The Hunger Games #1 (my version)

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The Hunger Games #1 (my version)

Postby Host » Fri Sep 16, 2011 11:08 am

First of all, let me say.. SUZZANNE COLLINS CREATED THE HUNGER GAMES, NOT ME. ALL I WANT IS TO MAKE MY VERSION! :)
The future.. What does it look like? Lets just say.. War.. For 15 years, this war has been going on. In the process, Almost all of America was destroyed. A large chunk of land was saved, along with the capitol. The remaining land was divided into 12 districts. Each district is more different than the last.. The capitol has just said on the news, than once a year, a thing known as The Hunger Games is going to take place. In the games, two kids, one boy and one girl, from each district will be sent to the Arena. Every year, the arena will be more different than the last. Each of the contestants will fight to survive.. There will be two survivers, but they must be from one district.. One district will be victor..
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The different Districts
District 1: They use swords and spears, and tonics. As soon as the president announced the games, they had begun training. They are friends with the capitol
District 2: They use swords and spears, and tonics. As soon as the president announced the games, they had begun training. They are friends with the capitol.
District 3: District three is all woodland. They have begun to send wood to the other districts, making a small amount of money. They use axes and sometimes rocks
District 4: This district grows corn and cotton. They make a large profit on both products. They use knives and sometimes rocks
District 5: They grow beans. They make a small profit, and rarely ever eat the beans themselves. They use anything..
District 6: They grow livestock such as cattle and sheep.. And sometimes pigs and chickens. Not to forget goats. They are a rich district, they use knives and sticks
District 7: These guys make bricks and wooden logs for buildings. They use practically anything they can get a hold of as a weapon.
District 8: They are a smaller district.. They live in lots of trees.. But don't exactly know what to do with their lives.
District 9: These guys only look scary.. They build for a living. And plant patatoes.
District 10: This is considered the water district. they fish on both large and small boats.
District 11: This is the quiet district.. They only rely on themselves, so no outside district really hears much of them.
District 12: this is the coal mining state.. They coal in caves.. They use what ever weapons they can get.
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Re: The Hunger Games #1 (my version)

Postby Host » Fri Sep 16, 2011 11:28 am

Katniss flicked the t.v off. She felt as if her heart was in her throat. She fealt arms wrap around her and looked down. Prim was hugging her. Katniss was frozen. This couldn't be happening. How could President Rose do this? This is no way to celebarate them winning the war! She closed her eyes and rocked back and forth on her heels. No no no.. What if they sent off Prim?! She opened her eyes and allowed her arms to wrap around Prim. "Dont worry.. It will all be okay.." She whispered softly and stroked her sister's soft blonde hair.
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Re: The Hunger Games #1 (my version)

Postby Host » Sat Sep 17, 2011 11:35 am

Prim pulled herself away from Katniss. "Its not fair.." She whispered. Katniss got down on her knees so she was level with Prim. "Prim.. I swear, you will never be sent into the games.. If they draw your name, i'm going in as a substitute." She promised and held out her left pinky. Prim sighed and held out her right, locking them into place. "Havn't enough people died?" She murmured quietly. Katniss doesn't know what to say. She stood up and lead her sister to their small cottage. As soon as she swings open the door, horror strikes her. Her mother is sitting on her bed, staring at the wall. Her hair is sticking everywhere, and an odor clung to the air. Her eyes were bloodshot. A letter was clutched tightly in her hand. Katniss closed the door and walked around the bed to her mom. She grabbed the letter and skimmed through it.

Dear Everdeen family,
As you should know, Charles Everdeen is a mine worker. I'm sorry to say, there was an explosion while he was working.. There were no survivors. On the upside, you are granted a small amount of money. We are sorry for your loss.

We wish you the best of luck!


Katniss just stared at the letter. Her mind, couldn't take it in. Her father was.. dead. Her jaw tightened slightly. She realized Prim was looking at her. Katniss sat Prim down on the bed. "Prim-" she began. "He's dead isn't he?!" she cried. She stood up and tried to run off. Katniss grabbed her and wrapped her arms around her sister. "Shh.. Prim.." She murmured quietly. Prim struggled for a moment but finally gave in. "Why?" She whispered over and over. "Why daddy?"
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Re: The Hunger Games #1 (my version)

Postby Host » Sat Sep 17, 2011 3:27 pm

Katniss closed her eyes sadly. She had to be strong.. For Prim and her mother. Speaking of her mother, she glanced at her. Her mother had not moved her position. No emotion shone on her face. Katniss sighed and grabbed the ripped envelope the letter had been stuffed in. She opened it and found a few gold and silver coins stuffed in it. She counted it out carefully. It only came up to twenty dollars.. And her fathers next.. No last, paycheck will not come for at least another week. Katniss bit her lip sadly. The lump in her throat was about to burst. She closed her eyes and took a deep breath. Suddenly, the tears streamed down her face. She thrust the coins at the wall and swung the door open, slamming it shut behind her. She stomped all the way to the family shed. She flung the doors open, not caring that it was locked. The lock busted easily. Just another thing to pay for. She closed the doors behind her and reach above her, pulling the string to the light. The light flickered a few times, but turned on. Around her was her father's sketch books and journals. The smell of him washed over her. She grabbed his jacket and pulled it onto her, comfort washing over her. She curled up and sobbed herself to sleep. Dreams about her father spread over her night. When she woke up, she had to think before opening her eyes. I must be strong.. For Prim.. For dad. Her eyes fluttered open and she pulled herself to her feet. She had long brunete hair that was tossed in a simple braid down her shoulder. Strands of hair stuck out all over the place. She pushed the doors open and walked into the light, covering her eyes. She walked strait into her house. The coins were still flung around the room where she had thrown them. Her mother had not moved from the bed, but simply just lied down. Prim was curled up next to her. Katniss carefully picked up the coins and placed them in the jar they had for their savings.
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Re: The Hunger Games #1 (my version)

Postby {{ f i a s c o }} » Sun Sep 18, 2011 1:56 am

umm... Isn't this kind of a copy of the first book?
So this is the new year
And I have no resolutions
For self assigned penance
For problems with easy solutions - DCFC



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GT: You know how you think you know
these things about yourself?
GT: Like all these personal attributes about you
as if theyre written down somewhere like a
sort of mini biography so they have to be true.
GT: So you just believe them and hope that
the believing is what makes them true.



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