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{An Ahzenai's Tale} Weekly WIP

Postby Horneddragon » Fri Sep 02, 2011 8:03 am

ABSOLUTELY NO POSTING

~ If you have comments, please Pm them to me :B


~ This is an ongoing story, I add new pages/chapters to it weekly
~ It Is from the view point of my Ahzenai Kiyo
~ I know its a crappy title, but it needed one :B

you too can have your own Ahzenai! Follow this link to the home of the Ahzenai.


Meet the characters:
Kiyo
Lokeash
Amaranth

Table of Contents:

Prologue The Parting
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Re: {An Ahzenai's Tale} Weekly WIP

Postby Horneddragon » Fri Sep 02, 2011 8:04 am

{Prologue: The Parting}



I watched HD slowly pick her way down the steep cliffs, leaving both Ahzen and myself behind.
In My heart I knew this good bye was not forever, we would be apart only until she finished her schooling.
Even so I could not shake off the tears that stung my eyes and clouded my vision, or the terrible ripping pain that her parting left deep within my soul.
I sat back on my haunches, my eyes never leaving the gradually fading red-orange blur, that was all i could still see of her, I would hold this last memory with me until i saw her again.
Slowly her form faded completely from my site.
I continued to sit there, head bowed tears streaming down my dark furred face.
From those who passed me by, going about their busy days I heard murmured condolences.
I wanted to scream, I wanted to howl, but instead I just sat there silently taking in the pain, trying to make it all right, trying to heal the hole that had formed in my heart.
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Re: {An Ahzenai's Tale} Weekly WIP

Postby Horneddragon » Fri Sep 02, 2011 8:50 am

{ Chapter 1: All The Time In The World }

Time, time had flown by in a painful blur. I had become and numb statue, only the steady motion of my breath said otherwise. The tears had stopped, my eyes were far to dry, i could not cry even if I wanted to.

A Slight Breeze softly blew through the wide cave mouth. The heavy, and musky scent of rain and wet things slowly started to awaken me. It began with the second, as it washed over me It clutched at my fur with chilling claws. I shivered in response. The next was light and tickled at my ears like the breath of a long lost friend. I shivered as the memories of HD flooded back, Our first meeting, the travels to china, HD getting sick at Mardi gras , and our first encounter with Lokeash.

A solid resolve seemed to flow through my body as the rest of my memories of HD flowed through my mind, they played and danced behind my eyes, flowing through my core and warming me, turning my solid statuesque form back into the Ahz I once was. Slowly I stood, I could survive our parting, no I would survive out parting, HD could never forgive herself is something happened to me because of something so trivial as distance. I can do this, I re-assured myself. Slowly I turned
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