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The Girl and the Dragon

Postby .Apocalypse. » Mon Sep 12, 2011 12:52 am

My first story on CS I wrote this for a contest but I'm probably not going to win so I decided to do my story here.

Kiara’s eyes glittered with curiosity. After she stepped into this wide cave, she had discovered something……An egg. A huge solid white egg. Kiara picked up the egg. I appeared to be almost ready to hatch. The young girl admired it, before deciding to keep it. Imagine it! Her very own pet! But her mother wouldn’t let her keep it, so Kiara decided to keep it in the barn. The barn was in the middle of the woods, somewhere her mother dare not go. Kiara smiled. She picked up the egg and shoved it in her jacket, which she zipped up and wrapped her arms around before dashing to the barn. She found what she was looking for, the abandoned eagle’s nest. Made of straw and lined with feathers, it would be a perfect bed for her new pet. Kiara pulled the egg from her jacket and excitedly lay it down in the nest. She climbed down from the loft where the nest lay, and decided to try and find more feathers for the nest, because most had blown away. She stepped into the forest, letting the birdsong and crisp air calm her as she searched. She spotted another abandoned nest, this one of a sparrow, but it must have been abandoned recently because all of the feathers appeared to be there. Kiara pulled them out, one by one, and placed them in her jacket. When she had stripped the nest, Kiara ran back to the barn to place the feathers in, only to find them even more necessary. A huge crack had appeared in the egg, and another was forming. Kiara pushed the feather into place and climbed up to the loft. She sat next to the nest eagerly awaiting her new pet. Another crack began to split the egg, but as the shells came apart, Kiara gasped. A small, white dragon was now sitting in her nest. It let out a tiny squeak. Kiara giggled. It was the cutest thing she ever saw! She scooped it up and cradled it in her arms, humming her favorite lullaby. The dragon slowly closed its eyes and fell asleep, letting out a squeak every time it exhaled. Kiara smiled and slowly lowered herself from the loft, careful not to make any noise. She slowly stepped ou of the barn and closed the doors. She made sure to wipe her face of emotions so her mother would not get suspicious as she walk home. As she neared her house, Kiara looked to the sky and realized it was already dark. Kiara slipped silently into her house and lay in her bed. Her breathing slowed to sleep as she wondered what was to come.


I will do chapter two if I get 5 comments!
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Re: The Girl and the Dragon

Postby .Apocalypse. » Mon Sep 12, 2011 12:56 am

No one?
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Re: The Girl and the Dragon

Postby katomorakwarrior » Sun Sep 18, 2011 2:21 pm

I like it. :D
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Re: The Girl and the Dragon

Postby no~body » Sun Sep 18, 2011 8:58 pm

I like it :3
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Re: The Girl and the Dragon

Postby .Apocalypse. » Mon Sep 19, 2011 3:49 am

Thanks guys...
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Re: The Girl and the Dragon

Postby LizzyTwoTwo » Mon Sep 19, 2011 9:55 am

me too, sounds really cool.
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