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Mystery guy

Postby rae sanders » Sat Sep 17, 2011 1:37 pm

Ya, I'm here to make yet, again another story.
I came up with the idea while riding.
Summary:
Ammy McCloud is a normal 13 year old. Until a new guy comes to her school. He is gay, or is he? Ammy notices him the second week after he comes and becomes friends with him, good friends. Will he spill his secret? Or will she?
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Re: Mystery guy

Postby rae sanders » Sat Sep 17, 2011 1:47 pm

Chapter 1
My exciting life started in 8th grade. The second week of school. I saw him... He reminded me of some guy I meet when I was little. I built up my courage and walked up to him for the first time.
"Hi." He tuned and looked straight at me,"Hi." His response was flat. I blinked,"I'm Ammy."
"Parker."
I nodded,"Nice too meet you Parker. So what school did you go to before Pine hall Middle school?"
"I was going to Blaney Alburn Middle."
I nodded taking it all in. I was about to say something when then 1st period bell rang. He grabbed his books and walked away before I could say bye. I sighed watching him go and picked up my books and headed to english.

Class was boring all day. I put all my books up and stood up slinging my backpack on my back. I tuned and bumped into Parker,"Sorry!" He tuned and smiled,"It's ok Ammy." I blushed when all the girls around me jaw dropped.
As he walked away everyone sqarmed me,"Who is he?!" I made the most annoyed face ever and pushed though the crowd and head towads the car circle.
I saw my best friend Coral and ran up too her. She looked at me. Her blonde highlights in her black hair stuck out as she noticed it was me she jumped up and down,"TGIF!" I rolled my eyes,"Wow."
Everything else went by as a blur. When I got home I finished my homework and ate. After that, I ran down to the barn and looked for my dad,"DAD?!"
I turned quickly as I heard a horse on the track. My dad was breezing his mare, Zena. I admired the filly's heart and speed. When they came back to the barn, I jogged to there stall,"Dad can I ride Maxuim?"
He walked out of the stall putting my hard hat on,"If you can tack him." I stuck my tounge out and ran down to the paddocks.
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Re: Mystery guy

Postby rae sanders » Sun Sep 18, 2011 12:38 pm

Chapter 2
My ride was all right, if you don't enclode being thrown. The big colt got annoyed and threw me like a fly. My dad had the grab the truck and go after him.
When I went to the house, I swore my mom was going to explode. She was so furouis that I fell. I told her it was not my fault; but no mater what. I lost the arguement.
The next day was boring for a Saturday. I headed to the outside mall for the heck of it. And guess who I bumped into? Yep Parker. The guy who is to friendly... Ya, my type of guy.
"Hey Paker." That was all I could say. He turned and smiled,"Hi Ammy. What are you doing here?" I shrugged,"Pretty bored so I came here."
The next hou was fun. We talked and laughed and joked. Finally he broke the conversation,"Want to go to a movie?" I was quite shocked that he asked,"Sure."

When we walked out of the movie theater laughing. I spotted Coral. She snickered and walked the other way. My glare followed her, knowing it was making her feel uneasy."I got to go. See you around." He waved as a jogged away,"Bye Ammy."
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Re: Mystery guy

Postby no~body » Sun Sep 18, 2011 9:07 pm

I like it so far!
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"....So dawn goes down to day.
Nothing gold can stay."
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Re: Mystery guy

Postby rae sanders » Mon Sep 19, 2011 2:42 am

Thanks.
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