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Jax's Journal To Heaven

Postby Host » Sun Sep 18, 2011 5:24 am

Hey guys! Its Destiny here with a new idea! Well, my idea is a dog's journal of going to heaven because of animal abuse.. Heres how it all goes! And here is a little on what it is about..

Jax was a normal puppy waiting to get a home. But being a german shepard and border collie cross held him back from getting the home he dreams of.. Until one day, a strange man comes in to the shelter, looking for puppies. He got some.. Including Jax. He left the puppies in a small shed with barely any food and water a week. And only a sock to destroy.. They are beaten when the man is upset because of something.. Thats the whole reason he got the dogs, to take out his anger on them.. So here's Jax's journal to heaven..

THIS IS TO STOP ANIMAL CRUELTY! IT WAS MADE TO SHOW HOW MEAN IT IS. I HOPE YOU ALL UNDERSTAND HOW THIS MAN TOOK JAX'S LIFE ALONG WITH THE OTHER PUPPIES!!

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Re: Abuse Journal

Postby Host » Sun Sep 18, 2011 5:38 am

Dear Journal,
I am sad because the kid did not chose me, but my best friend Sam. I miss him lots and lots. I hope I can be chosen soon.. All people do is pass by my cage. One kid, came up to my cage and petted me, but his mother told him that I wasn't a purebred. I sure do hope that the next family that comes in is looking for a dog like me!

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Re: Abuse Journal

Postby BMF » Sun Sep 18, 2011 7:05 am

This sounds sad...... So i'll stop reading it so i dont cry.....Sorry
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Re: Abuse Journal

Postby Host » Sun Sep 18, 2011 8:09 am

(okay.. Thanks for starting anyway!)
Dear Journal,
Today, a strange man wearing a hat that covered his face came in. He said he wanted some puppies. The women who feeds me everyday showed him my kennel along with a few other kennels. I made sure to look my best. He filled out some paperwork, and said he was going to take three of the dogs he was showed.. Not me. I know, I dream of being adopted.. But I was happy that he did not chose me.. Now, I want a nice family.
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Re: Jax's Journal To Heaven

Postby Host » Sun Sep 18, 2011 8:47 am

Dear Journal,

The strange man came in again, even though he isn't supposed to pick up the puppies he chose until next week. He said he needed another dog.. And he chose me.. Ussually, I would be so happy, but right now, I am just scared Journal!! I really am!! I hope this last week does not go by fast.

Your Shivering friend,
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Re: Jax's Journal To Heaven

Postby Host » Mon Sep 19, 2011 12:29 pm

Dear Journal,

This week went by so fast, I think i slept through it all. Tomorrow the guys comes and picks us up. The groomer put a red banadana with my name in black letters. I think it is kind of cool. It suits me i guess. I sure hope my new owner likes it!

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Re: Jax's Journal To Heaven

Postby growl.lingo » Mon Sep 19, 2011 12:36 pm

i like this keep writin
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Re: Jax's Journal To Heaven

Postby Host » Mon Sep 19, 2011 12:43 pm

(sweet! Thank you!)

Dear Journal,

Its morning.. The man has not come yet. I figured I should write in you before we head out. I am really scared Journal! Something does not feel right! I really hope my stomach is wrong.. Oh.. Somebody just came in.. Its the guy. He is carrying.. Four chains.. Chains that are in a lope.. Wait.. Those are choke collars.. My friend told me about them, how if you pull, they tighten and choke you.. I have to go journal. He grabbing the other puppies first. Wish me luck!
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Re: Jax's Journal To Heaven

Postby Host » Mon Sep 19, 2011 1:02 pm

Dear Journal,

The man put the choke collar on me.. Turns out, it has small spikes on it. It hurts when he pulls. When we were walking out of the center, the cashier gave me a unhappy look. I wish she would have done something! The man tossed us in his pick up truck..

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Re: Jax's Journal To Heaven

Postby growl.lingo » Tue Sep 20, 2011 3:35 am

ahh sad but I love the journal type writing it's realy cool
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