “You will go, right?” Kirsten asked sweetly.
“What?” Sam asked. Why am I always picked? She wondered. “No! Jam can go!” She said. She punched James in the arm. She knew he didn’t like his nickname, Jam, that she had given him. She smiled sweetly.
“Me?” James chuckled. “Good one. That’s a great joke!” he added. He smirked. “Jessi,” He said smoothly. “She can do it,” He slapped Kirsten’s shoulder. “We’ve got ourselves a victim,” He said deviously. “I feel like I’m back in my homicidal days again!” James joked. “We’re plotting out punishment, but no escape plan?” He shook his head. “It doesn’t seem right to me,” He sighed. “We need a back-up plan. What were we doing?” he asked the girls.
“We were getting ready to search Mr. Benson’s room for clues?” Kirsten suggested. “We wanted to help find him. Our favorite teacher of all time?” She smiled. “Does it sound good?” She asked.
“Yeah,” Sam sighed. “It’ll work,” She smiled, counting the seconds to the bell. 30…Poor Oliver…25…Wait, what am I saying…20…Oh, well He can deal with the punishment …10…I hope…5-4-3-2-….What! Where’s the bell...One!

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That's pretty kewl, but I didn't get the last part): You have to continue writing it, if it isn't done that is. ^-^

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{It's not done. That's only the first chapter}

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The Wonders of Room C-4

When the bell rang Kirsten and Sam went down toward the East Staircase to get Jessi from her homeroom and tell her the whole plan. Meanwhile, James went down the North Hall, looking for Oliver. He found him, smiled, and told him about where they were going today for 1st and 2nd Hour. When the tardy bell rang, the five students were up on the C-floor, where there were only eight classrooms, which were all easily passed. When they arrived at C-4 they all sighed.
“Who’s going in first?” Kirsten asked. She looked around and stopped at Oliver’s face. She turned her head and smiled a small, demonic smile.
“Uh,” Oliver frowned. “I guess I will,” He gave a twisted smile and walked in to the room. He flicked the lights on. “Wow!” He said loudly. “Look at this!” He almost shouted. He saw that everything was in perfect condition; nothing scary was in there at all. “Jessi, come on. Kirsten and Sam, you come in too. James, come on,” He smiled. He had found an old television. He pushed the on button. A loud tune from an old cartoon The Dirt Road had come on. The TV sang out the song. “One step, two step, three step, four steps, All Down the old Dirt Road!” A group of children was singing. He stared into, smiling. Kirsten, Sam, James, and Jessi were staring and laughing too. When the show went to commercial they started to feel a slight buzz, like a fly’s wings.
“Are you guys seeing this?” Sam asked. She was watching the show and was starting to feel connected to it. She had a heavy pulling feeling on her leg, and the characters were waving at them. In fact the characters were identical to each of them. There was one for Kirsten, James, Oliver, Jessi, and her. She shook her head wondering what the cook had put in her breakfast.
Kirsten nodded at Sam. “Yeah, I’m seeing this too,” She said confused. She was also being drawn into the show. She stared for another minute. She felt a strong pull and was in the television with her friends

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OMGOSH! KEEP GOING! Reminds me of a Goosebumps book I read!! The kids had to get out of the black and white picture by using lip stick:|

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And Where Are We Now?

“What the hell!” Kirsten yelled. “Who in the name of,” Kirsten stopped when she saw an elf coming down the road. She stopped and stared. “Is it real?” She asked her friends. I didn’t even know they existed. And now, after being sucked in by a TV, I am seeing a real, live elf.
Oliver’s eyes widen in shock. There was an elf eight feet in front of him. The elf had an arrow drawn. It was aiming at his head. It shot the arrow. It whizzed through the air. It would have been impossible for Oliver to move, if he had been the real target. “Uh, thanks,” He said smiling at the elf. My name’s Oliver, Oliver Wing. Who are you?” He asked politely.
“I am Copperato Elvasin Tacht Meelo. I am a knight of the Forest Force. A group dedicated to preserving the Forest of Meelo, my homeland. You can call me Copper. So?” It asked. “What are you five mortals doing in the Tacht Region of the forest?” He asked.
Kirsten looked at Copper and sighed. “We got sucked into a television. And, we just appeared here. Is there any way back?” She asked. Kirsten looked at him with curiosity and a slight hint of jealousy.
Copper shook his head sadly. “There is no way back. But, as you landed in the Tacht Region, I have to take you to Lady Elizabeth and Lord Valentine. Please, follow me,” Copper said. He started off at a brisk pace, and then stopped when he realize none of the humans were following him. “Come on! It’s this way. If you don’t follow me the Draco Homelias will come for you. And the full bloods are horrible. Please, this way,” Copper urged.
Kirsten looked back at Copper. “I’m not an idiot. We’re criminals, we could kill you. We are not going to see royalty. Not unless we are picked up and carried there.
Copper nodded and took five large steps backward. “Draco Homelias Tacht- Come!” He shouted. He backed up and then jumped into a tree. Copper looked up in the sky to see three large dragon-like shapes approaching. A roar echoed through the sky.
Kirsten went silent. Then, she quickly turned around. Sam, James- Homicide, Oliver- Tactics, Jessi- Plan. Battle stations!” Kirsten said with deep authority in her voice.

