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Re: Dear Max

Postby Pandors Heart » Sat Sep 17, 2011 12:44 pm

hm? shure go ahead
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Re: Dear Max

Postby spideypuhl » Sat Sep 17, 2011 12:49 pm

Thanks

On my way to French Class I bumped into this really cute guy and I mean really cute! "Sorry" I mumbled, "It's okay" he said smiling. I walked around him and entered French Class. French Class was boring, I had to say these really weird words! And I mean really weird!
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Re: Dear Max

Postby spideypuhl » Sat Sep 17, 2011 1:03 pm

French Class ended, I left the class room and went to my locker.

Dear Max,
I was so embarrassed when I found out I fell asleep in class! I felt like a 5 year old!
Also here's what the french class teacher looks like:
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Pet's Name: Mr. Tater
Funny right? I wanted to laugh but I didn't I bit my lip to hold it in.
Bye Max!

~Silver
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Re: Dear Max

Postby spideypuhl » Sat Sep 17, 2011 1:21 pm

I shove my journal&pencil in my backpack then I hang my backpack on the hanger inside my locker, I then slam my locker shut, lock it and race of towards the gym.
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Re: Dear Max

Postby spideypuhl » Sat Sep 17, 2011 6:09 pm

Dear Max,
We played dodge ball, then army ball, then we went to our lockers. We put our stuff in our backpack, today we didn't have homework thankfully!
Bye Max!

~Silver


I shoved my journal&pencil in my backpack. I slam my locker door shut, zip my backpack up, slip it over my head and race out of the school doors. I race to the buses, I run up the stairs, I take a seat in the front and wait for Princess Lilly&Princess Puddle. Princess Puddle&Princess Lilly file onto the bus and sit next to me. I smile "hey!" I say. "Do you still wanna come over?' Princess Puddle asks. "Yeah!" I say excitedly, "We're glad!" they smile. Like 20 other kids file onto the bus, they take there seats, then I see the boy I bumped into, I quickly move to the end of the seat so I can see him come up the steps. He smiles at me, I smile back. He winks, he sits across from me, my heart skips a beat. The bus doors close and the bus starts going. The bus stops, and 5 kids file off the bus, the bus doors close and the bus starts going again. It soon stops and we get off. I was so excited!

Oh and Max here is what the boy looks like:
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Pet's Name: Leon
Cute right? Well I found out his name is Leon! Hehe! He is my new crushy wushy!
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Re: Dear Max

Postby spideypuhl » Sun Sep 18, 2011 7:31 am

After the bus disappeared out of sight we started up the hill, towards the castle. About 5 minutes later we reached the door. Princess Lilly opened the door, and walked into the house. Princess Puddle&I follow Princess Lilly. I stare in astonishment, their house was nicer than mine, mine was just a cottage. The Queen came around the corner, she was pretty!

Dear Max,
I met the Queen, she is pretty and nice!
Here's what she looks like:
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Pet's Name: Queen Jazelle
Well that's it for now!
Bye Max!

~Silver


Queen Jazelle came over to me she held out a paw, and I held out my paw and shook her paw. She smiled "how lovely to meet one of Lilly&Puddle's friends" she says smiling "Are you hungry?" she asks me. "A little" I say, "have you ever tasted homemade crumpets?" she asks me. "No" I reply, "well you'll have to try one I just made a fresh batch" she says. "Yeah totally" I say with a smile. She leads us into a spacious room, it was beautiful! I turn around and see the father.

Dear Max,
I just saw the King! He is handsome!
Here's what he looks like:
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Pet's Name: King Jack
Bye Max!
~Silver


Queen Jazelle sets some crumpets, she hands one to me, King Jack, Princess Lilly,&Princess Puddle. After she had given us all a crumpet she took the last one for herself.
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Re: Dear Max

Postby spideypuhl » Mon Sep 19, 2011 8:24 am

Princess Lilly&Princess Puddle scarf down their crumpet. I quickly eat my crumpet "It's delicious!" I say. The King&Queen eat their crumpet.
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