As The Thunder Roars: A New Story of Mine

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As The Thunder Roars: A New Story of Mine

Postby briannabribri » Mon Sep 19, 2011 12:32 pm

.:As The Thunder Roars:.

Chapter 1: A Darkened Sky

I stared up to the ceiling silently as I lay there in my bed. I knew the rain would continue to poor down on my sad, miserable life and I knew that nothing could stop the depression I feel. My name is Serenity Anne Catherine, an ironic name for a girl who can freak out at any second. I could tell that this would be the year to top them all off, to top them off with more saddening events than I could imagine was what I had meant by that of course. The events that were to take place were so shocking that even someone as depressed as myself could not imagine a more horrible fate. It was bad enough that my mom had gotten re-married and I was stuck here with my abusive dad, but much worse was to come. I wanted to cry, but no tears were found. I never really cried, I never even really sobbed either. The only cure to my pain in my mind was to inflict pain on myself. I already had scars from where my dad had beat me but they were quite normal to me so I could ignore them. Anyways, as I lay there on my bed in the middle of that cold November night, I was quite sure this would be the worst year I had ever experienced in my whole lifetime . . .

(This is my first darker kind of sad story so please leave comments and critique down below.)
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Dug my way out
Blood and fire
Bad decisions,
Thats alright
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Re: As The Thunder Roars: A New Story of Mine

Postby growl.lingo » Mon Sep 19, 2011 12:34 pm

i like it
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Re: As The Thunder Roars: A New Story of Mine

Postby briannabribri » Mon Sep 19, 2011 12:35 pm

Thanks, I will be regularly adding more so keep checking back. :D
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Once or twice . . .
Dug my way out
Blood and fire
Bad decisions,
Thats alright
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