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Wow

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Draco Homelias

An ear-splitting screech echoed down from the sky as the three Draco Homelias, commonly called Dragon-Humans or Drahus, descended. The Tacht Tribe consisted of only three Drahus. They were all colored the same deep green color, close to emerald, but with more shine. “Knight,” The lead dragon’s voice rumbled with power. “Why did you call us here?” He asked. The two other dragons were circling the five humans.
Kirsten flicked her wrist and threw a stick of dynamite at the dragons. She bolted away, the rest of the group following her. She smiled when the dynamite exploded, but when the smoke cleared she saw that the dragons were unharmed and calm, she tensed up.
Copper turned away from the lead dragon to see what the explosion was, but quickly turned back around. “Elto, I was going hunting when I came upon this group of human travelers. They claim to have teleported here through some strange device, and I figured that they were sent by the Seethe. I called you because I knew I could not handle them alone.
“Very well young one, you have served The Court well,” Elto turned to face the humans. “Who among you is the leader of your group?” He asked.
“I am. Want a fight midget?” Kirsten asked. She growled slightly, unwillingly, and roared. She jumped when she heard her roar and floated for a second. Then, without warning her hair started to fall off and her skin was tuning to scales. Her teeth felt too big for her mouth and her back was stretching. She could feel claws starting to form and she realized she had heightened senses. She roared again, this time, her body shook and floated up into the sky. A bright burst of dark orange burst through the sky. When Kirsten came out of the burst she was a dragon. She roared again spitting fire out nervously.
“WHAT JUST HAPPENED?” James yelled.
“What the hell?” Sam muttered.
“How?” Oliver stuttered.
“Uh…” Jessi stood with a blank expression on her face.
Elto smiled, and then knelt. “Hodem? You returned! I thought you were banished. Why are you a girl now?” Elto asked. He flew up and licked Kirsten’s shoulder.
Kirsten frowned and flew back. “I am Zeera. Hodem Jaddi is my father, my mother elven,” Kirsten said. She spoke in a robotic, enchanting voice. While she spoke her now blue eyes glowed white. Her red-orange scales sparkled in the sunlight as she tried to land.
Copper stared, astonished and confused. “Who is she?” He asked Elto. He continued to stare at Kirsten looking dumbfounded.
Elto frowned. “I really don’t know. She seems powerful, but looks young. She won’t be able to shift to completely human until after the next Sequence of the Stars,” He said. Elto paced unhappily.
Copper nodded. “She has to wait until an eclipse to be completely human again? Wow! Does that mean she can take hybrid form between now and then?” He asked.
“Yes,” Elto said. “She can become a Drahus with enough self control. Though I doubt it will happen. But, what of the others? Kamu, Hestin- test them. I’ll hold Zeera back,” He said, taking flight. He flew toward Kirsten, planning to distract her.
Kirsten roared and dove for her friends. She landed in front of them and growled at Kamu and Hestin.
James, Jessi, Sam, and Oliver were freaking out. They started to run for the woods. “Hurry up!” Jessi called. They were all watching Kirsten as she fought with the dragon warriors. Oliver shouted painfully when he saw Kirsten be engulfed by flames. He started to run toward her to kick some dragon butt. But, right before he reached them Kirsten emerged from the flames.
Kirsten exploded in light again, floating in the middle of the sky. She shouted some incomprehensible words out and the ground started exploding in random spots near the other dragons. She was creating half-mile deep holes in the ground. Her eyes and necklace were glowing blue. The blue was so light it seemed white. She vibrated with power. She started to descend and her eyes darkened. When she landed she shook her head and took a defensive stance.
Elto’s eyes widened. “Kamu, Hestin- Bow before the princess,” He said. Elto turned to face Kirsten. “Welcome home, my princess,” He said before lying down and bowing his head. He flicked his tail and Kamu and Hestin followed his example.

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Nice u should continue

[MusicalMoony]

I think it's brilliant, and if it were published into a book, I would SO buy it! You have talent