Journal of the horse named Shadow

[BMF]

Heres a journal of a horse named Shadow and all the things he goes through.


Day 1-

Hi journal,my name is...um my name is....Well I don't know. You see I was just born yesterday and my owner doesnt really know what to name me yet. I cant really move much,and standing up feels strange. So I lay right next to a barrel of hay,you see,my mom died only a day ago while giving birth to me. So I pretend the barrel of hay is my mom and I dont eat it. I eat the other horses stack,which iritates them alot. Well journal,recently there been a guy in a blue suit coming to us. He keeps looking at me the most and talking about money. I may not be here long,prepare to come on a ride Journal

Sincerely,

Uh...no named,yet.

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BUMP Any critique?