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Dog Warriors

Postby CyberneticVampire » Mon Sep 12, 2011 7:51 am

Hi I Am Makeing A Dog Verson Of Warriors And Here Is Some Of It Injoy! :D CHAPTER 1
It was like any other day until Lucy heard some really loud howls and barks coming from the forest that was behind her house. She padded to the doggie door and wiggled through she still could hear the loud barks. She lifted her black nose in the air and sniffed there was a ton of different dog smells in the forest. She was just about to pad into the forest until Oliver stopped her “were are you going?” he ask her she looked up and saw Oliver “the forest”. Oliver looked at her like she was crazy “its dangerous” he barked “I’m just going to see what all the barking is about” Lucy told him calmly she was very brave for a house pet. Lucy smiled but Oliver frowned “well don’t say I didn’t warn you!” Oliver barked “well I better go” Lucy watched him leave “bye” she said when he padded off.
Lucy got off her hunches and padded into the forest she stopped at the entrance of the forest and gulped. She sniffed the air the scent of all the dogs came to her nose. She looked around she then saw a squirrel eating a acorn she lowered her body to the cold undergrowth and smelled the sweet smells of the squirrel. She watched it, then decided to creep closer right when she was going to catch it the squirrel it ran up a tree. Then bushes rustled Lucy stopped and looked around then a yellowish shape that lunged at her the yellow shape wrestled with her for a second. Lucy struggled and ran off to her house “I can’t run for long I must take the challenge” she mumbled to herself. She turned around and tackled the yellow shape the yellow shape hoped around and tackled her she pushed the yellow shape to the ground.
The yellow shape walked closer to Lucy she laid low to the ground with her fur standing on end. Lucy stared at the shape it came up to her “hey there house dog” the other dog padded around her “you put up a good fight for a tame dog” the other dog barked it sat next to her. Lucy turned her head ‘’I’ll fight you again if I have to!” Lucy growled “oh well I’m Sunpaw”.
Lucy stayed quite and listened “I’m training to become a Cloudclan warrior” Sunpaw said boldly and Lucy sat up next to Sunpaw. “What’s a house dog like you doing out here anyway?” Sunpaw asked sitting down “well if you’re the most dangerous thing the woods has to offer than I think I can handle it’’ Lucy told him. “Oh, I’m far from the most dangerous if I was half a warrior I would have given a intruder like you some real bad wounds to think about” Sunpaw said going into a playbow. “Anyway” Sunpaw began “I didn’t think I should hurt you I can tell your not from any of the other Clans” he said and looked at Lucy.
Lucy sat there “other Clans?” she echoed confusedly “You must have heard of the four warrior dog Clans that hunt if the forest” Sunpaw began boldly “I belong to CloudClan all the other Clans come and steal prey from our territory”. He stopped to take a breath and continued “Especially NightClan they are so fierce they would have ripped you to shreds. They come to take is rightfully ours so it’s the job of the CloudClan warriors to keep them in their own territory”. He stopped for a minute and began again “When my training is done I’ll be so dangerous all the other Clans will be shaking in their flea-bitten skins” he added darkly. Lucy looked at him “so you’re not a full warrior yet?” she asked Sunpaw looked over at her “Why you think I am?” he asked her then added “I will not be a full warrior for a lot of moons. I have to go through training first. Our pups will have to be at least six moons old to begin their training and tonight I’m out as a apprentice”. Lucy looked at Sunpaw “how come you don’t find a owner? There are a ton of house people that would take a dog like you in”. Sunpaw looked at her “Ew they will feed me hard pellets that look like rabbit droppings!”. He looked at her “No way I could not think of anything worse than living as a house dog!”. Lucy looked hurt but stayed quite then Sunpaw began again “they are nothing but twoleg toys! That eat stuff that dose not look like food, only sticking their noses outside when the twolegs let them”. He stopped for a breath and started again “That’s no life! Out in the forest its wild and free we come a go whenever we want. Until you have eaten a fresh-kill squirrel you have not lived. Well have you tasted one?” he asked her. “No not yet” she said sadly. “I guess you will never understand you were not born wild” he stopped and stared again “you need to be born with the blood of a warrior in your veins and you need to feel the wind blowing your ears. Pups born with a twoleg will never feel the same way”
Sunpaw stopped for a long moment the lifted his head “Oh, no I smell dogs from my Clan you need to leave!” he spat. “They will not be happy if the find you here hunting” Lucy looked scared “but I can’t smell anything” “hurry!” ordered Sunpaw. Lucy began running but a black and white male stopped her “what is going on here?” he ordered Sunpaw gasped “Flatstar” he bent down in submission a black and white male stood in their path then a brown male with a black chest sat next to him. “You should not be so close to the twoleg place Sunpaw” he growled Sunpaw got lower to the ground “I know Oaktail I’m sorry” he said sadly. Lucy looked at Sunpaw and coped him “and who is this?” Flatstar asked “she is not from the other Clans she is just a twoleg pet from far beyond our territories” Sunpaw told him Sunpaw turned to Lucy “that’s Flatstar he is the leader of my clan” he whispered to Lucy.
“And Oaktail he is my mentor that means he is training me to become a CloudClan warrior.” Sunpaw told Lucy. Oaktail smiled “Thank you for the introduction, Sunpaw” Flatstar began to speak “fight well for a house dog” he said Lucy watched him “we have been watching you we both wondered how Sunpaw would deal with a intruder.” Sunpaw smiled “okay now sit up now both of you” he ordered “you reacted well to the attack house dog Sunpaw is much stronger than you….but you used your wits to defend yourself and you also turned to face him when he ran after you. I have never seen a house dog do that before” he smiled.
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