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blizzard(please take time to read)

Postby chintz » Fri Sep 02, 2011 9:08 pm

hi this is a story i started to write at school and am continuing to write. i plan on making a role play about it.
(later i will put the blab here) this story is mostly about a wolf called blizzard

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roleplay is done here is link http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=7&t=764146


code word for roleplay is for me to know and you to find out. oh, fine here's a hint: titleisitthe :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: hahaha have fun finding it :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Re: blizzard(please take time to read)

Postby chintz » Fri Sep 02, 2011 9:12 pm

The icy wind howled across the ground. It pushed the soft falling snow into hard icy bullets, injuring any creature that dared venture out. Within this chaos, a thin, white wolf lied in a cave , her newborn pups snuggling up close to her, trying to keep warm. The next day the wild storm had passed. The wolf slowly walked out of the cave, careful not to sink into the soft, fresh white snow. She spotted a shadow-like creature in the distant. She cringed and slowly crawled into a near by snow drift. As the creature came closer she thought she reconised it. "Storm!"she shouted, jumping up out of the snow at the big, grey wolf. "Icicle"he replied, his sides heaving with effort. Icicle was so exited about seeing storm it took her a while to reconised the state he was in. What she saw haunted her memorys for the rest of her life. Blood ozing from deep gashes in his shoulders. His bleeding paws coloured his tracks bright red. The rare spots on his coat, not covered in wounds, was where snow tangled with his fur, all coloured blood red.
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"Wh,what happened?!"Icicle said, her volcabulary crippled by the horror she saw in front of her."It was horrible..."Storm started to explain but then he thought the better of it."Quickly, show me where you left our pups. I'd rather not be out in the open after what I've been through. Besides, I'd like to see them."
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"Their so beautiful"Storm said sighing"I know, young to. Less than 24 hours old"Icicle replied lovingly."So what happened? I mean, how did you get hurt?"
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Re: blizzard(please take time to read)

Postby chintz » Fri Sep 02, 2011 10:09 pm

((what do people think so far????????????))
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Re: blizzard(please take time to read)

Postby demi-fiend » Sat Sep 03, 2011 1:13 am

Its good,but I would work on the spelling.
Id join the RP,I wouldnt really keep up though.
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Re: blizzard(please take time to read)

Postby Glitzy » Sat Sep 03, 2011 1:21 pm

i like it
blab Teha! :lol:
3 names to not steal, TigerLilyWolf,..Electric Summer..w r i t e r

If diamonds are a girls best friend, why dont girls just come with diamonds?

hence why my name is glitzy


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Re: blizzard(please take time to read)

Postby Glitzy » Sun Sep 04, 2011 2:27 pm

also can i be icical
3 names to not steal, TigerLilyWolf,..Electric Summer..w r i t e r

If diamonds are a girls best friend, why dont girls just come with diamonds?

hence why my name is glitzy


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Re: blizzard(please take time to read)

Postby chintz » Sun Sep 04, 2011 10:17 pm

maybe cause i havn't even made it yet biffll
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Re: blizzard(please take time to read)

Postby Southern Speed » Sun Oct 02, 2011 6:37 pm

AWESOME
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Re: blizzard(please take time to read)

Postby chintz » Mon Oct 03, 2011 11:25 pm

thanks fozzie
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Re: blizzard(please take time to read)

Postby Southern Speed » Fri Nov 11, 2011 8:39 pm

Post more! Post more! Post more ! Lol
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