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The Tapestry

Postby NearSupporter11226 » Mon Sep 05, 2011 6:57 pm

The tapestry stares back at me in the hallway. The soulless eyes, strangely alive, heavy the air, making it impossible to tear my eyes away. There is a woman there. A woman whose face is so alike to a human, she's made me jump numerous times. Something about the way she stares unblinkingly into the empty wall is incredibly unnerving. Perhaps the second I looked away the eyes would flicker. Perhaps the second I left a voice would ring out from those all-too-perfect lips. The artist must have intended this effect. My heart pounds as I expect her to reach out and touch my cool skin. Her gaze weights upon my mind, triggering my fight-or-flight reaction. I must escape her perfectly symmetrical eyes. Must escape those perfect features that are but a tad bit off, enough to make my mind blur reality into terror. Her eyes have locked me in place. I rush out of the hallway. I’ve finally left. “Until tomorrow,” I whisper.
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Re: The Tapestry

Postby NearSupporter11226 » Mon Sep 05, 2011 7:27 pm

Please critique, I can use all the help I can get.
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Re: The Tapestry

Postby NearSupporter11226 » Tue Sep 06, 2011 4:33 am

...bump...
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Re: The Tapestry

Postby SketchedMoon » Thu Sep 08, 2011 9:09 am

bump :)
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Re: The Tapestry

Postby NearSupporter11226 » Sun Sep 11, 2011 10:58 am

Ba-dump.
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Re: The Tapestry

Postby NearSupporter11226 » Sat Sep 17, 2011 12:49 pm

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Re: The Tapestry

Postby Science Fiction » Sat Sep 17, 2011 12:52 pm

its good but i dont really understandit
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